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Oct 2, 2014 3:38 PM

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Takuan_Soho said:
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From an anime only perspective, I want some of the defenders of this to tell me what the GAA is good at or at least name some good people (ability or personality wise) from there.


They are very good at launching surprise attacks on the Japanese (who are definitely are the "boke" of the GAA/ Japan combo), forcing them to rely on Tatsuya for their survival.

And the "Golden Silkworm" technology was said to be very good.

And everytime Lu Gonghu lost it was because he was outnumbered, and in each battle it was implied he would have beaten any single opponent except Tatsuya had it been one on one.

And despite being outnumbered and outgunned, the GAA strategy would have worked had it not been for Miyuki. The GAA commander had managed to infiltrate into Association despite all the setbacks that the raid had suffered.

So there are 4 things.

And Zhou, despite hating Japan, showed that he was a good person by protecting that girl when it would have been better for him to have let Lu Gonghu eliminate her. So not all foreigners are bad. Oh, should also add that even "No Head Dragon" didn't want to kill people despite the fact that their lives were at stake. They showed enormous patience in playing around the edges until Tatsuya forced their hand.

And all this in an animation that cut out around 85% of the novel's details, stripping things down to the bare minimum necessary to tell the story. Given how all video likes to have simplistic heroes and villains (e.g. SAO), I think the animation did a pretty good job at not taking the easy way out.


And don't forget Meilin Richardson (Lin), who despite being the daughter of the head of NHD, ended up being a very good and open-minded person.
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I'm Chinese and I think the people that keeps saying Chinese this Chinese that are more racist than this show, so all I have to say is 几个死鬼佬在对骂有意思吗.
Oct 3, 2014 3:59 PM

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it's not propaganda, "racism" or anything close...

It's just that the Japaneses use the Chinese as generic bad guys the same as say the US uses Russia (and sometimes China and North Korea) as such

you can find the same thing pretty much anywhere... go to any country and their media will occasionally use whatever other country they have been at odds with a bunch in the past as generic bad guys...

now-a-days you see it a little less because of the P.C. a-holes so they use safe universally acceptable bad guys like terrorist, nazis, zombies, nazi zombies and so forth
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Oct 6, 2014 7:06 AM
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deadoptimist said:
An interesting thread. I'd say that it is, most definitely. Mahouka is based on a worrying set of views. Since it is a fictional universe the author could've chosen another country as the main enemy, not the one Japan of today has problems with, or at least could've distanced GAA from real China.

You identify the decision to chose choosing a country that's relateable though fictional as a "worrying set of views"? I think there is a significant difference between a "set of views" and the decision which antagonist to use and what focus to employ. Mahouka does not go out of its way to establish the chinese as sympathetic deep characters whom everyone can empathize with, that's true. But that is because it's simply not necessary and superflous from the perspective of the narrative. The chinese are, from the perspective of the narrative, not important, they do not need to be established as sympathetic characters, because it's simply not about them. One of the key principles of story-telling is to only tell what pertains to your story, because any act of story-telling is insanely, incredibly, monstrously selective.
You argue that Mahouka could have selected a fictional nation, but it did. The GAA is not real, and to distinguish between reality and fiction is important.
If we ignore the distinction and transfer the suspension of disbelief into reality, we might then argue: Who could have been chosen?
If any real country is chosen, the same argument could be made. Sweden? -> Mahouka is against swedish people. Invent a not real-group? The Central-European Alliance with switzerland at its hand? -> Mahouka is against european people.
So essentially, your argument would demand an absolutely fictional nation that is in no way relateable to any real group. So we call them the Tork, and make them Aliens, so that no one can claim they're africans, asian, european or anything else. -> Mahouka uses cheesy antagonists from space - like any other cheesy series. Where would we place it? Somewhere else on the world or somewhere in proximity? If some distant place -> Mahouka is so stupid. That nation is on the other side of the planet, why would they target japan? Ridiculous. If someplace close, it would be where usually another nation is. -> Mahouka is so stupid, aliens live where the chinese used to live? Now chinese have become aliens or where taken over by aliens? So stupid!
So ultimately, you'd have to craft a unrelateable fictional opponent in a fictional, unrelateable world where the protagonists are from a fictional, unrelateable nation. Hello Argevollen.
If we follow this sort of criticism, it would eliminate any sort of alternate world fiction, because inspired but fictional is too close to reality. Someone from some nation will be generally be unhappy. If only Mahouka-Japan would exist and anything else were fictional, people would take offense at that too, saying "So Japan now has its own world and no other country is important, huh?".
deadoptimist said:

Those that argue that it is not reality and hence can't be considered propaganda, are mistaken - propaganda is even more effective, when introduced through mediums, that are seemingly non-political.

The problem is you're mixing truth with belief too much.
What is propaganda?
It's easy to identify propaganda as propaganda from the outside when you have something that clearly is propaganda. Yet when you isolate criteria, look at the mechanics, the problem that has persisted is that ultimately, anything and everything could be considered propaganda. Even if you craft an entirely fictional world, if the values, moral sets or opinions are relateable to some culture, if will be seen as offspring of that culture. Imperialist nations in space with democracy? Must be america. If it's a successful system in the fiction -> intends to inspire people to follow those principles in the real world to also craft this world. If it's not successful but protrayed as harmful -> criticism against that sort of system, transferable to the real world counterpart that employs similar values (in this case, 'merica), and thus a criticism of america.

Is it possible to write a story where no clever man can find something that could be considered as propaganda?

If you would define Mahouka as propaganda work, or heavily influencing, which factors that are universally applicable would you identify for it?

Can they be transferred and used on other works and correctly identify whether they are propaganda works or not?
deadoptimist said:

On the other hand it can be a good lesson for those that are accustomed to the propaganda of their own country, for example Americans - their is the strongest at the moment.

That's not exactly true. In fact, the two nations with the strongest propaganda machinerie are china and russia, because they go beyond forging ideas to punishing non-confirming ideas and eliminating them. The US isn't quite there yet, though between Prism and the NSA, they're just a step short of prohibiting non-confirming beliefs on similar scale.
deadoptimist said:

I respect the Chinese, because they are really attentive to such things now. From what I know, they try to oppose attempts to portary them as cardboard villains.

The saddest part of it was that the Chinese badmen in Mahouka were somewhat dehumanized. I've seen good moves about WW2, where nazis were shown as interesting and often very talented human foes, it's much more interesting this way.

Edit: Though the yellow eyes of the GAA's magicians were beautiful. XD

There are such movies? I've never seen a WW2 movie that in some way humanized nazis. "Saving Private Ryan" seemed to do so for a bit, but eventually concluded that "a best nazi is a dead nazi".

In what way are the "chinese badmen" dehumanized? Can you provide specific scenes and arguments why such characterization is not just flat characterization or stereotypical characterization (of villian archetypes) but specifically dehumanizes?

I had a similar discussion with wrenchbread, where he ultimately decided not to provide any of his endless amount of examples that he said he could show me. I'd rather argue and discuss on the basis of actual evidence in the text, not subjective perspectives or personal interpretation.

Edit: Wrote this a bit quickly. I removed some misspellings but I'm honestly to busy to go over it in detail, so please be lenient. ;)
Oct 6, 2014 4:20 PM
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Man, This argument is a little stupid at some points. I personally think it was NOT racist or a form of propaganda because many Japanese characters are displayed as fairly morally corrupt individuals which to me seemed a lot worse that how they displayed the GAA individuals, who were just typical wartime enemies apart from Lu Gonghu who I actually thought was pretty cool. And they were displayed the way they were BECAUSE Mahouka is from Tatsuya's perspective.

People need to remember that all emotion is SUBJECTIVE, how you feel about this is based on your OWN emotional upbringing.

But as someone who has very little empathy, because I have aspergers based on facts from the sorce no this was not racist or propaganda.
Oct 6, 2014 9:12 PM

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kuraiken said:
I had a similar discussion with wrenchbread, where he ultimately decided not to provide any of his endless amount of examples that he said he could show me.


You could've easily done without mentioning me, but I'll humor you.

I didn't answer because you've proven in your posts that you're a waste of my time. One doesn't need to be neck-deep in shit to smell it. Take a hint, man.
Oct 7, 2014 7:50 AM
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wrenchbread said:
kuraiken said:
I had a similar discussion with wrenchbread, where he ultimately decided not to provide any of his endless amount of examples that he said he could show me.


You could've easily done without mentioning me, but I'll humor you.

