Jun 16, 2024
6.5/10
Imagine if you read a story with a good, wholesome, and well-written premise, but the author then decides “hmmm, this is too unique,” and he just throws the story in the trash by neglecting the premise completely and turns the story into a basic leveling manwha. Oh wait, you don’t have to imagine that if you have read this — seriously, there is so much wasted potential due to how the author just doesn’t want to include the fmc in any chapter.
Also within the premise, there’s some attempts of world-building, and other what-nots like the mc’s backstory, but it seems the author is a bit
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confused on what he wants to write — I mainly point this out because of the mc’s convoluted and jumbled past life/lives (?). The mc often references his current live’s past life as his own life, so he holds deep grudges, but there’s an entirely differently chapter addressing another life that has nothing to do with the game world, and blah, blah, blah — It doesn’t make sense, much like the rest of the story.
Besides for the premise and interactions between the fmc and mc, the story is just a generic mess of a leveling story, which is a large majority of the story or chapters, as the fmc appears every now and then and disappears for another 10 chapters.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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