Dokuhime

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Story
Great idea for a josei. The heroine's body is saturated with poison, preventing her from ever being with anyone she loves. Her mission is to kill the king of an enemy country, but he seems to be a decent ruler and his handsome sons further complicate the plot. It has horror elements, including her best friend being burned alive and the suffering she went through eating poison as a child.

Art
Beautiful art. The costumes are elaborate and the character designs are all distinctive. For once it's easy to tell all the characters apart.

Character
The heroine is compassionate and conflicted. She was ... the "crybaby" back home but is resolved to fulfill her mission and survive. Not enough of the manga is out yet to comment on the other characters.

Enjoyment
Dark, but very enjoyable. Great for anyone who wants a slightly more mature story.

Overall
This is a really great idea for a manga. I'm excited to see where the author takes it.

A girl who could never be free, a boy who was crazy, a boy who was perfect, and a protector.
The first chapter was confusing but it get's better around the third. It was sad, sweet, romantic, dark and just radiated hope.
Through the whole story you find yourself debating who your routing for. An incredible story of love and pain.

King Glandol had three children,
The useless child
The protecting child
The perfect child
Yet it is said that one among them will bring the kingdom to absolute destruction.

Lycoris is a princess from a kingdom with an evil queen who used to make what is pretty much called a poison princess (dokuhime) which are later sent to other kingdoms to destroy them.
Lycoris was sent to the kingdom of Glandol where the story takes place.

This romantic yet tragic story is really exciting to read, the victorian age never failed to make a good story, once you finish a chapter you can't stop reading. I like the characters a ... lot specially the way they think. Something that i really like about this manga and all Mihara Mitsukazu sensei's works is her fancy drawing style specially for females, she always changes their clothes and hair style and that's another reason you won't get bored reading the manga.
I really like the mangaka's works and Dokuhime is pretty much her masterpiece, and everything about this manga is awesome it really deserves a 10/10.

In the beginning. Once upon a time. It was a warm, Summer day. These three phrases have something in common: they all begin a story.

The beginning of the story is essential in many ways. What may be the most important is the way it hooks the reader. If a reader is not intrigued within the first few paragraphs, they feel inclined to satisfy their interests elsewhere. This is also why a synopsis serves well in portraying the story before the story has even begun. The key factor within all of this is interest. Interest in the story, its characters, and what a story has to ... offer as a whole.

Dokuhime is a story worth garnering interest.

The one thing that stands out is the aforementioned synopsis. Set in a fantasy world of kingdoms and monarchies, warring states and political jabber. The promise of a tale of misery and suspense; a girl who cannot love, as she is poisonous to those who draw near. Assigned with the task of assassinating the king of a foreign land through use of her poisonous fluids. Everything about Dokuhime sounds like ancient epics told through hymns. In parts, it feels that way, too.

The story is set up wonderfully. The characters are established (although the central character may be misleading at first). The art is suitably gloomy and somewhat gothic. Everything progresses the way one would expect, until the moment of assassination. From the very beginning, the graphic scenes come full swing. A woman being burned alive. The effects of the "poison princess" show through profuse amounts of blood regurgitated from the mouth. It's dark without being a spectacle. It's psychological without being overdramatic. These are only the first few chapters and they're fun to read.

If only it stayed that way.

Once the story has settled, it becomes complacent. It begins to diverge along a path that branches in every direction, introducing more characters and storylines that attribute these characters. Each chapter quickly becomes less about the dire situation that looms above to developing the relationships between the foreign kingdom's royal family, made up of male triplets, and the poison princess. It almost comes off as an "edgier" slice-of-life, with a bulk of the chapters focusing on character development and the secrets the royal family hides from the outside world. It progresses slowly, carefully planting the seeds of destruction that causes an uproar by story's end. The only issue is, will the reader find the ending as anti-climactic as I did?

While the pace of the story may falter, the characters within Dokuhime all exhibit interesting qualities. Note that I don't equate "interesting" to "likable." There are some stories that like to dump all of one character's dark past onto the reader in one sitting. Dokuhime, thankfully, doesn't do this. It approaches its character development the same way it approaches its story progression: slowly. The story is set up somewhat like a fable, prophesying destruction and chaos that involves the characters. This makes the characters a tad more interesting, as the reader begins to question which of them falls into which part of the prophesy. However, this only strengthens the characters by means of plot progression. The characters themselves leave much to be desired, especially the poison princess.

What begins to develop as the story progresses is the issue of romance. The poison princess becomes the driving force (to varying degrees) behind each of the three royal princes' actions. In fact, two of the three have a few scuffles over her through the accusation of jealousy. The fear of a female-pandering reverse harem quickly entered the confines of my mind. Thankfully, yet again, the path was ultimately avoided. However, the feelings of romance still bloomed in the hearts of each prince.

