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NTR/CHEATING

MC is a omega dating a girl cheats on her and loses his behind virginity with an alpha who also had never done it with a guy and they become friends with benefits until his heat is over then it continues, then stops and the omega finally breaks up with his girl because he hadn't been able to have sex with her since he started having sex with the alpha, CUTE you think YEAH RIGHT because once they start having sex again and kinda become a thing HE GOES AND CHEATS ON THE ML! At school he starts getting turned on and immidiately has sex ... with his friend who is also an alpha and they do it like crazy in the bathroom then the friend leaves him in there only to see the poor ML (maybe bf I skipped a few panels because I had a feeling this was going to happen but I think they were in a relationship already) and then he walks in to see his omega/bf on the floor basically naked with the other guys sweather covering him down there WTF, the first thing he tells his alpha/bf is "I thought I could only have sex with you, turns out I can have sex with any Alpha" WTFFFF!!!!!!!!

Not cute at all, a cheating bastard the MC is, dropped it after that. The MC/uke is a ugly character, and a cheater. Cheated on two people (again I think they got together at this point either way they were a thing)

There were still plenty of chapters left (it said it had 16 chapters even though on here it says only 7) I dropped it, and honestly I can't recommend it. It comes off as a ugly MC who can't keep his hormones in check same with the alpha friend of his and who knows how many other alphas. Typical omega story where they are just horny alphas and omegas, which sucks because it started off as if it would be more than that but nope.
Also the art is bad, like a 3 out of 10

BORING!! Straight up boring, but I do need to note TRIGGER WARNING - attempted suicide (a side character) where one of the main characters blames themselves for it which gives them lots of trauma, then suicidal & LOTS of death thoughts by the MC & ML incase you can't read something with that.

Second of all there is NO smut in the first book, there is a scene but it is out of no where and basically skipped over which hurts the story even more because there are sooooooo many questions! I only read the first book not the sequel which myanimelist put them together. ... The prequel is 6 chapters. The prequel was sooo boring I had to FORCE myself to finish it and skip useless dialog which by the way it will have a lot of as well as some nonsense poetry that the MC thinks of which leaves you confused, at first I thought possibly the translation but nope the author just wanted to be a random poet and make the story drag and leave you confused. There was really no real chemistry between the two, the MC spent most of the time thinking instead of talking to the MC, the other half was useless dialog by two background characters who work with the MC which add barely ANYTHING and in some scenes NOTHING to the story!! The author could have easily used those dialogs and pages to add more moments between the two main characters instead of nonsense!

Lastly the time skip...HOW LONG WAS IT!!!! We don't even get an idea of how long, and just the route the author took before the last
3 (maybe 4) pages was um??? WHAT? before the resolution of those 3 last pages it was hmmm. horribly executed and making the story even seem more pointless and not like the MC and find the story stupid the ending to the prequel (again the last 3 pages) made it better but still this story is one I have no desire to ever read again and I definitely don't recommend!

TW - rape/dubcon and the ML(seme) is a black/red flag (comes off as a yandare) , obsessed with the MC! (the uke)
THEY ARE NOT BLOOD RELATED! THERE IS NO INCEST, they are step brothers both have two different parents each, MC's mom married ML's dad.

Ones like this is normally not my cup of tea but for some reason I keep reading the updates of this one although it is a dark messed up one. The ML seems like he is a yandare who at first can't figure out why he is so interested in the MC, he hates that the MC hates him ... when he had done nothing to him cause this so he starts messing with the MC once he finds out the MC gets close to his "friend" whom he overhears talking & laughing with his friends about wanting to make the mc suck his d**k and then toss him aside like the rest because he isn't good enough for sex, the ML gets angry and punches that guy for bad mouthing the MC but the MC finds out and thinks that the ML is the bad guy because he doesn't know the full story, from there on the ML becomes obsessed with the MC and starts bullying him while acting innocent infront of others. The more the MC hates the ML the more obsessed he gets (which by the way the MC only hated the ML because of the stupid mother of his started praising the ML more and ignoring the MC, which isn't the ML's fault since he honestly just wanted to get along & be friends with the MC)
Finally when he realizes the MC likes a guy in their school and is super nice to him meanwhile being mean to him (the ML) he ends up hypnotizing him (after finding the hypnosis book in the MC's (the ukes room) thats where the rape/dubcon begins
it starts with the phrase "Lets play" and with a blow job which then turns into sex.