I didn't answer because you've proven in your posts that you're a waste of my time. One doesn't need to be neck-deep in shit to smell it. Take a hint, man.

For someone who's time I'm not worth (and who spent, according to himself, almost decades debating this topic on this board with others) you sure spent a lot of time reading&replying.

Curious.
I've proven I'm not worth your time by disassembling your points, making serious arguments, asking for concrete, factual evidence on the basis of the text and by not simply allowing the discussion to be reduced to an argument where both sides scream the other side is wrong on the base of absolutely no evidence?
My, how hurt my feelings must be that I could not live up to your great expectations.
Oct 7, 2014 3:46 PM

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@ kuraiken

I think you've won the argument since he's insulting you personally now instead of arguing back :)
Oct 7, 2014 4:18 PM

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Whatever makes you two sleep a night.

Edit: Legal proceedings might work that way, but arguments? Shitty arguments are still shitty arguments.
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wrenchbread said:
Whatever makes you two sleep a night.

Edit: Legal proceedings might work that way, but arguments? Shitty arguments are still shitty arguments.


And you are intimately familiar with such arguments since they are your stock in trade.

As someone who is sympathetic to those wary of Japanese propaganda (and who HAS read Japanese manga propaganda which is pretty common) I would be on your side if I honestly thought Satou was such a person, but in reading the novels I know his type. He is the the Japanese type that voted Japanese socialist party. The fingerprints are all over his novels.
Oct 8, 2014 6:19 AM
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darkreaperix said:
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I think you've won the argument since he's insulting you personally now instead of arguing back :)


But I never intended to win! :D
What am I to do now? O, woe is me!

No, seriously, I had hoped to understand where all these sentiments are coming from. I'm usually *very* sensitive when it comes to propaganda culture and very quick to personally dislike it. Can't touch Call of Duty Ghosts with a broom, even though it's just a trash/fun game. US protects the world from South America? Did those poor sods not suffer enough already? But I'm aware that it's me, imposing my personal opinion on the product, since I never really played enough of it to base my dislike on more than the decision of an antagonist. (Which doesn't mean COD:G on closer inspection is free of propaganda - it just means I haven't looked close enough to point any out, due to my bias.)

So I was actually interested to see where the jump from "Shiba Tatsuya focused narrative" to "Anti-Chinese and Pro-Japanese Narrative" happened and what is attributed to the latter rather than the former.
But alas, it seems it was never meant to be.

So, anywho, now that I won, can I expect some cookies? :D
Oct 8, 2014 7:10 AM

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darkreaperix said:
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I think you've won the argument since he's insulting you personally now instead of arguing back :)


So are you basically saying, that profile-stalking fanboys have lost too? :P
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
Oct 8, 2014 10:23 AM

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Oh, it’s a pity that I am so late to answer. I am sorry! I got terrible flu, and couldn’t muster strength or will to do anything besides lying very quietly in the corner.( I think it’ll be highly useless, but I’ll try to write my replies now.
Sorry for the numerous mistakes! It will be a long post, so I won’t be able to proofread it properly.

TKMike said:
Well you're right about this, but what I meant is that the enemies were the same level as the Japanese army, so there is not really a reason (IMO) to think that it's propaganda. They didn't want to start a war to take over Japan, so a huge sized army with their best mages wouldn't be a logical reason to do that. --- So GAA didn't look pathetic IMO at all, since we all know that Tatsuya is just way too OP.


I agree that there’re justifications in their universe, but if we look at Mahouka as on a work of fiction, than, I think, it is important, that almost no decent enemies were introduced. It is even atypical – usually in a shounen authors try to create a cool nemesis for protags and are ready to start building the animosity by, for example, including said antagonist at first in some recon invading force. I mean, they didn’t give the invading Chinese anything to make them memorable.

TKMike said:
Haha what I meant was the conversation Miki with Mizuki, after finding out that Mizuki had those eyes Miki always wanted to have. He said that he wanted to rape her if he didn't change. The funny thing is how Mizuki reacted and something that I'm questioning what the society is in Japan in the Mahouka Universe...


Oh, I remember that scene. It was one of the higher points of the writing, in my opinion. I expected this series to be like that – to focus on the clan struggles between arrogant, powerful and a bit scary young magical prodigies. I had high hopes for this pair too. I wanted to know why Miki had changed and what was other mages’ ways of getting what they wanted.

TKMike said:
You're right about this and this may be a bad adoptation problem of the LN. I dunno, don't read the LN hehehe. But as far as I can tell is that neither Japan or GAA is the site of justice, nor is Tatsuya.


Tatsuya’s family is shown as evil, or, more precisely, as going overboard, but I can’t say that critique goes beyond that and questions their society in the whole. There’re some things that seem hardly acceptable to us, but I can’t say, whether they are condemned in Mahouka or not. There’re ways to show evaluation through direction or subtle touches in writing, but I didn’t notice enough signs that the author distances himself from the pov of those living in Mahouka and considering that everything is ok.

TKMike said:
But to answer it seriously, Tatsuya is neutral, so Japan won because of having a neutral guy in their team. If Japan would form a threat to Miyuki, then Tatsuya would do the same as what he did to the NHD or the GAA members ;)


Frankly, it’s difficult for me to discuss Tatsuya’s pov, because it is not conveyed too well. I didn’t understand his stance on most of the important questions. What is shown is that he works for their defense forces, but, whether he does think their cause just or doesn’t, isn’t. I have no other option but to think that he thinks it just, since he does the actions that support it.

kuraiken said:
You identify the decision to chose choosing a country that's relateable though fictional as a "worrying set of views"? I think there is a significant difference between a "set of views" and the decision which antagonist to use and what focus to employ.


Nah, by “worrying set of views” I meant broader specter of ideas in Mahouka, not only the choice of the enemy.

kuraiken said:
Mahouka does not go out of its way to establish the chinese as sympathetic deep characters whom everyone can empathize with, that's true. But that is because it's simply not necessary and superflous from the perspective of the narrative. The chinese are, from the perspective of the narrative, not important, they do not need to be established as sympathetic characters, because it's simply not about them.


I firmly believe that not showing political conflicts one-sidedly is a common courtesy in today’s world, something any decent and intelligent person must do and does naturally, no matter the focus of the story. In my opinion, it is essential.

Also using this logic, I could make a work where all the black people steal and then say that there were no law-abiding black people, because they were not necessary in this story (I am sorry, it’s just a toxic stereotype, that came to mind).

kuraiken said:
One of the key principles of story-telling is to only tell what pertains to your story, because any act of story-telling is insanely, incredibly, monstrously selective.


Yep, but any work of art is also an utterance that is sent to the world and affects it. I don’t think that an author should be prohibited to write something, but we have any right to judge what he has written afterwards.

kuraiken said:
You argue that Mahouka could have selected a fictional nation, but it did. The GAA is not real, and to distinguish between reality and fiction is important.
If we ignore the distinction and transfer the suspension of disbelief into reality, we might then argue: Who could have been chosen?


As I’ve written above, fiction does not only reflects reality, but also affects it, if it has some footing in reality it warps it even more violently through people that read/watch it. When a real conflict is used in fiction, especially one that is still relevant, it is extremely dangerous, suspension of disbelief or not.

Actually propaganda creates its own fiction, that is different from reality, yet it fuels wars. I don’t believe that entertainment fiction can or should be given free pass. There’re too many examples that demonstrate its power.

kuraiken said:
If any real country is chosen, the same argument could be made. Sweden? -> Mahouka is against swedish people. Invent a not real-group? The Central-European Alliance with switzerland at its hand? -> Mahouka is against european people.


No, not necessary. Higher degree of abstraction would make it safer. Also making enemies less inhuman could help to stave off the criticism.

kuraiken said:
It's easy to identify propaganda as propaganda from the outside when you have something that clearly is propaganda. Yet when you isolate criteria, look at the mechanics, the problem that has persisted is that ultimately, anything and everything could be considered propaganda. Even if you craft an entirely fictional world, if the values, moral sets or opinions are relateable to some culture, if will be seen as offspring of that culture.


More or less.) Any fictional world is a reflection of the real one to some extent. That’s why it is necessary to demonstrate that no conflicts are black and white. Or, at least, that they are somewhat complex, with different living people on any side. Maybe when antagonists are bloodsucking aliens or monsters, indiscriminate killing is fine, but not in case of a conflict between people.

kuraiken said:
If you would define Mahouka as propaganda work, or heavily influencing, which factors that are universally applicable would you identify for it?


