May 31, 2021
I read 6 chapters and I couldn't continue any further. It's not the setting, nor is it the over-saturated isekai cliche tropes that did it for me, but the fact that the pacing is just horrible. I feel like i'm reading ADHD in manga form.
The story just jumps between random expositions and really makes you feel annoyed at how they're just shoving all this information in so unnaturally. The way time progresses too is just horrible, you think something is about to happen, nah, a few days jump cut please, oh they've been invited to stay the night at the princess' estate, nah don't
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need to see any of that, lets just be gone out of the town already. It just feels weird and wrong in terms of story flow.
You know, there might be a gem in the rough here, but I just can't stand it from a literary point of view, not worth your time if you actually want to enjoy what your reading.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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