Jul 19, 2017
Alright, sorry to be a buzz kill everyone. Actually, not sorry the internet needs to know this. I was extremely disappointed. When I saw that Ueda Rinko was the author I was very excited. I read her manga titled Tsuki no Shippo (Tail of the Moon), and it was one of the best mangas I have ever read, but as I said on this one, i was disappointed. The art was great, and it could have been very interesting, but I feel as though the story needed more time to develop. Things were very rushed. The characters seem to be lacking a solid foundation for
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their feelings. All of the emotions they feel towards each other seems very unnatural because of the suddenness and unfamiliarity at the time of the confession. Furthermore, I had to drop this book six chapters in because nothing was adding up. I won't spoil it for those who might go on to read it, but there was a sudden unexplained shift regarding something easily fixable within the plot. In my opinion, this reflects bad writing, and I won't be giving this manga anymore of my time. However, I do recommend other mangas by Ueda Rinko I just think short mangas are not her strong suit and she just needs the proper time to organize her plot and characters this was very sloppy.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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