Hmm. I think that would be clear superiority of one side over another, dehumanization of the enemy, heroes not questioning reasons of the conflict or means of eliminating their enemies.

kuraiken said:
Can they be transferred and used on other works and correctly identify whether they are propaganda works or not?


I think that superiority and dehumanization are a must.

kuraiken said:
That's not exactly true. In fact, the two nations with the strongest propaganda machinerie are china and russia, because they go beyond forging ideas to punishing non-confirming ideas and eliminating them. The US isn't quite there yet, though between Prism and the NSA, they're just a step short of prohibiting non-confirming beliefs on similar scale.


Nah, modern Russian propaganda is weak. Soviet one was decently powerful, but not the modern one. Also most of the people, who were past infancy in 90-s saw the interesting moment of disappearance of one propaganda system and the slow forming of the next. It’s postmodern as hell and very enlightening. I’ve learned to deleninify books in my middle school (I could even tell an average ratio of data/USSR rubbish in a book from two or three glances). :D

Ii think that USA is doing much better with all those Hollywood movies and popular culture. There’re some people for whom USA is a religion.

kuraiken said:
There are such movies? I've never seen a WW2 movie that in some way humanized nazis. "Saving Private Ryan" seemed to do so for a bit, but eventually concluded that "a best nazi is a dead nazi".


I meant our local soviet spy operas. In them Nazis were enemies, but they were powerful, intelligent and could have some human traits. You didn’t get the impression that they’re simple monsters.

kuraiken said:
In what way are the "chinese badmen" dehumanized? Can you provide specific scenes and arguments why such characterization is not just flat characterization or stereotypical characterization (of villian archetypes) but specifically dehumanizes?


Are stereotypes not dehumanizing? Well, it’s a very complicated thing, so I won’t go into it… *sigh* May I approach it lightly? I really don’t want to rewatch…

For me the most important thing is the appearance rule. In anime good-looking characters are typically the ones that are allowed agency. The spies were mostly burly ugly men – it’s a bad thing in anime, a monster, non-human trait. Note that the only good-looking guy is the most human.

Secondly, I don’t remember any human interaction between them. They didn’t have many scenes, that’s for sure, they were not bult as people – they were simply scheming enemies and a nuisance. That’s not that typical too – many series show their antagonists’ personalities during secret meetings of the evilmen and such.

Zhao raving as a beast in the last episode was bad too – ugly, degrading and, ultimately, not very effective. His armor was stereotypically Chinese, as far as I can tell.
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I think you are expecting Mahouka to be something it isn't. It is not a political thriller. It is not a battle shounen. It is also neither a detective novel nor any other mystery story. It is just mediocre slice of life about toaster and refrigerator.
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
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jakkubus said:
I think you are expecting Mahouka to be something it isn't. It is not a political thriller. It is not a battle shounen. It is also neither a detective novel nor any other mystery story. It is just mediocre slice of life about toaster and refrigerator.


Ahaha. :D I think that a love story between a toaster and a refrigerator would be a better romance than Mahouka.
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jakkubus said:


I think you are expecting Mahouka to be something it isn't. It is not a political thriller. It is not a battle shounen. It is also neither a detective novel nor any other mystery story. It is just mediocre slice of life about toaster and refrigerator.


don't forget that the toaster and refrigerator throw off some major incestuous vibes between them... pretty sure that was a major point of the show :D
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deadoptimist said:
Ahaha. :D I think that a love story between a toaster and a refrigerator would be a better romance than Mahouka.


It's one of the rare shows, that cannot be described as "Still a better love story than Twilight". :P
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
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DrGeroCreation said:
If this is so then I guess the Baseball episode in Samurai Champloo is propaganda also and any anime that shows Americans in a negative light is Japanese propaganda and racist.


There is more than that going on in this show. They drone on about how they worked really hard to develop the skills that allow them to make more money and those poor uneducated people just won't understand that...etc.

So yea I'll buy this thread.
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deadoptimist said:

Nah, by “worrying set of views” I meant broader specter of ideas in Mahouka, not only the choice of the enemy.

And which broader spectrum are you referring to? Because in the post I replied to, you only mentioned the choice of the country as main enemy, not anything else. So I wonder, which spectrum of ideas is employed in Mahouka and how is it constructed?

deadoptimist said:

I firmly believe that not showing political conflicts one-sidedly is a common courtesy in today’s world, something any decent and intelligent person must do and does naturally, no matter the focus of the story. In my opinion, it is essential.

The problem here is that you’re arguing about absence instead of criticizing presence. Could Mahouka shown more of the other side in this arc? Probably. We could have a small dialogue between the Commander and Lu Gonghu about their home and family, but anything more than that? That would’ve needed a new protagonist whos only justification for existence is so that he can allow insight into the antagonist’s perspective in one arc of the story. What purpose would that serve, other than political correctness?
Mahouka, as some others already said, is not a political thriller. The invasion of the Chinese is not the centerpiece of the story, the main conflict or the major part of the entire series. It’s merely the last arc. You’re free to wish that stories generally show the conflict from two sides. I’m against that. Two sides is too biased, too narrow. Nothing ever consists of two sides. I also want the perspective of a third, neutral party, the perspective of an innocent bystander, and the perspective of how other nations react and view the conflict. I also want the perspective of some Chinese people at home in china, and how they view the conflict. I also want…
You see what I’m getting at? I could very well make the argument that two perspectives just dulls everything down into the dualism of two perspective. It ignores bystanders and innocent victims and focuses merely on those who act.
But at the end, you have to ask: what is the story about? And if you begin at the outset and the buildup, the series (at least in this television format) is about the life of two exceptional magicians in a world where magic works like technology, who spend their lives with the trouble of class-separation in school, school competitions, and other troubles that interfere with their school life.
deadoptimist said:

Also using this logic, I could make a work where all the black people steal and then say that there were no law-abiding black people, because they were not necessary in this story (I am sorry, it’s just a toxic stereotype, that came to mind).

Yes, that’s entirely possible. Take a gangster movie with an Afro-American protagonist who struggles with drugs, crime and his problems of building something more for his life. All the characters in the movie that are black are criminals. Why? Because he’s a criminal, living in an environment of criminals, doing crimes with criminals. Chances are, all or most of the white characters will be criminals too.
If you, however, for no reason at all build a world were incidentally every Afro-American the character meets is a criminal or criminally minded, despite not being related among each other or pushed into a similar environment, then you’ve got grounds for cause.
The difference is: in the former case, the scenario explains why you don’t meet any non-criminal Afro-Americans. Because it’s a story that is *about* a criminal Afro-American and his struggles in a the criminal part of society among other criminal Afro-Americans.
In the latter, everyone, from handsome army officer to shopkeeper, from begger to company CEO – if they’re black, they’re also criminals. Here you have no explanation, no reason at all for why it’s so. That’s when you have an author inflicting his bias on others.

deadoptimist said:

Yep, but any work of art is also an utterance that is sent to the world and affects it. I don’t think that an author should be prohibited to write something, but we have any right to judge what he has written afterwards.

On those grounds, *anything* is an utterance into the world that affects it. Your argument is correct, but it is also fundamentally general. If I go to my neighbor and tell him how I’ve met someone from France and that he was an absolute moron, then I’m just telling a story about what happened in my life. But it is also an “utterance” that may affect my neighbor’s perception of French people. He might use it as a story to other friends which then generates stories by those about French people, creating anti-French sentiments.
Do we have the right to judge? No: we’re not judges who can inflict their opinion on others and declare it god’s own truth. Do we have the right to critique, to analyze and critically question his work? Yes, we do. But for that, we need to make arguments. We need to analyze first, then come to a conclusion. And our conclusion will not be reality or any final judgment or verdict but merely our conclusion, which is just the end of one episode of the discussion and can and will be called into question as well.

deadoptimist said:

As I’ve written above, fiction does not only reflects reality, but also affects it, if it has some footing in reality it warps it even more violently through people that read/watch it. When a real conflict is used in fiction, especially one that is still relevant, it is extremely dangerous, suspension of disbelief or not.

Actually propaganda creates its own fiction, that is different from reality, yet it fuels wars. I don’t believe that entertainment fiction can or should be given free pass. There’re too many examples that demonstrate its power.

