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honestly, this wasnt as good as i expected it to be, from the score and 2 positive reviews. it is bad, average at best.
5.6/10.

art 8/10, honestly there is nothing special about it, typical manhwa artstyle with full color and a shit ton of accessories. many pretty boys and girls. very generic. though the FMC's design is cute + there are a lot of steamy scenes so 8 is deserved, i guess.

story 6/10, the premise is generic, nothing special, digestable. the structure is really bad, which we will go over it at the plot rating section, but the overall lore of the world is pretty ... decent and could be built into something good. with a billion time resets, different stories, a billion versions of MC, MC's mother, etc. it has potential.

plot 3/10, the structure and sequence of events is very poorly written. you have your generic encounter between male and female MCs, then for some reason they fall in love in first sight or something. im not saying that is bad, but the way it is written is bad. like, they crushed each other so quickly, but then acted like they are already lovers since forever or something. i dont see the small things that build up their relationship for it to feel like theyre truly lovers, husband and wife. instead we have this stupid villainess act that only serves as a very minor plot device for some chapters, then completely forgets it. like, 90% of the story she doesnt even act like a villainess, but the title has the word "villainess", and the ending! not cool! there is not enough villainess-ish stuff in this, they should have done some other stuff than the villainess trope.
Characters are dumped into the story instead of being introduced. so many unecessary supporting characters being added into the story so late they didnt even get a proper introduction. i think i have to read the novel to get the full story of them? really bad adaptation no wonder it only got 104 chapters, gosh, hands down one of the worst manhwa i have ever read. have it been 200 chapters instead i think this would have been good.
This manhwa is very plot-driven, but the sequence of events and the narrative is really, really lackluster. it just doesnt feel like the main plots and the subplots connect and intertwine, instead it feels like they wrote it in a half-assed way to focus on the fluff part.
pacing is terrible, events happening too fast and furious.

characters 4/10, the lead couple is decent but the other couples just really badly written. fell in first sight, in the frickin first chapter they met, no buildup to their love, just have fluff to bait teen girls into reading. nah nah nah. relationships between characters are badly written, on the outside they have good relationship and stuff but there are not much events and small interactions between them to solidify that bond and build proper emotional connection with the reader. plot takes so much of the story its insane, everything else is sidetracked.

worldbuilding is really really bad, but imo its a very outside, a very insignificant part of the series so i refrain from using this as a metric of my rating.

enjoyment 7/10, even though this is bad i decently enjoyed it. not to the point i would actually give it a higher rating than it deserves though.

6.5/10.

art isnt wishy-washy and generic like other manhwas, the character drawing has an amateur or simplistic feel to it. i actually prefer this style.
though the background is still overdetailed just like other manhwas, that contrast feels weird.

the story is alright. not too exceptional or new yet not too cliche.
the outside events progression is decent, it is simple enough and not too terrible, for a side element.
the side characters are, well, side characters. they get decent backstory and fleshing out even though their screentime is considerably short compared to the main couple.
could be better but i am not complaining.
plot ... isnt too deep, simplistic. not much to say about it.

getting to the romance progression. everything is solid, understandable and concise. though i had to reread some chapters to get the clear picture to not be biased by my current emotions skimping over the newest chapters.
not my cup of tea though, it feels too dramatized and fairytale-ish. but in another way it is good narrative. emotions usually hidden and thrown aside to get by in our cruel world gets fleshed out and clashed with each other in this fantasy story.
character development in Astina is really good, though, maybe Terriod's could get some more.

this could have been a solid 7.5-8, but i cant stand the pacing. too long. too little things happening other than just the couple interacting, dragging out. rereading chapters made me feel like they just drag things further for more chapters (the way they do it is still better than kanokari) and can be shortened considerably to help our attention span. i do not believe i need to full focus like playing a match in reading a manhwa. many details are easily forgotten because the pacing flattens my brain out, making the content really unmemorable or i am not attracted to this story in a manhwa format.
solid series though, romance enjoyer will enjoy it, probably.

bad.
tldr: art good
plot dogwater
character building dogwater
story ridiculous/underexplained
enjoyment no

alright, first off, the art is really good. i love it. characters look very expressive and beautiful, especially their eyes. costumes look really good too.
though i hate how the manga exaggerate the emotions too much, feels so soapy.