YES the MC eventually finds out what is going on when the ML decides to end the "playtime AKA hypnosis" right as they are both about to cum while having sex & still being inside the MC, and the MC gets shocked at the situation and this is where the dubcon and then consensual sex starts, after the realization of what happened they both continue to have sex while the MC cries but doesn't stop him (the seme) then they continue some more and the MC doesn't try to fight him anymore but instead consents without any hypnosis. This part had us a bit confused because by this point the MC in consenting and no longer under hypnosis, instead he realized and remembers everything that happened while under hypnosis yet didn't punch the MC and instead consents when the ML wants to have sex with him and they even go on a "date" which is cut short because they then go have sex since they are both turned on. this goes on for a bit then BOOM one night the ML finds the MC throwing up and he hates seeing the MC crying and puking in hiding which he realizes that the two parts of the MC are fighting each other the one who was under hypnosis and the non hypnosis one that hates him so he feels bad for the MC and makes him forget by hypnotizing again to make him forget everything, this time he no longer has sex with him or rapes him, or puts him under anymore hypnosis. This is where the MC begins to desire and dream of the ML and truly want to have sex with the ML because he feels super horny & has a itch that he can't reach/scratch. He gives what he thinks is still his virginity to the ML (again no longer being hypnotized and is FULLY conscious and aware of everything going on)

So do what you will with that, whether this is not something you feel comfortable reading or if its something you can.
Again it is a dark plot not sure if it will turn into a love triangle since the MC just started dating the 2nd male lead however they haven't had sex so far

The art is good, the characters on the other hand hmm. I didn't love them but I also didn't hate them, the MC is a golden retriever top/seme and the uke/bottom is more of a black cat mixed in with some golden retriever energy. Their romance didn't feel cute, if anything it felt out of nowhere perhaps because the author didn't really show scenes of them actually talking and getting to know each other it was more a "let me feed you BAM feed you again and again and again" and now the ML likes the MC
So the romance was lacking however it isn't a ... bad read if you don't have anything to read and don't want something crazy or toxic. This has no trigger warnings and the MC (the seme) is a green flag

Also no love triangles or toxic characters or dubcon or even NTR!

So the story is unique however I could not take it serious with every female character being drawn with "MOSCA" eyes (fly eyes) like the artist didn't even try to draw good eyes on the female characters. They did a nice job on the MC and the evil old MC (the evil main warrior guy) yet said "Nah y'all get no special treatment"

Second the flow of the story started off good but then by chapter 6 it's just BAM we on to the next fight which you won't be able to take serious because again FLY EYES!! Why did they have to draw them ... so huge, it's like some 13 year old drew them as well as a majority of female characters.

Maybe I'll pick it back up some other time when I'm more in the mood to not be bothered by the bad art but for now this story just isn't entertaining enough to make me look past it since it started good but VERY quickly went meh

What is the use of tags if myanimelist doesn't add Harem!
If it weren't for another comment mentioning this is a harem and me skipping ahead to verify I would have wasted more of my time.

That said it starts off interesting but by the 6th chapter the MC is cringy, he keeps sticking his tongue out, simmer down son this ain't a BL, he keeps smirking weirdly. It starts off with him being betrayed however saying he was the one who wanted power and that at least that was the story that was told, immidiately I said YES REVENGE, but the more we see this ... MC talk...was he really betrayed or were they just tired of him and his cringy personality?!

The typical demons, angels and deities theme and it took a bit of almost every unique and famous fantasy story ORV, solo leveling and a few others.
Nothing special and the art is good but that is it. I read a comment where someone mentioned it goes down hill from chapter 40 an onwards so read at your own risk. You aren't missing out on anything good.

TRIGGER WARNING - DOMESTIC ABUSE & possible as well as attempted human trafficking/forced prostitution/blackmail