That’s entirely true, but it’s a general truth again. Yes, things affect the world, yes, ultimately, in some way or other, everything affects reality to some degree. Designed propaganda is particularly insidious because it can distort opinions and perception.
You’re absolutely correct – and in the same moment you already assume that you’re not just correct in this observation, but that it immediately applies to Mahouka, which, in your opinion, is propaganda. The problem is: we’re not talking about how propaganda works, how difficult it is to distinguish, how virtually anything can be called propaganda and the entirety of the propaganda complex. No, we’re discussing whether Mahouka is a work that contains significant propaganda intended by the author, and to do so, we need to discuss what then makes Mahouka a work of propaganda.
But you also deviate from the original point: You demanded it *had* to be in a fictional world and a fictional country, I showed that under that claim – and you being right in your objection of propaganda emphasizes this – it’d be incredible difficult to do anything at all, because not only can you then categorically exclude using real countries names but also anything that resembles a real country, or anything that could hypothetically resemble a real country. If we use your general and correct assumption of propaganda, we’d find ourselves stranded in a position where any work where a nation contains, suggests or remotely resembles a real nation, you have a work of propaganda that should be treated with the highest care.
deadoptimist said:

No, not necessary. Higher degree of abstraction would make it safer. Also making enemies less inhuman could help to stave off the criticism.

Safe bot no cigar, would be the distorted saying that springs to mind.
The ability of the reader to understand, comprehend and follow anything in a fictional universe depends on how relatable it is to reality. The more abstract something is, the less you comprehend and sympathize with it. If you have to follow the life of someone who’s a magician in a school, whose magic works a bit like futuristic technology, you’ve got something you can relate to. Magic = Technology. School life = My school life.
How well would you sympathize and understand the life of a person who stands in one spot and thinks of nothing? Would you be able to relate to that? Or would the absolute senselessness of it, the abstract principle of not doing anything at all, not render it foreign to you?
So by nature and default, we *always*, *always*, *always* build fiction with reality, with things that *are*, because only they and versions of them are known to us.
If you build a nation, what government would it have? Something with votes and so on? -> Your mind builds the idea it’s a democratic government. You can call it a diametric-elective-choice-system, but people will think democracy no matter how you word it. If you abstract it, people will search for less abstract concepts and rebuild their understanding of your abstract concept with a related real-life concept. You end up exactly where you began, unless you abstract it so much that they can no longer relate to it.
And if they wish to, they can take all your abstract parts and from it, they will recreate a not-so-abstract reality, and you’ll be once again at a spot where people say: “Well, they call it Garonia, but it’s just like japan, isn’t it? It’s japan but with a different name!” So regardless how much you abstract, you’ll either make it incomprehensible, or you’ll make it slightly more difficult for someone to find beef with what this country is to him.

Ultimately, you have to ask: where do you draw the line? How much abstraction must there be so it’s safe, not safer. Because if you argue it should be safer to not confuse it with reality, we could argue that that safer line was already passed a while ago. That’s why people like me see if different and don’t see it as propaganda and see that japan as real japan. Because we know it’s not, it’s from a tv show.
The same is true for your more human concept. Yes, there could be more. But that’s not magical energy from space. It takes characters, backstories, more screen time, more scenes. With Lu Gonghu and the ambassador there are already 2 characters who are better characterized (better or equal to some side-characters, who don’t get much distinguishing them either). Yes, there could be more, yes their relationships and lives could be more emphasized. But this takes screen time, this changes the focus, draws to other things. You have twenty minutes episodes to build a coherent narrative that engages the audience from beginning to end. Not 45 minutes, not 90 minutes, twenty.
Now imagine every author builds in politically correct characters and scenes in every work in sufficient number, changes focus, perspective, narration, taking screen time away, etc. etc. just so that less people will find offense? Because some still will. Some always will. And if every author does that, do you know what criticism would come then? “Oh, another one of *those* authors. They’re so obsessed with making their work politically correct and reduce the number of biased people who get ridiculous ideas from it, that they ruin the narrative in the way. What the hell? I didn’t watch this series so I could get 10 minutes where the antagonist shows me how human he actually is. I don’t care. The story isn’t about him. He isn’t even an important antagonist. All of this, in its entirety, is pointless and worthless to the work, it’s just there to politically say: please don’t take offense, look how dearly I try not to offend anyone!”
This entire argument is not about what the author does, but of what he doesn’t do, or what he should’ve done more, just to make sure he shows he’s not at all biased in any way.


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More or less.) Any fictional world is a reflection of the real one to some extent. That’s why it is necessary to demonstrate that no conflicts are black and white. Or, at least, that they are somewhat complex, with different living people on any side. Maybe when antagonists are bloodsucking aliens or monsters, indiscriminate killing is fine, but not in case of a conflict between people.

That’s not entirely wrong, but it’s highly idealistic. In any work that is *about* a specific conflict between people, yes, YES, it should attempt to show that there is more to the antagonist than him being just the antagonist. But you cannot dictate reality to fiction, cannot demand that every work of fiction attempts to prevent any remotely possible implications just because reality exists. Right now, you’re just talking about nations. What if we change the topic? Shouldn’t police ALWAYS be shown from at least two sides? Criminals are people too. And rapists aren’t just mutated monsters, they have a life, feelings too. What right does anyone have to show these in any movie from just one angle! It creates bias! It’s propaganda that through fiction defines reality, defines how policemen or criminals are perceived.
With that in mind, watch any movie. Taxi drivers, doctors, nurses, buss drivers. Check out how they’re reduced to stereotypes and thus dehumanized(?).
With that in mind, imagine how you would have to jump through a million hoops in order to create a movie that doesn’t offend anyone. Right now, you’d be happy about more abstract nations and more human antagonists. What about all those people from nations that would also exist in Mahouka, the US, Germany, France, England, etc. who are offended that their nations play no part in Mahouka? How offensive. Such an act of distruction and the invasion SURELY would be commented on by politicians from other nations. Mahouka portrays the politicians from other nations as people who willingly let such things happen uncommented!
You are arguing about ideals, but ideals are not goals, not destinations. They’re just road signs, saying: this is where this leads to, this is where that leads to. It’s not a destination you can ever reach.
If you impose them as goals on a work of fiction and from them build a standard that has to be obeyed, a standard that seems to lack any definition of what they baseline would have to be.

deadoptimist said:

Hmm. I think that would be clear superiority of one side over another, dehumanization of the enemy, heroes not questioning reasons of the conflict or means of eliminating their enemies.

1. Superiority. Is Japan shown as clearly superior to china? Or as clearly superior to a small invasion team? If ten knights venture to the enemies castle but lose, because the enemy, at their own castle, is superior, are those knights then victim to propaganda in this fictional work? If you make power a factor, than you conclude that local power or power in a specific moment or scene, constitutes general power. And you also constitute power as a value. So any movie, where you have an underdog that fights against superior power, you have propaganda against the underdog, because he’s fighting a superior power.
2. How does dehumanization happen in Mahouka? Is it presence, or absence? Because your argument so far has always been on absence. You say: there should be more of this and that, regardless of implications for the work and its limitations as a work. You say: this is not enough. But that’s “you” saying “not enough”. Someone else may say “not enough” when you’d already say “oh, this is totally fair!” And some others already passed that line and don’t see a problem in Mahouka, because they don’t make verdicts of what they think should be there, but on what is there. And there simply are no clearly dehumanizing aspects in this anime to my observation.
3. Questioning reasons of a conflict? How would you have portrayed that in the anime? People running about screaming: “Why are they attacking us? Why are they attacking us?” It assumes that people have the time to question the enemies reason, and to seek reasons when often, there is no such thing as one reason or some reasons. If you are under attack, being shot at, you don’t have time, or energy, or willingness to philosophize about why they’re attacking you. They are. And you have to make them stop. It’s irrelevant if they attack because someone’s poodle died. They are attacking and you have to act.
4. So what would you have them do instead? Some of Tatsuya’s friends *were* looking rather shocked as he simply killed people. He’s also not capable of formulating or feeling such things.

The first and second factors simply don’t seem applicable. The first is so general and lacks definition. How is superiority defined? In which situation, over which time? You assume that it’s precise, because you have a precise idea about a precise situation in a precise piece of work – but if applied to other works, it just can’t function. The second would be an argument, but again, you fail to say what constitutes dehumanization and how it’s done in Mahouka. To you, it seems, it’s dehumanizing when an author does not meet your standard of humanizing the enemy. But what if someone with a more rigorous standard comes along and says at a work where you don’t see anything wrong: “It’s dehumanizing, not enough yet! Only one Chinese main character? Not enough I say!” The third and fourth honestly boggle my mind. They seem to force any piece of work to become the stereotype where the main character spends minutes whining about the “why” and then crying about why words don’t work and why he has to kill them, and how dreadful it is, to him, now, here and then, in this moment of action where adrenaline defeats all thinking. If you constitute those as standards that must be upheld, a lot of movies would become even more limited to a pattern than they already are. Instead of being factors that allow you to define where propaganda occurs, you define where the movie does not meet your set of acceptable movie standards.
You find not fault for what Mahouka is, but for it not being what you want it to be.

deadoptimist said:

I think that superiority and dehumanization are a must.