... but honestly, that is all it has.
first off, using the reincarnate trope just to easily insert maturity, knowledge and some character quirks to the MC. wonderful! lazy writing.
i dont get where they are going with this, the pacing is horrible, panels holding too much irrelevant info, i wonder if this even has a proper story or just BSing it while going with the slice of life.
wishy-washy, stereotypical, predictable from a thousand miles away, exaggerated.
everybody loves the MC, i mean sure, cool i guess. then how about actually making every characters do that instead of randomly giving depths to side characters? i only read until now to see whether if Rafilia gets anything good (spoiler she didnt, stupid)
arcs are boring as hell, almost no action, we know whats gonna happen, so anti-climatic. longass arc just serves as a lorebomb at the end, how nice.
the characters who loves the MC, namely the household people and Sauvel and the grandmother are a bunch of hypocrites. they just exist to fawn over Ellen and gets 0 sensible, imporving characterization beyond that. poor Rafilia.
and of course the kidnapping incident where Sauvel showed he loves Rafilia very much just to have 0 convo with her and the aftermath closure is some stupid BS breast size comparison between 2 brats. HAH!
totally ignoring Rafilia, what the hell even. i dont see the logic. connecting characters' relationships is just, bad.
and of course Ellen thinking not making contact w/ Rafilia backfired but then decided to do the same thing again.
the king's character is good though. i really like his character as an antagonist. or just anti-protagonist.
i forgot to say that the whole concept and premise of this story is either underexplained or just doesnt make any sense at all. spirits basically gods doing stupid shit involving with humans blah blah blah like cmon bitch 0 sense how that makes sense???
oh my god i just cant anymore, this whole thing is ridiculous and i find it really hard to digest, is it the source material that is this bad. or the manga narrating the story so horribly.

i even read the novel spoilers, and eughhh no thank you.
overall the characters have way too many flaws for me to enjoy.

ah yes, another generic AF dungeon descending manga in a pool of them. in modern day though, so maybe it is a bit rarer.

of course its very unrealistic, i just want to point it out. no series have ever been able to make a realistic modern dungeon popup scenario, maybe solo levelling comes close to that in a sense. but i digress.

characters are generic, bland, stereotypical, cliche, blah blah blah. definitely not a strong point of this manga. they are tolerable though. nothing hard to read. the comedy side is executed well enough.

so far there is no clear cut plot and just ... progressing, but maybe in the future this could build a good storyline. though i feel like its progressing pretty slow for me to wait, in order to focus more on the visuals.

the best thing about this is the art, everything is so detailed and the battle scenes are just amazing. definitely an eye candy.

originally i thought this was going to be like, OP AF protag with his summons and just blitz their way to the top in a matter of under 50 chapters. but its not. despite the summons being obviously cheat, they have nerfs that prevent them from making this series another boring and lame power fantasy. great job.

this should have been a 6.5 every day of the year but it has immense potential and the stunning visuals convinced me that it is a solid 7.5.

this is more akin to shitpost than literature.

the characters are all over the place, their development is incredibly ambiguous, support charas are incredibly dull, etc.
art is tolerable. structure is wildly different from a normal romcom. it might happen IRL but still, in a story, the progressions dont combine well with each other.
but credit should be given where its due. the exaggerated reactions makes this series seems kinda goofy and dumb, akin to a shitpost. fanservice is overused, but i am a big fan of kissing scenes. and it having a very casual storyline and plot structure makes this very easy to read. ...
that and the FMC is cute.
4.5/10.

3/10.

could have been good, but all is wasted in the face of incompetency.

worldbuilding even though not the main point, but for an isekai, the least you could do is have some introduction.

the narrative feels pretty dry, you have a brief backstory of how the MC became a serial killer, then straight to the main point, almost no delay, no establishment of the fundamentals of an isekai.

better yet, a serial killer, a man turned into a girl without any explanation whatsoever, like it is telling you that "haha blatant fanservice, im gonna make everyone a cute girl xdddd" mega skibidi brainrot.

the powerscaling ... is just bad, terrible lack of explanations that makes you wonder everything and indirectly leads to the reading experience worse. they keep retconning, like, 2 chapters per retcon. its just terrible. i dont think this is due to the translation quality. the writing obviously hides the protagonists' battle power for some no good reason, makes it really ambiguous and unenjoyable.

characters are insanely one-dimensional, shallow and archetypical, they do not act like real people. i know the main cast are full of terrible people but there is no logic, no consistency behind their actions whatsoever. just purely a bunch of douchebags thrown at your face, and that is sour as hell, not enjoyable at all, at least for me. their moral values are terribly skewed

plot is full of conveniences to progress the story further without any depth and intricacies to add up to it. its just like this: go kill - kill completed - 1 to 2 chapters of downtime - time to kill again. the pacing is just subpar. they made the 12 reincarnators the main point, the bosses of the game, yet the time it takes to kill 1 of them barely amounted to 5 chapters. i really dont like and dont think how the story is progressing is decent at all. its bad.

for a manga that makes the plot its main focus, it sure is terrible. there is nothing good left for me to enjoy. adios.

