Oct 7, 2023
6.7/10
I don’t know what to say about this manwha except for the fact that it gives off a weird ”vibe.” To further elaborate on this point, not a lot of things make sense in the story, nor is there much of a connection to the characters.
First things first, I need to talk about the age of everyone; because the characters are mostly ten years old, each “mature” or “serious” scene can’t be taken seriously due to the unreasonable actions + words of literal kids. Now, their nature may be excusable due to their upbringing/atmosphere, but it seems to be a plot hole instead. As for
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the mc’s backstory, there is virtually nothing. Because of that, it’s hard to form any reason on why we want the mc to become stronger expect for the fact that he’s the main character—that is my biggest issue with reading this. Of course, it doesn’t stop with the mc since many characters are introduced for the sole purpose of aiding or ruining the protagonist.
Overall, it’s a shallow story with not much to engage with except for the art.
PS: Most of my favorite mangas and manwhas include a weak to strong mc story, but they work so well because of an engaging story and the hardships of the mc; I am not bashing the story solely because of a weak protagonist.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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