See above. Superiority in what way? How is it defined? Physically? In the power to move the world? Emotionally? Morally? Superior in intelligence?
As for dehumanization, yes, but what exactly is dehumanizing in Mahouka. We keep returning to that, and your answer always seems to come back to “not enough”, to which I always add “in your opinion”.
And I’d like to stress again, that you seem to find standards to impose on the story that are not created out of thin air in thin air. They need screen time, they need characters, they need exposition, etc. etc. etc. If you wish to prevent anyone from finding fault, then you’ll be so busy getting political correctness into the anime – to such a degree that no one can claim you’re making propaganda – that you destroy what the story originally was and end up with the same story, retold time and time again, in the very same manner, because you impose standards that always have to somehow be twisted into the work.

deadoptimist said:

Nah, modern Russian propaganda is weak. Soviet one was decently powerful, but not the modern one. Also most of the people, who were past infancy in 90-s saw the interesting moment of disappearance of one propaganda system and the slow forming of the next. It’s postmodern as hell and very enlightening. I’ve learned to deleninify books in my middle school (I could even tell an average ratio of data/USSR rubbish in a book from two or three glances). :D
Ii think that USA is doing much better with all those Hollywood movies and popular culture. There’re some people for whom USA is a religion.

Both Russia and China in particular have a very tight control on the internet in their country and what information can be posted in blogs etc. The same is true for newspapers etc. The same cannot be said of the US. Yes, they have Fox Propaganda, and you’d be hard pressed to point at a big newspaper magazine that’s not in some way linked to the rich and influential, and many seem to “respect” the “interests” of the country, instead of being accurate and truthful. They don’t, however (yet) limit the information in the internet in a similar degree, and as a result, there are a lot of independent news organizations, especially those who use youtube. As a result, it’s significantly easier to inform yourself in the US than Russia or China. Both nations also constantly create nationalistic movies that attempt to craft a very strong nationality. If you take a look at Chinese movies, you’ll find countless who deal with the china as a nation, being invaded or under duress from outside forces. Or movies that emphasize traditional values, self-sacrifice, etc. See “Once Upon a Time in China”, with the mythical Wong Fei Hung character, “Fist of Legend”, with evil Japanese who oppress the Chinese. Or “Hero”, which, like so many Chinese movies, celebrates its tradition, roots and origin, to make it seem exceptional.
Hollywood is commercially more successful and has a larger audience around the world – but what the average Russian or Chinese people watch are not necessarily Hollywood movies. It’s Chinese movies.

deadoptimist said:

Are stereotypes not dehumanizing? Well, it’s a very complicated thing, so I won’t go into it… *sigh* May I approach it lightly? I really don’t want to rewatch…

For me the most important thing is the appearance rule. In anime good-looking characters are typically the ones that are allowed agency. The spies were mostly burly ugly men – it’s a bad thing in anime, a monster, non-human trait. Note that the only good-looking guy is the most human.

Secondly, I don’t remember any human interaction between them. They didn’t have many scenes, that’s for sure, they were not bult as people – they were simply scheming enemies and a nuisance. That’s not that typical too – many series show their antagonists’ personalities during secret meetings of the evilmen and such.

Zhao raving as a beast in the last episode was bad too – ugly, degrading and, ultimately, not very effective. His armor was stereotypically Chinese, as far as I can tell.

Stereotypes are a necessity, because you could not possibly – in any medium – accurately characterize all characters. A baker is usually a baker, he bakes things. He’s not a person, just a stereotype fulfilling a function. If you look for stereotypes, you’ll find a lot of stereotypical among the main cast as well. Tatsuya’s sister’s greatest flaw, for example, is that she is nothing but the brother-admiring stereotype.
If all members of a group of military soldiers, from a foreign nation, are portrayed as military soldiers from a foreign nation, then you have a stereotypical portrayal of characters. But that doesn’t mean it’s dehumanizing. It’s just that from the perspective and narrative of the story, the characters are not important enough to be fully fleshed out and take too much screen time.
If you, like in my example above with the Afro-American criminals, have a specific set of attitude, behaviors or similar things, often something that limits that character as a person (lack of intelligence, emotions, whatever) and this behavior or trait is *only* shared by people who belong to the same nationality *despite* coming from different parts of life (e.g. they’re not all soldiers, but life in different environments) *then* you’re attributing something to a nationality. In Mahouka, you don’t have anyone but the military invaders, so it’s no surprise they share beliefs, attitudes and traits. It defines them as military group, not as who they are because of their nationality. The one person who does not belong to them (the ambassador) shows that he approaches problem and solutions differently (dropping the plan when the Japanese successfully repel the attack) and instead getting their gratitude for his cooperation. He also has a different solution to their spy: he does not think killing is the solution. Instead he saves her life, and only goes as far as he has to in order to protect his interests. So people from the same nationality but different places of origin, *despite* following the same agenda, are shown to act, think and behave differently, placing different value on things (the life of the spy-girl, for example).

That’s a rather superficial way to go about it. It’s not absolutely wrong, but you again use it for assumptions and walk off into a different direction. The detail and portrayal of characters signify the importance to the story to the audience. Lu Gonghu and the ambassador are distinctly drawn because people need to be able to remember them easily and distinguish them from other characters. On the other hand, characters that only have little appearance will be drawn less remarkable, so that people understand “don’t focus on this guy, he’s not too important.” This helps distinguishing protagonists from background characters, so that you can easily recognize your main cast – particularly important when you’ve got a huge cast. (Mahouka does). And the youthful attractive appearance, as in all movies, is the creator catering to the expectations of the audience. If the main characters is unattractive, it is more difficult to get the audience to sympathize.
I’m sorry, but “most Chinese didn’t look as beautiful as the main characters” is not a reason to think Chinese are dehumanized. And that most side-characters don’t look as good as main characters has nothing to do with nationality. They’re side-characters.
And we also come back to the reoccurring argument. You’re describing the appearance of a specific pool of people who all come from one particular environment: the military. (Except the ambassador, who happens to be portrayed significantly different)
All I can get from this is, again, a direction you suggest. “More of this, they should be portrayed more beautiful and so on”, but you ignore the constraints of the medium and you also argue towards a direction where you have, in your mind, crafted a “finish” line that a product has to pass in order to meet your standards. That’s fine. But it seems you then say this “finish” line applies to the world at large and must be obeyed, ignoring that some will draw that line somewhere else.
Mahouka is acceptable to me because I rather thought Lu Gonghu was damn cool, and I find the ambassador to be a cleaver, conniving s-o-b I’d like to see more of. It didn’t go out of its way to portray a military invasion group as a group of emotional human beings that are as human as everyone else – but I can understand that. That’s not what the series is about. I didn’t see anything that portrayed Chinese – as people – to be less than Japanese. Not in part and certainly not in general.
Someone else would draw the line further then you, and when you already say: “Look at this scene! We have a few minutes of interaction between the Chinese, where they talk about their life!”, he would say: “Bah, it’s a time-wasting token effort. ONE SCENE. In only ONE scene, and ONLY for three minutes. So what, Chinese are normal people only for three minutes? Clearly this is a token effort of a biased author to not seem so biased - but he’s not fooling anyone. He should have shown that for at least one minute in every episode. That he didn’t do this shows he didn’t care enough and thus he is actually a biased bastard. I rest my case”.

So what we need, seriously need, is more than direction, more than: “I expect more of this and that according to my standards.” Yes, we do need actual scenes, actual material, where we can, in the text (that is the anime) find evidence that suggests at the material that Chinese are being dehumanized.

PS: Please, please do provide actual evidence we can discuss. It's an insane piece of work to disassemble theoretical discussions about hypotheticals, particularily if they boil down to "Not enough of x, in my opinion, and thus in fact". General truths are always nice, but please let us also agree that you have to accept that every medium has its limitations. We're, after all, not discussing how the arc of Mahouka as a series with an infinite number of produceable episodes could portray a conflict adequately from two sides. We're discussing a manga about two siblings, living in a magical world, with a limited perspective, and their troubles in school. That the narrative doesn't suddenly break and allow us to follow both sides with equal measure should not be surprising, because it never was about the conflict. It's all about the goddamn Shiba siblings.
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Stereotypes are a necessity, because you could not possibly – in any medium – accurately characterize all characters. A baker is usually a baker, he bakes things. He’s not a person, just a stereotype fulfilling a function. If you look for stereotypes, you’ll find a lot of stereotypical among the main cast as well.