utter garbage. 2/10.
premise was good at first, but that is where it stops.
terrible series with 0 consistency and logic, write to fulfill your lame fantasies more than anything.
it did not go as i expected, honestly couldnt tell that the maid was the yandere sister because i expected something better and not that predictable. it was my fault though, for expecting something out of this.
you got a baby withstanding all that impact and fought that crazy battle? no way man. and to think the baby can handle that power while growing up being seemingly weaker with 0 explanation at all.
worldbuilding is terrible ... but it is a very secondary factor so i will leave it slide.
no shred of realism to it, why is a fucking minor yandere able to kill so many people and moreoever living with her brother, meanwhile their parents are dead? no explanation whatsoever not like theres any its just plot convenience.
introducing a goddess of reincarnation just as a stepping stone for the garbage thats coming, would rather they dont.
characters are terribly simple and 1 dimensional, generic, archetypical, robotic, side characters have 0 place in the story after their first introduction.
what is with the age though? we got the MC from treating the girl like a sister to lusting over her, a 7 years old kid. leaving aside the moral complications, where is the consistency? the good writing?
and they introduced us to a generic airhead girl that looks past her puberty with a good-looking body and face and she's 9. can the police just arrest the author already?
who in their right mind published this?
the age range is just terrible.
i want to write 300 more words describing how bad the MC is written but i cba so here is recap in one word: trash.
the only redeeming quality to this is the little fanservice. and that is not enough to carry this pile of trash.

tldr garbage that from an entertaining enough yandere sister setting devolved to a generic isekai trope. super LAME.

6.1/10

art 7/10, it is decent and is my taste. nothing more, nothing less.

dialogue 4/10 - honestly, i was so confused reading this. like sometimes the dialogues just dont connect, intertwine and support each other? or is it because i am inexperienced with this genre?

story 7/10 - nothing special really but since its the first time i have seen this type of story in a manga im just gonna give it a 7. solid.

characters 5.5/10 - what a waste of what could have been very good character development. it is still good, but the terrible lack of internal dialogues when it matters the ... most and how there are so many holes in their action that the manga didnt show, just makes it incredibly lackluster and irritating to read. the introduction of later characters (which is, near the end, btw) doesnt help improve either. just leaves more hole to be patched. 14 chapters are simply not enough to make it count.

plot 4.5/10 - the main events leading to the ending is predictable yet satisfying, it is solid. yet the horrible story flow ruined it all. keep adding holes that will left unpatched, very anticlimatic flow, progression is skewed beyond tolerability, sometimes good, sometimes bruteforced, etc. i dont care if its axed or not, it is bad and that is final.

enjoyment 7/10 - meh, most of the time i was pondering over how this could be so good had the dialogues been decent and there were 10-20 more chapters.

+0.25 for the immense potential wasted. what could have been a solid 8.......

7.33/10

art 7/10 - its very decent, simple yet expressive. no need for overdetailing. just simplicity.

story 7/10 - the premise is honestly very well-done. very in-your-face style but there are no complicated details. just a weird girl met a boy and asked him to have s*x..... better than alot of the same style of premises i have seen before.
after that its just slice of life stuff. not much to say, its solid.

characters 7/10 - solid characters. they all have a decent amount of realisticity to them. decent depths. feels very much like middle schoolers. all have their screentimes.

plot 7/10 - its a ... simple slice of life so theres not much complicated plot to it, its well done though. pacing is good.

dialogue 7/10 - good dialogues, easy to understand.

enjoyment 9/10 - good.

7.1/10.

art 9/10 - there is good fanservice, interesting expressions, simple yet nice enough art. just my style also. cute and fluffy.

dialogue 6/10 - not sure if it was the translation error or not, but some dialogues were very disconnected and ambiguous. feels like they have no relation to the previous/next dialogue whatsoever. or my english comprehension at the mean time isnt up to par to understand. either way goes.

story 7/10 - simple premise yet how they executed it is very nice to see. dude remembers about his past life, met his past life buddies and stuff like that. doesnt overcomplicate things. though i ... am not a fan of how the story progressed, it is realistic and possible. past life is past life, its only used to build up the characters' relations, nothing more.

plot 6.5/10 - its rather straightforward, doesnt dilly-dally about. easy to grasp. i am not a fan of the ending, however. feels too unsatisfactory and ambiguous. being axed doesnt mean you can just rush it like that. very vague introduction of a guy who is supposed to be their enemy from the past life, in the very last chapters of the story. axed or not, its still a bad introduction. romance development felt kinda ambiguous, because the author changed the couple mid-story. well, it is a plot twist and i dont exactly dislike that.

characters 6/10 - the part where the girls act with memories of their past life as men is decently written. their personality feels rather tropey and cliche, though i dont dislike that.
Kotaro's character felt like its missing alot in the early chapters and rather bland. she talks and smiles energetically in some panels, and felt like a silent observer in some panels. feels bipolar.
Asahi's character is decently written. not bad.
and for the main character, Meguru is missing his presence in some chapters. feels it could be better.
supporting characters def could take it up a notch also.
it is axed and only got 17 chapters to work with so i'll give it a 6.

enjoyment 8/10.