Dec 31, 2023
7.1/10
Out of all of the dumb erotica stories I have read, this is in the running for having some of the dumbest progressions and plot developments, but somehow this made the story better than it should’ve been.
The plot obviously follows the typical erotica developments with the mc getting more and more ridiculous “lucky pervert” situations and gathering harem/sex candidates like Pokémon cards, but with the trope of this manga, it readily accepts all of the hilariously bad situations. The plot is also sporadic at times with how the mc’s powers gets introduced and discovered, but because the story embraces all of the ridiculousness in
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an erotica, it becomes negligent at best.
The characters of this are as expected: stupid. With that being said, the mc isn’t actually op for once in an erotica, which makes the story somewhat interesting to read, since it focuses on his progression — though, this is also shrouded by some forced developments. As for the side characters, don’t expect much — most of them are used for sexual or comedic moments, but it’s still entertaining nonetheless.
To be honest, I do not think this story could have worked and been entertaining as it is if not for the art, since the characters wouldn’t have been as engaging, in one way or another, nor would have the plot and its developments come across as humorous as it was.
At the end of the day, this is a rather entertaining erotica despite a lot of its flaws that would be expected of a traditional and proper story.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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