Tenkuu no Shiro wo Moratta node Isekai de Tanoshiku Asobitai

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The art is really good. The characters are quite detailed, golems are quite detailed, backgrounds aren't bad. The manga uses CG for some backgrounds (and objects), but it is handled well, and it is not really noticeable unless you start looking for it.

The idea has incredible potential. I mean, a flying magic castle under protagonists's control. There are so many things that could be done with that!

But, the Story and Characters. By the Elder Gods, they're are truly awful.

The story goes for simplistic drama in the worst shounen traditions, and every character close to the MC is incredibly, irredeemably naive and pretty much stupid. MC ... is also naive to impossible degree and displays the typical qualities of shounen protagonist - meaning he is saintly and is truly outraged by every evil in the world, displaying life experience of a newborn.

Pretty much every "good" guy is a blundering buffoon, those people try to go on important mission, then screw it up due to being overtaken by some emotion at a drop of a hat, then are saved by some contrived deus ex machina.

I managed to last 23 chapters reading this, but then I could no longer stomach it. it is a pity, because with this visuals and this idea, someone could've created something amazing.

I'd recommend to skip it. Or you could try first few chapters and see if you can stomach it.

4/10 story, 7/10 art, 3/10 character, 3/10 enjoyment, 3/10 overall.

The concept had potential, the art is solid and world building is good.

What I like, the main character gets a freaking self-sufficient floating island with a lot of "iron-man" robots to support his daily need and protect him. I was hoping some kind of bigger plot or take onto the world with such over-killed gift from god to our MC.

Sadly, our main character Daiki Shiihara is your typical boring protagonist who doesn't want to do anything, he has no motivation, no will, nothing. Even the Lazy dungeon master manga protagonist has a bigger motivation then this one. Astonishing isn't it?
The side character are what drives ... the story, since MC is just non-existent. His robots has more personality despite having no way to express themselves.

The story seems to revolve around NPC giving quest to NPC and they are the one driving the story without any need of our protagonist.
Daiki is here to just be the "higher" moral ground on something and forcing his ideal of justice without real care.

The world they character live in seems to be a pure dystopia on the brink of collapse since a lot of the logic and motivation of our antagonist don't really make sense.
This world would have collapse and self corrected itself with time without the need of our MC.
After 40 chapters, the story has barely moved on. 4 years of publication and the plot isn't progressing at all, what a drag.