Oct 7, 2024
One? two? three? or perhaps even four? How many chapters does it take for you to get bored of seeing the same thing panning out again and again and again? For me, I am pretty lenient with these things usually; the key word is usually. This doesn't come in the usual. This comes in what we refer to as repetitive.
Story, and it takes the use of the most common and easiest route: working with a predetermined formula every chapter. And for this, the formula is the misunderstandings between both of our main characters. The premise has been taken as the sole blueprint of the story
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thus far, and I can nearly assure you that things will continue like this until even the average reader gets bored out of it, and then the author will decide to introduce some hastily made progression. How the chapter will draw out—you already know that before even opening the chapter, so all you are reading it is for a single endearing moment of our female protagonist blushing. That's it. That is the sole merit it provides if read. Any progress achieved is reversed in the next chapter. I seriously doubt you watch the same turn of events every chapter and still say it is comedy. No, its not. A joke is only funny the first time. The second time it becomes unfunny and boring; say it the third time and you are just being annoying. And it's not even like the jokes are certified knee slappers. The only thing I remember that makes me realise it is a comedy is the scene where she looks like she is about to kidnap him; it's somewhere in chapter 2.
Characters and their designs are decent. Our female lead's design is good, at least. Their personality is still too early to judge, but I can visualize that their development isn't happening any time soon. Female lead is the usual "I try to be affectionate but get misunderstood due to my actions." Male lead experiences the brunt of the behaviour of female lead and is often left scared at the end of the chapter.
Art and it is probably the sole reason it even is on the radar for some people and is being so heavily praised. The art typically benefits from the employment of several art styles, as it shifts between them based on the scenarios. Incredibly lovely and detailed to look at.
In the end, the author needs to drop the repetitive premise as soon as possible and establish a good plot if he wants the manga to succeed.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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