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7.4/10


This manga is an absolute rollercoaster of emotions due to how much potential there is within the premise, but the author somehow just barely misses the mark of obsession and interest; however, the manga is still entertaining nonetheless.

If I were to describe the experience of reading this, it would be interest to boredom to nearly dropped and finally interest once again — there’s one reason for this: THE PLOT IS SO SLOW. Yes, I love a well-maintained and slow-building plot more than anybody, but when developments are so slow to the point where it feels like eighty percent of the chapter was wasted, then ... is it truly good development?

Anywho, with the plot being so slow, the charm of the premise is sorta lost, so the plot should be the saving grace, but it’s all pretty predictable — however, once the author starts driving development with the main cast, the manga picks itself back up again, giving you those heart-touching moments you’d expect from this caliber of a story.

The characters of this manga are mediocre — I know that all of them have to be stereotypical in order for the story to be “hee-hee, haha relatable/connecting,” but the characters rarely act outside of their premise, so this causes it hard for them to be sympathetic towards. To add to that, the mc is .. pathetic? Though, he does start acting more like a main character in the later chapters, and his input/actions towards the fmc is kinda a “proud” reading moment.

This review is getting a bit longer than I thought, so I’ll sum up some other main points: The art is crude — so crude that it’s hard to set the mood right at times. Along with that, the comedy, which you’d think would be really good, is bad to mediocre — instead, the story is much better when it’s story-based than comedy. The dialogue between characters are also incredibly wordy, and I honestly just skipped half of the filled pages because it’s just non-stop yapping.

Though I dogged on this manga quite a bit, the premise of this manga is too good to not like, and it’s relatively rewarding in the later chapters despite some “dead” moments of interest due to the lackluster comedy and emphasis on side/minor characters. Once this manga focuses on the dynamic and development of the mc and fmc, the story starts picking up, and it’s basically the sole incentive to keep reading.


Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”

The blend of comedy, romance, and school life is refreshing, making it an enjoyable choice for fans of the harem comedy genre. While some plot points are predictable, the storytelling and humor keep it engaging and fun to read. The character designs stand out, with Anna Yanami being especially memorable, her design is unique and adds to the charm of her personality. The art style fits the story perfectly, bringing energy to both lighthearted and dramatic moments.
Characters feel well-rounded, they have strengths and weaknesses that make them relatable, and their reactions to events are grounded in reality. Fans of romance-comedy with a school setting will ... likely find this series captivating. As it's still ongoing, the anticipation for future developments adds to the excitement!

I started reading this right when the first episode of the anime aired because I generally tend to prefer manga over anime and thought the concept was pretty interesting, Having now watched the anime, or atleast the episodes that have aired (which have gone beyond the most recent manga chapter) I can now confirm what I felt was missing from the manga. You can tell while reading this manga that the story itself is actually pretty well put together, the side characters and even our loner mc have a ton of personality. The tone is light hearted and bubbly and the settings in which the ... characters get together feel a lot more auhthentic than what you normally see in highschool stories like this. The major reason for this is that this story actually considers the relationships its characters have outside of the main cast. It feels more like a living world and less like a setting for the drama of the main characters to commence. That being said the manga iteration of this story is missing a part of this charm. The art is fantastic but the subtle character moments that really makes the anime so endearing are lost in the transition from light novel to manga. They make the main character too much of an outcast in the manga, the chemistry between him and Yana isn't as fun, the other characters in the main cast also don't have the same chemistry as they do in the show, the weirdness of the president is turned up to eleven, you loose the subtleties and are left with the extreme character traits which does this type of story absolutely no favours. Granted I do not know how this is in the light novel, but seeing how the anime does it I am inclined to believe that the manga is the outlier.

Overall I would say that this manga is above average on its own, but inferior to the anime adaptation and likely also inferior to the light novel it was adapted from. Solid concept with a unique vibe though. Try it and form your own opinion.