Jun 6, 2024
7.1/10.
art 9/10 - there is good fanservice, interesting expressions, simple yet nice enough art. just my style also. cute and fluffy.
dialogue 6/10 - not sure if it was the translation error or not, but some dialogues were very disconnected and ambiguous. feels like they have no relation to the previous/next dialogue whatsoever. or my english comprehension at the mean time isnt up to par to understand. either way goes.
story 7/10 - simple premise yet how they executed it is very nice to see. dude remembers about his past life, met his past life buddies and stuff like that. doesnt overcomplicate things. though i
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am not a fan of how the story progressed, it is realistic and possible. past life is past life, its only used to build up the characters' relations, nothing more.
plot 6.5/10 - its rather straightforward, doesnt dilly-dally about. easy to grasp. i am not a fan of the ending, however. feels too unsatisfactory and ambiguous. being axed doesnt mean you can just rush it like that. very vague introduction of a guy who is supposed to be their enemy from the past life, in the very last chapters of the story. axed or not, its still a bad introduction. romance development felt kinda ambiguous, because the author changed the couple mid-story. well, it is a plot twist and i dont exactly dislike that.
characters 6/10 - the part where the girls act with memories of their past life as men is decently written. their personality feels rather tropey and cliche, though i dont dislike that.
Kotaro's character felt like its missing alot in the early chapters and rather bland. she talks and smiles energetically in some panels, and felt like a silent observer in some panels. feels bipolar.
Asahi's character is decently written. not bad.
and for the main character, Meguru is missing his presence in some chapters. feels it could be better.
supporting characters def could take it up a notch also.
it is axed and only got 17 chapters to work with so i'll give it a 6.
enjoyment 8/10.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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