>Stereotype



Quoting for posterity. And you wonder why I deemed you a waste of my time. One reason being I don't think you understand the meaning behind the words you're trying to argue with, especially with that baker being a baker analogy.

A baker is an occupation. Saying all bakers are grumpy old men who work in the kitchen is a stereotype.

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/stereotype

>to believe unfairly that all people or things with a particular characteristic are the same
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Stereotypes are a necessity, because you could not possibly – in any medium – accurately characterize all characters. A baker is usually a baker, he bakes things. He’s not a person, just a stereotype fulfilling a function. If you look for stereotypes, you’ll find a lot of stereotypical among the main cast as well. Tatsuya’s sister’s greatest flaw, for example, is that she is nothing but the brother-admiring stereotype.
If all members of a group of military soldiers, from a foreign nation, are portrayed as military soldiers from a foreign nation, then you have a stereotypical portrayal of characters. But that doesn’t mean it’s dehumanizing. It’s just that from the perspective and narrative of the story, the characters are not important enough to be fully fleshed out and take too much screen time.

Would be what I reply to that. Basically saying: you can't read.
Yes, I say a baker is a baker at 2 am in the morning and forget to outline in that example what I mean, because I have that picture in my head. Instead, I show it in the following lines at the example of Tatsuyas sister. But you neither quote those, nor, it seems, did you read them. Maybe you should have. Maybe you really should have.

"An often unfair and untrue belief that many people have about all people or things with a particular characteristic" - your link

"Something conforming to a fixed or general pattern; especially : a standardized mental picture that is held in common by members of a group and that represents an oversimplified opinion, prejudiced attitude, or uncritical judgment" - your link

A stereotype is utilized in writing (as you should know from your writing classes) as means of characterizing a less important character by giving him a stereotypical image. This allows the audience to easier understand the character and allows the author to spend less time with describing who or what he is, and instead allows the character to fulfill a role (e.g. Tatsuyas sister is meant to serve as Tatsuyas emotional side, and gives the audience a perspective on our main character).
By describing a character in a "fixed or general pattern; especially : a standardized mental picture that is held in common by members of a group and that represents an oversimplified opinion" he can evoke an idea of who the character is by making the audience create it from a "standardized mental picture".
The burly big dumb brute. The flour-covered, fat-bellied baker who hides kindness (warmth) behind his grumpy facade, and often seems bland as a character but then can later surprise our main character by a bit of depth when he breaks the stereotypization.
And this returns us to the depiction of the chinese military men. Who are portrayed as middle-aged to older men, sturdy, thick-built, muscled, and very male. Threatening. To some degree, they confirm to a stereotype (all military men are thick-built, heavily muscled and aged veterans) because they don't need to say: We operate on someones elses orders. We are military men who have been given this role. We are a special task force of experienced soldiers, because others would not be trusted with this sort of job.
It's implied from the portrayal and the role they portray and as a result, the unification of their portrayal allows the author to build a standard base of who these people in these roles are, from which he can then construct their differences. (Lu Gonghu being more of the muscle, while his superior is more the thinker)

So, feel free to Princess Bride pic yourself, because evidently you don't seem to understand that, in the realm of writing, stereotype is not just an "unfair and untrue belief that many people have about all people or things with a particular characteristic", it also is a device for characterization because it allows an author to portray a character in such a fashion that the reader will invent most of his characteristics from the stereotype. (Which is why the dictionary says: "mostly". Because there is a difference in common day usage of stereotype, the use of the term to describe a character in a text, or when it's employed as a device in writing.

So yes, I should have been clearer on the baker-example, just a line below that you find examples of what I actually mean, had you bothered to read further. But of course, you didn't, because you had seen enough and thought your points was evidently proven! After all, you were looking for a reason to lash out at me, deliver a short and sharp piece of rightous triumphant justice! So you pick the part that makes you seem right and clever, and ignore the one that doesn't. Doesn't that remind us of something? I think I'm seeing a pattern. I seem to distinctly recall someone in this thread who keeps using small pieces of facts in his arguments, mixes them with a grain of truth and then believes he has unearthed the deepest truth and greatest knowledge. I think that fellow also didn't read more lines than necessary to convince himself of his own just and righteous cause and ignored anything contrary to his views. He also has the same profile name, if that's any hint.
A few lines even further, you would have seen the distinction of the Afro-American example.
All Afro-Americans are criminals would be a prejudiced stereotype.
If all Afro-Americans happen to be criminals, because only criminals are portrayed in the work because that's what it focuses on, you don't have a prejudiced stereotype, but you will still find that most of the Afro-American criminals that are not the main-character or important secondary characters will have a stereotypical portrayal: they will be big, well-muscled, aggressive and not too clever. Why? Because that way you can emphasize the main character, who'd be also Afro-American, but maybe not big and well-muscled, maybe not too aggressive but more forced into actions by circumstances, not loud and big-mouthed, but quite and thinking, not stupid, but highly intelligent.
And by seemingly creating a stereotype, a common pattern all characters seem to adhere to, and then distinguishing your main character from that by showing him to not match the stereotype, you emphasize him, his personality, his role and importance in the work, by crafting a stereotype on the one side, and breaking it on the other. It allows one to easier identify who a character is, what role he plays, and what his importance is. And that's also how you make it easier to seperate protagonists from antagonists, ensuring that the audience can follow who belongs to who. (Which can otherwise become tricky in large-cast, works, be it anime, novels or movies.)

So: you keep using that word. I don't think it means what you think it means. And you should bother to read your own links. There's a reason why dictionaries use qualifiers such as "mostly", instead of "generally", or "usually", and why they point out when a definition is not all-encompassing to begin with.
And stop sleeping in writing class.

Edit: Feeling generous, 2 seconds google:
http://www.veronicasicoe.com/blog/2013/02/how-to-use-stereotypes-in-writing-fiction/
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I agree that there’re justifications in their universe, but if we look at Mahouka as on a work of fiction, than, I think, it is important, that almost no decent enemies were introduced. It is even atypical – usually in a shounen authors try to create a cool nemesis for protags and are ready to start building the animosity by, for example, including said antagonist at first in some recon invading force. I mean, they didn’t give the invading Chinese anything to make them memorable.

Well that's what I'm talking about, since I only wanted to react that there aren't racism or propaganda in this anime, unless you want it to be or only look at it from the Japanese perspective in this anime. There's no propaganda, since the Chinese weren't portrayed as weaker or more evil then the Japanese if we exclude Tatsuya and (maybe) Miyuki. I think the problem here is not if it's propaganda or racism, but the problem you have lies towards the character Tatsuya and (maybe) Miyuki, since those two are at a level far above the other characters that has introduced so far and makes the enemies they're facing seem weak and dumb. I don't wanna start going towards that topic in this propaganda discussion thread and I respect everyone's opinion of that matter, since there's no reason to disagree about someone's personal opinion about a character. If I'm wrong, then I would gladly discuss about this topic further :)


Tatsuya’s family is shown as evil, or, more precisely, as going overboard, but I can’t say that critique goes beyond that and questions their society in the whole. There’re some things that seem hardly acceptable to us, but I can’t say, whether they are condemned in Mahouka or not. There’re ways to show evaluation through direction or subtle touches in writing, but I didn’t notice enough signs that the author distances himself from the pov of those living in Mahouka and considering that everything is ok.

Srry if this may be annoying by now, but why I stated that is to point out that there is no racism or propaganda if the author is portraying that the Japanese can be more evil or f*cked up than the villians from other countries so far or be worse than them. The saddest and weakest/terrible villian are the Japanese who calls themself "Blanche" and the worst are also the Japanese from the Yotsuba family. I don't really want to go offtopic, since I've got some warnings already hehehe.


Frankly, it’s difficult for me to discuss Tatsuya’s pov, because it is not conveyed too well. I didn’t understand his stance on most of the important questions. What is shown is that he works for their defense forces, but, whether he does think their cause just or doesn’t, isn’t. I have no other option but to think that he thinks it just, since he does the actions that support it.