The main story between the two was cute and good until the ML's (the ukes) ex shows up, the ex who used to physically abuse him and choke him until he passed out, it shows some scenes in flashbacks a few times so warning for that, however later when they meet again he tells the ML that he told his friend about him and he is going to hand him over to him so he can have sex with him (forced human trafficking) which means it was possible a thing he did ... to the ML as well since the ML had mentioned something else about bad taste in men and how they hurt him and used him, not only that but the ML is stupid as well as the MC for not communicating more and then the ML going to meet that ex again because he "was scared for the MC" and he almost got raped again, thankfully the MC arrived at the hotel just in time to stop the door from shutting as the ex had dragged the ML inside. Now the stupid part on the MC is for not talking to the ML that he was working a case against the ex which had also abused other ukes one which comes forward and tells them how he choked him out so bad that he was about to pass out. The reason this was rated a 3 was because all that build up just so the ex can get away with being abusive and have some pathetic story of "Oh well his wife left him and cheated on him too, as he was cheating and now he is taking care of the girl so lets just gather this evidence talk to him and keep it incase he does it again and bothers you" and just like that the ex has magically changed his heart and loves his daughter and leaves the ML alone what??!!!!! NOOOOOO what is the point of adding that nonsense of "building a case against him" if all you are going to do is just threaten him and then write him off as a changed man even though he used to abuse the ML and had abused many other ukes, as well as forced the ML to sleep with other men or at least planned for it to happen. Noooo someone like that should not get a redeemed story where he gets to be happy with his daughter, who knows if he will hurt her later on.

The author should have just stuck to a simple BL story and not one with Domestic abuse/violence since they clearly can't write a good closure for it.

Utter trash ML, and trash story. He bullies the MC and keeps bothering him and making his school life hell, at first I thought "Oh he is a stupid ML that loves the MC but doesn't know how to show it so he acts like some stupid elementary school kid who bullies their crush"
but WRONG! He has sex with women, and purposely got the room next door to the MC and has sex with some girl making sure he is loud so the MC can hear WHAT!!! I dropped it after that, there is no redemption after that.

The art on the other hand is ... okay, nothing special.

TW - for volume 2- Child abuse, rape/grooming (shown in past scenes) , prostitution, NTR (MC messes with another guy twice) stalking, breaking an entry, and someone gets stabbed.

This has some serious NTR, I read the first 3 chapters and they were good, the plot was OHHHHH revenge lets see how this turns out but then I saw the japanese raws up to the last chapter and used google translate to translate some of it.
The gist of is back and forth nonsense where they clearly want each other but both keep pushing each other, then a two NTR scenes where the ML (SEME) walks ... in on the MC (UK) getting jacked off about to have sex with a fellow host member and the freaking MC walks out into the balcony to let them finish, then a cut scene so who knows if the MC did it with the other guy because by this point he is laying in the same bed but now fully clothed while the other guy is in the shower yet the ML walks in and lays next to the MC...uhhh what...
THEN later on again after the MC and the ML take a mini trip to a spa resort they start making out about to do it but then the MC pushes the ML away because of that annoying girl that will keep getting in the way until the final chapter of the manga, (she was the ML's sex partner in the past and up to ch 1 and maybe some more later on) so they don't get together or have sex only mess around up to that point where the MC pushes the MLM away. then later on the MC is once again talking to that host who he was going to have sex with (probably did, the one where they made out and jacked off the MC naked) and then a quick cut scene to both of them in the bath, the host is washing the MC's hair and then he starts jacking off the MC again and then is about to give the host a low job but instead the host starts rubbing his dick in the MC's nipple until the cums all over the MC and his face. Leaves the MC some hickies and purposely shows the ML those hickies by pulling the MC's neck shirt area down. That's not even all the drama, there is more, stalking, prostitution (rape & I guess grooming on the ML's end -the seme) which is later talked about

This is just a drama filled manga, don't bother reading it if you want something lite or cute. Not worth the drama ugh It had potential if they just kept it a revenge story.

Honestly this was boring, the art is okay but the personality of the MC is boring, the uke is also boring but at least he is a bit brave in asking the MC to start dating. Aside from that neither of the characters are lovable, and it seemed to focus more on the MC and his manga job as well as his inner dialog in terms of thinking about his work, the manga and boys love as well as two 3 different characters that weren't the ML.

It was so boring and long that I had to skip that inner work dialog towards the end ... of manga, as for the main romance it didn't even feel like love it was just bam out of no where that he loves the ML, we don't even get cute moments that leaves you feeling warm or root for them. If anything one moment where they kissed a second time but that ended so fast and then it was kinda brushed off like nothing.
We get a side character that is a girl who seems to like the ML but then it seems she likes the MC but then it seems she likes gay men in a relationship which by the way the misunderstanding with her was NEVER talked about or cleared up.
Then the confession where they end up together didn't even feel like a confession, it was so fast and lacked emotion.
The problem in chapter 3 also was quickly discussed off screen it's just cut to them finishing that talk. All of this could have been shown if the author hadn't spent sooo much time with the inner dialog about his job that made the story boring.