Sep 30, 2023
7.7/10
Lord have mercy, this manga is the epitome of awkward cuteness. The characters provide a nice balance of the usual cliches and a light-hearted vibe. As for the plot, it’s somewhat real, barring the premise itself. However, the manga does lack some exposition in the setting, which is limiting this manga from a tier above.
The characters are initially infuriating and seem one-dimensional, however, they slowly but surely undergo developments revealed through subtle actions. Though the main character himself isn’t the most enjoyable person, with him being the usual “loser, awkward” boy, he does find resolve in a natural manner. The plot also catalyzes his developments
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through a non-handholding direction with rejections, attesting to the slice of life aspect.
Though the characters and plot are quite enjoyable, the manga lacks some setting or exposition; world-building isn’t the most enjoyable read, but it’s better than nothing; besides for the occasional school-related setting, there’s realistically no details that the author has set out and developed, which is quite disappointing.
Despite the main cast being high school (?) students, the manga barely has any mentions of actual school life, rather, it’s used as a background more than anything. Also, the extra details of each character’s school life would provide substantially more depth to each correspondent; for example, there are some chapters where the fmc is being sexualized by the author or background characters, which is incredibly awkward due to the fmc’s age being a mystery. An absolutely disgusting line used by a side character was, not verbatim but close, “I know what I’m going to use as material tonight,” which is absolutely vile considering the character that said it looked no younger than 30.
Initially a shallow, cute manga, it has its awkward or lackluster moments; regardless, it’s a wholesome read. Though the setting itself could use some work, the characters are nicely paced and engaged, making this pretty enjoyable.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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