Well the reason why he support them is mainly to protect Miyuki. If the army sees Tatsuya as a threat, then Miyuki would also be in danger because of him. And another thing is that Tatsuya can't see if something is the right thing to do or not, because he simply don't have those feelings and doesn't care about it at all. He simply follows orders if it will keep Miyuki safe. That's all what he cares about.

You can't call Tatsuya the side of justice if he wants to kill someone that has a chance to "hurt" Miyuki with no other intensions at all, like the NHD did or wanting to kill someone that may ruïn the current live Miyuki and Tatsuya having by revealing their real identity like Mizuki could do and the reason why Tatsuya wanted to kill her for stupid reasons like that. I think the anime has portrayed that good enough to understand that. Simply because Tatsuya is on the side of Japan, doesn't mean that it's the side of justice if we look at what the Japanese are doing or at the person Tatsuya himself.
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And which broader spectrum are you referring to? Because in the post I replied to, you only mentioned the choice of the country as main enemy, not anything else. So I wonder, which spectrum of ideas is employed in Mahouka and how is it constructed?


I wanted to express my general disapproval of the world view, shown in Mahouka, - of their society structure, treatment of women and elitism. But only the part about propaganda was relevant to the discussion, so I elaborated only on it. That starting statement is irrelevant to the further part of the post.

If I would reply to ever point, we’ll drown, so I’ll simplify it (I don’t see any other way). I’ll list the fundamental differences in our approaches.

The way I see it, you propose several points –

1) that whatever happens in Mahouka is necessary, because of practical reasons: author can’t include everything in his work;

2) That a work of art is fine as a closed off system – everything is as it is intended to be;

3) That an author can create any fictional universe, that he wants.

I think these three things are applicable only on the basis of the so called presumption of greatness – when you see the work of art, which you analyze, as an ideal object, that is as it should be. I don’t think that Mahouka deserves such a respectful approach. Though it is suitable to study inner systems of works of art on academic level, the topic of propaganda demands to look into actual world – to seek the actual reader and maybe the actual author. So, for me, the main reason to consider Mahouka propaganda is the choice of the enemy and the incorporation of some of the things that real Japan propaganda says.

Also I don’t buy into the explanation by applying to practicality. An author creates worlds as he sees fit. Omittance of some things can be more important than presence of the others. You say, that the Chinese are only a side-show, but isn’t that a sort of dehumanization? Also I don’t think that saying that the einvasion it was only a small episode is enough – that was the only example of the confrontation we were shown, so for us it represents its entirety. While there is a big fictional world, what we deal with is not the world itself, but its structured representation – the story, and in a story it’s important what elements are chosen and how they are arranged, the choice of the elements and their composition are intentional. That’s why, in my opinion, saying that something is there, but is simply not mentioned, is not an argument.

Now that

kuraiken said:
do you know what criticism would come then? “Oh, another one of *those* authors. They’re so obsessed with making their work politically correct and reduce the number of biased people who get ridiculous ideas from it, that they ruin the narrative in the way.


is an interesting point. I dislike the “every publicity is good” approach. I think, it is a deal with your conscience – you go as far as you allow yourself. And the others will criticize you afterwards. On the other hand, cases of conscious provocation are different from works, that are written by someone actually suffering from bad – harmful and perverted – ideas. To me, it looks like Mahouka’s author belongs to the second type and actually believes in all the crap the young magicians spout. I would be happy to be mistaken, but that’s the impression the adaptation leaves.

kuraiken said:
To you, it seems, it’s dehumanizing when an author does not meet your standard of humanizing the enemy. But what if someone with a more rigorous standard comes along and says at a work where you don’t see anything wrong: “It’s dehumanizing, not enough yet! Only one Chinese main character? Not enough I say!”


Yep, that’s a problem. But that is a problem of degree, while Mahouka has a complete lack of the matter.

kuraiken said:
The third and fourth honestly boggle my mind. They seem to force any piece of work to become the stereotype where the main character spends minutes whining about the “why” and then crying about why words don’t work and why he has to kill them, and how dreadful it is, to him, now, here and then, in this moment of action where adrenaline defeats all thinking.


Nah, you can show it through direction (music is good in such cases) or through subtle hints in dialogue. There is no need to explain everything in length.

kuraiken said:
If you constitute those as standards that must be upheld, a lot of movies would become even more limited to a pattern than they already are


I think that decency should come naturally to people.

kuraiken said:
You find not fault for what Mahouka is, but for it not being what you want it to be.


Oh, that’s usually like that with people. But I must admit, that I didn’t notice anything interesting going on in Mahouka besides the invasion and the preparation. Sure, there was some school squabble, but there was so little tension, that it didn’t look like the point of the plot. Maybe incest. I can accept that I am wrong and it is an incest romance story, but then it is bad on its own.

kuraiken said:
[Both Russia and China in particular have a very tight control on the internet in their country and what information can be posted in blogs etc. --- Both nations also constantly create nationalistic movies that attempt to craft a very strong nationality. -- but what the average Russian or Chinese people watch are not necessarily Hollywood movies. It’s Chinese movies.


O_O Wow. I live in Russia, but… Ah, fine, I am almost past caring. But I must say that I haven’t seen a Chinese movie demonstrated in a cinema for a longest time. Hollywood moies are everywhere.

kuraiken said:
Stereotypes are a necessity, because you could not possibly – in any medium – accurately characterize all characters.


I must agree wuth wrenchbread. There’re types, and they’re used in narration. Authors are praised for accurately reproducing existing types.

Stereotypes are toxic. The only good use for them is subversion or being part of prejudices of a character.
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I wanted to express my general disapproval of the world view, shown in Mahouka, - of their society structure, treatment of women and elitism. But only the part about propaganda was relevant to the discussion, so I elaborated only on it. That starting statement is irrelevant to the further part of the post.

If I would reply to ever point, we’ll drown, so I’ll simplify it (I don’t see any other way). I’ll list the fundamental differences in our approaches.

The way I see it, you propose several points –

1) that whatever happens in Mahouka is necessary, because of practical reasons: author can’t include everything in his work;

2) That a work of art is fine as a closed off system – everything is as it is intended to be;

3) That an author can create any fictional universe, that he wants.

I think these three things are applicable only on the basis of the so called presumption of greatness – when you see the work of art, which you analyze, as an ideal object, that is as it should be. I don’t think that Mahouka deserves such a respectful approach. Though it is suitable to study inner systems of works of art on academic level, the topic of propaganda demands to look into actual world – to seek the actual reader and maybe the actual author. So, for me, the main reason to consider Mahouka propaganda is the choice of the enemy and the incorporation of some of the things that real Japan propaganda says.

Also I don’t buy into the explanation by applying to practicality. An author creates worlds as he sees fit. Omittance of some things can be more important than presence of the others. You say, that the Chinese are only a side-show, but isn’t that a sort of dehumanization? Also I don’t think that saying that the einvasion it was only a small episode is enough – that was the only example of the confrontation we were shown, so for us it represents its entirety. While there is a big fictional world, what we deal with is not the world itself, but its structured representation – the story, and in a story it’s important what elements are chosen and how they are arranged, the choice of the elements and their composition are intentional. That’s why, in my opinion, saying that something is there, but is simply not mentioned, is not an argument.


It's good you listed those ponts, because it seems you and I seem to be talking right past each other. Earlier I discussed Barthes and Foucault, who argue in precisely that direction: the author is no "god" and his work not crafted by "godly inspiration", but it's a. work and b. crafted.

So let me try to ensure we don't misunderstand each other:
1. Somehow we're both putting the others opinion to the extreme.
I don't believe that everything that happens in Mahouka is necessary, but everything that is included in Mahouka is included via selection: the author decides this, and not something else, has to be included (in some parts, conventions of course play in, as some anime series have this dreadful habit of fanservice, which, of course, contributes nothing to the story itself). He sets his priorities for what sort of work does he intend to create. But it does mean the majority of what is selected is selected because it's necessary to portray the series the way it was.

2. That's not accurate, in my opinion. The reason being that (as I argued earlier) it's impossible to control the audiences reaction. You can try to, to some degree, but how any individual receives the medium depends entirely on that person and unless the person *allows* the medium to influence him, it won't in significane. Which is why it would be so hard to set these standard conventions you suggest, and always adhere to them. It's an attempt to prevent the audience from reaction in a particular way - but they'll still react in any way they wish to, because ultimately the experience of a work can be entirely removed from its intentions or its actual content.

3. This part, I'm not sure what you mean. Do you mean a. he can create anything that he wants to, even if its considered an undesireable creation (morality argument) or b. he is in full power of creating a universe entirely to his wishes (author-as-god argument)?