A beautiful girl who is actively trying to assassinate the king of your country. The same girl you hold hostage in your country to keep her in check. The same girl you force to submit to twisted, sexual acts for your entertainment. The same girl who cannot love, for her condition shall not allow it.

Why?

Dokuhime has a very dreary atmosphere, which is aided by its style of drawing. It almost bleeds gothic and psychologically aesthetic. The characters look as they should inside of a story within the Josei genre. The men are long, light, and reek of bishie goop. The women have long eyelashes and look like dolls. Add some traumatic sprinkling and Dokuhime has its own style. Though, one issue I had were with some of the action sequences. With the way the characters looked and the gore they had already shown up to that point, some of the more grotesque actions (decapitation in particular) seemed underwhelming. Almost as if the mangaka hesitated to show too much. That may explain why they showed only half of the poison princess's exposed nipple.

Despite its length, Dokuhime has a lot to show for its run. Had it not taken its time trying to pursue an unneeded romance aspect, the story may have felt a little more impactful. Despite its flaws, it certainly has appeal. It has that interest that makes it almost immediately immersive. Dokuhime could be described as a story that doesn't live up to its potential. Nevertheless, its current state is enough to read over many fans. If not with the grim plot, intriguing characters, or mind-boggling discrepancies, it appeals with its overall experience. In the end, most remember a story for its passion, rather than its objective achievements. Dokuhime just couldn't have both.

Dokuhime is a story, staged at a fantasy setting, and it's starring classical type of characters from setting like that, mostly focusing at the nobility. As the name of it suggest, we do follow through the story of one particular girl, which is a poison princess and we come to understand the gravity of this title in this world.

The story at the beginning is being added with lush strokes, and in wide perspective, although it does straighten up and focuses a small cast of characters later on. While I do appreciate the effort to weave and create complex ... and layered political story, I don't think the author managed to complete that, which do feel particulary misleading. The poisonn princess's interaction with the princes is the major focus of this work, where we can see quite misleading first impressions of them and interesting trope subversions, which I do considered as engaging, but I don't really think the relations were well established or developed. The actions of the main cast and their sumbolical and psycholgical implications also presents us with more layers of understanding their motives.
As a minus to the manga, I can say that the ending does feel quite rushed, so we can't say that most of the cast had conclusion to their stories, which is unplesant contrast of the grand storyline.

The art from this manga is very refined and elegant, you can tell alot of attention has been given into drawing and dressing the main cast, with their coats, furs, heraldic symbols and wears in general. As a general aesthetic they do look quite tall and slender, more into the female oriented style, which doesn't hinders the story.

As for the characters, I think conceptually they're great, and their setup is good. There is also one hereditary mystery concerning the princes, which does add flavor to the whole cast. What I do think is an issue though is the rush or lack of time spent honing the character's feelings towards one another, it's implied what they feel, but the romantic aspect of the story is quite undeveloped, which is a shame.

Overall I do think this manga is certainly worth it's time, it does presents us with an interesting mix of political and personal drama, romance, as well as mystery. It feels quite fast-paced, something which may feel good for some, and trouble for others, but it manages to keep the intrigue going until it's end. So if you're looking for non-orthodox story with twists, as well as interesting development for the cast along it's way, I do advise to give this manga a try, even though you might not be initially interested in the romance or Josei genre as a whole.

Vow, this manga sucks. It's supposd to be a josei, but i found a lot of horrible, awful cliches i unfortunetly see often in the 90s shojo titles and hated them. But take a look to what only the manga is.
The story is about traained assasins by a obnoxious queen to kill neighboor countries' king just because...the queen is evil. Just that, she raise little girls to be assasins, put in danger their lives and the kingdoms because she's just a hateful bitch. Don't search realistic motivations to characters, they just doesn't exist in this manga.
The main character, Lycoris, is a extreme doormant, passive heroine. ... Or i should say damsel in distress. She's supposed to be a trained professional assassin, but has a whinny emo teenage girl's personality, every monologue by her is tp complain about how she can love. I love when the female protagonist has such awful priorities. She could worry about her kingdom, the other girls they are training to become assasins like her...Well, a lot of stuff i found more important that nobody can kiss me. In the last chapters, she just let herself being loocked away and thanks the guy who loocked her away.
I think i said enough about our protagonist. Don't worry, there's characters more hateful in this. Like a dethroned prince that he's the worst Lelouch Lamperouge wannabe you'll ever see, the aforementioned bitchy queen...there's some nice characters, but they got few screentime and get killed quickly, while other characters you have to wait until the last three chapters to see them die.
The author must think character development means show flashbacks with every character's backstory, and made all of them look really sad and depressing to make them seem sympathetic to the readers. Well, that's not always works, specially when you put too much effort in the flash-backs, and don't develop the main story, and that's the case here.
Forced drama, cliches, horrible pacing, passive heroine...the story is a huge mess.
You must think, well, something good it should have, the art, for example. Okay, my dear friends, unfortunetly, the art belong to the school of dress porn that are completely useful to the story, with scenes like assassins that fight in a forest dressing as gothic lolitas. Anathomy is painful to watch, and the figures look static, withforced posses. The faces look really plain in some scenes, specially when they're crying, bleeding and smiling, and dear god, what sexy has a guy's face while forcefully puking?Someone can exlain it to me.
I just read this until the end because when i completed, i could just say: Vow, this manga sucks. Avpid it, there are so much better titles to read out there.

I'm not against melodramatic gothic fairytales with impossible premises, but this series is just dumb. Also, it's not horror, if you're wondering. It's a badly plotted political intrigue with dark, kinky overtones and a lot of plot-required dumbness, like:
* A deposed prince kept alive but not imprisoned or exiled, because Plot Needed It.
* A stupid, contrived and really dumb plan involving identity change that convinced me the author has never heard about regents, because I'm sure the characters would have.
* The water gate, which has half a dozen problems that don't really need to be explained to any person that has ever seen a barrage ... and the amount of work involved in keeping it. And let's not talk about irrigation, canals and the engineering problems of sending water out.
* The sincere lack of mothers, queens and consorts for all those men, and the absurd lack of nobility in a giant castle (maybe the nobles didn't support the new king and were mass-murdered, but this would mean their jobs would be taken by raised up commoner aides. And, yes, nobles have jobs, because running a country is hard work.), and let's not mention Where Does The Food Comes From, because that's such a common grievance with fantasy manga that I don't even feel like complaining anymore.

And then there is the extremely powerful trained assassin that sweats poison but never considers spitting on some guards and getting the hell away from everything. She's a doormat, which is expected from the way she was raised, but she's not even an interesting doormat, you know, with a cool pattern. I'm not talking about redeeming qualities. This story happens in an yandere nightmare of a setting, no one has redeeming qualities. I'm talking about doing anything besides existing. She thinks about doing things but stops at the first obstacle (which is usually one of the ikemen princes), does not react even when threatened, humiliated or tortured and calls that never giving up (which should throw away any possible interpretation of her passiveness as depression). In truth, it feels more like she's a gothic lolita doll, which is a shame for someone with such a cool power, but a mortal sin for a main character.

To be fair, though, the story (such as it is) is efficiently told, the narrative is fluid and the art is expressive, though stylized to the point characters seem to be posing for a photo half the time. It's just that nothing seemed thought all the way through, like the author was too invest on making things look cool to actually work the dense, dark, corrupt story she promises.


PS: Why was she wearing a corset to her sickbed?
PS2: I really recommend boiling water from natural sources before drinking, it kills most bacteria and parasites as well as evaporates several contaminants. It's ancient wisdom! (but not on this series)
PS3: The author coded power evil, which is a normal thing in manga, but I wonder if she noticed how she coded women-with-power as evil-without-redemption. This is some troublesome stuff to have inside when you are a woman.

The series is a gothic romance about a red head chick who is meant to kill the king of a neighboring country. That country (G) has 3 princes. All 3 that want to fuck the red head. Also their is death and other regular fucked up stuff in this series.

The red head is supposed to kill the king via poison. She is part of this country which trains women in the art of poison calling them poison princesses. It's messed up shit. Since birth they are given small doses of poison. Like in their milk. Or their bed sheets. To the point that when ... they are adult-ish They are basically a walking killing machine. The air they exhale is poisonous, their tears are poisonous and any body fluid that touches another person will kill them in a minute. Its fucked up stuff.

Now this all sounds awesome. And badass but its done so poorly. The series isn't even about assassination mission either Despite being the main plot point. The series is more about the 3 brothers with their own personal issues. The eldest being the crown prince. The middle child who is meant to taste test everything for the crown prince and the youngest who just fucks about but is also a mega genius obviously. Its more their story and she happens to be a caught up in it.

Honestly when this series stops being about the main heroine and more about the brothers in the later half is when this series got much better. Their is this political rivarly and assassinations against other people, a very tiny war arc and other historical bad ass moments. The romance felt incredibly flat. But it wasn't really the main focus anyway.

The first half kinda sucked though. Felt too edgy and they did this thing where you would see the same thing over and over again but in different points of view. So i read the same chapter for an entire volume and learned 10% more instead of the author creating just 1 chapter and explaining stuff properly. It also had the opposite in the very first volume where the author dumped tons and tons of exposition.

TLDR: 2nd half was better when they didn't focus on the princess. Overall it became much better. Was gonna give it a 6 despite the weak start but the ending was, cliche(?), or weak lets say. 5/10