I don't think you could ever actually use "presumption of greatness" to consider a work as finite. It assumes there is a distinction in quality between works, which is problematic, because priorities define what one values as quality, which ultimately means that different people will value different qualities, and one "great piece of art" may cause not the slightest stir of emotion, while another amateur work manages precisly that in an individual.
Ultimately, no work is as it should be (many artists are often ashamed of some of their so-called greatest works, and wonder how on earth no one can notice how flawed it is), but every work is finished at the point the artists decides to consider it finished. (Otherwise most would spend eternity on a project)

deadoptimist said:

You say, that the Chinese are only a side-show, but isn’t that a sort of dehumanization?

You can say that, but I think it's wrong. Why would it be dehumanizing?
The spy-girl was a side-show too. Her plot was only there to point into the larger plot-part of the arc. Is she then dehumanized because she does not get enough attention?
Many great books, some that play in the second world war (and boy do critics love those...) don't portray the second world war. They don't show multiple perspectives, they don't try to show both sides. Instead, they focus on what is most important in their project: for example the suffering of a german family in dresden during the bombing. Or the story of a young jewish family fleeing germany.
Does the fact that the suffering of all others (english during german air raids, africans in the war in africa, etc.) is a side-show, only mentioned, or not even shown, then not mean that this pro-jewish-immigrant-book is anti-african/german/english/etc.?

deadoptimist said:

is an interesting point. I dislike the “every publicity is good” approach. I think, it is a deal with your conscience – you go as far as you allow yourself. And the others will criticize you afterwards. On the other hand, cases of conscious provocation are different from works, that are written by someone actually suffering from bad – harmful and perverted – ideas. To me, it looks like Mahouka’s author belongs to the second type and actually believes in all the crap the young magicians spout. I would be happy to be mistaken, but that’s the impression the adaptation leaves.

Can you provide examples of those harmful and perverted ideas the young magicians are spouting? I can't recall any that would fit the bill.

deadoptimist said:

Yep, that’s a problem. But that is a problem of degree, while Mahouka has a complete lack of the matter.

I'm not sure I can subscribe to complete lack, but yes, it's at best a very marginal part to go out of your way to humanize enemies. But we're still at the point where you're not arguing that Mahouka is dehumanizing the chinese. You say it's dehumanizing the chinese, because it's not humanizing them enough to your likening. But that's not dehumanizing, that's simply not making an issue out of something either way. So what's needed are things that exhibit dehumanizing ideas. ("Oh, let's kill all the chinese! They all deserve to die for it!"; "Bah, as expected, chinese were always inferior fighters. They can't stand against us!"; "God, do they look brutish. But they are chinese, after all.")
Unless you have those, you don't have a dehumanizing work. You have something that simply doesn't make an issue out of it, because it's irrelevant to the story.

deadoptimist said:

Nah, you can show it through direction (music is good in such cases) or through subtle hints in dialogue. There is no need to explain everything in length.

While that's true, would that be good enough for you? Or wouldn't you just say: "A little sad melody changes nothing that their perspective isn't shown enough!"?

deadoptimist said:

Oh, that’s usually like that with people. But I must admit, that I didn’t notice anything interesting going on in Mahouka besides the invasion and the preparation. Sure, there was some school squabble, but there was so little tension, that it didn’t look like the point of the plot. Maybe incest. I can accept that I am wrong and it is an incest romance story, but then it is bad on its own.

I think Mahouka is simply focused on the school life of Tatsuya (being engineered and prevented from feeling emotions, except for his sister) and his exploits as a gifted magician. A bit like Kvothe from the Kingslayer Chronicles, though I wouldn't put Tatsuya on Kvothe's pedestal. Is there incest? I wouldn't know, I still don't understand what the author is aiming at. Maybe, maybe it's just the japanese-sister-complex that seems to be exhibited in multiple works.

deadoptimist said:

O_O Wow. I live in Russia, but… Ah, fine, I am almost past caring. But I must say that I haven’t seen a Chinese movie demonstrated in a cinema for a longest time. Hollywood moies are everywhere.

Oh, that's great. I don't, and since we're talking about propaganda I'm honestly curious about how people in russia perceive the conflict in ukraine, and what they think about Mr. P's attitude on homosexuals. (In the west & europe, there are these stories that gay people are killed on the street without any repercussions - because they're gay, and thus obviously don't deserve to die)
(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2014_Russian_military_intervention_in_Ukraine)
and (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LGBT_rights_in_Russia#Hate_crimes) for reference what I'm talking about.
How does the russian media cover those topics and how does it portray them? And how is the russian media perceived by russians themselves, considering that russian journalists have a tendency to be killed by unknown assailants. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_journalists_killed_in_Russia#2008-2011)

As for hollywood movies: those bastards are everywhere, but china (and other eastern countries) try to work against that by producing their own movies or subverting the main-stream (see Bollywood movies).

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I must agree wuth wrenchbread. There’re types, and they’re used in narration. Authors are praised for accurately reproducing existing types.

Stereotypes are toxic. The only good use for them is subversion or being part of prejudices of a character.

Did you read my answer do our dear and valued friend wrenchbread, who so eagerly plunders the internet for memes to bolster his drained firepower?

Stereotypes, when speaking about literature, are not necessarily similar to the term stereotype you would use in real life. Stereotypes can be employed as positive device, because they are not reduced to negative opinions (though outside of the realm of creating storys, they usually are), but can simply mean a field of values you would usually associate with a character.
It can be negative in the field of fiction, too, as stereotype can also be a term used to criticise flat characters.
But ultimately, in a very large piece of work, you will always have stereotypes, because it's impossible to describe every character in a non-stereotypical fashion unless you wish to write a few thousand pages for the first chapter.

So please refer to my answer to wrenchbread too, because the term isn't quite as limited as our gifted pic-linker believes it to be, and it's found its way into the vocabulary when analyzing or writing literature. The link I gave to wrenchie also gives some good examples of how stereotypes can be used to create positive results. (Such as diving into the characters depth after creating a stereotype, thus surprising the reader when a stereotype is broken and a person revealed)
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You know, while I like discussing finer points of narrative, I have a growing suspicion, that Mahouka anime is simply badly written. XD No one can agree on about what it has been.

Well, maybe the invasion wasn’t that important, but it was the main event of the last arc, and preparations for it were made in the previous arcs… I can’t understand how a decent writer can sideline the enemies, who are given a lot of screentime, to the extent of turning them into cardboard beating material without any personality. I honestly thought, that you don’t do things like this these days – now even irredeemably bad guys are given some human traits to make them more interesting and the show more entertaining and tense. That’s why the way Mahouka doesn’t invest anything in the enemies seems meaningful to me.

kuraiken said:
Many great books, some that play in the second world war (and boy do critics love those...) don't portray the second world war. They don't show multiple perspectives, they don't try to show both sides. Instead, they focus on what is most important in their project: for example the suffering of a german family in dresden during the bombing. Or the story of a young jewish family fleeing germany.


Hm, I can hardly imagine such a story to be one-sided, if it is not intentional. Usually at the personal or family level human traits are the most visible. People usually mention even smallest human gestures of the enemies – if not sympathy, then their enemies’ truths.

kuraiken said:
Can you provide examples of those harmful and perverted ideas the young magicians are spouting? I can't recall any that would fit the bill.


I think that Tatuya’s views on merit and effort are warped. Those ideas are supported by Miyuki, and are not opposed by anything or anyone.

kuraiken said:
So what's needed are things that exhibit dehumanizing ideas. ("Oh, let's kill all the chinese! They all deserve to die for it!"; "Bah, as expected, chinese were always inferior fighters. They can't stand against us!"; "God, do they look brutish. But they are chinese, after all.")


Hm, by the way, I think, Juumonji’s words and the last words of the Chinese captain can qualify as propaganda stuff.

kuraiken said:
While that's true, would that be good enough for you? Or wouldn't you just say: "A little sad melody changes nothing that their perspective isn't shown enough!"?


I won’t! By the way, I think that in this season Terror in Resonance was good at setting the moods in meaningful ways – a proper direction can hint at the underlying darkness very well.

kuraiken said:
Is there incest?


I am 100% sure there is.

kuraiken said:
Oh, that's great. I don't, and I'm honestly curious about how people in russia perceive the conflict in ukraine, and what they think about Mr. P's attitude on homosexuals.


Oh god, does everybody perceive something… Every opinion you can imagine – it is here. -_-“

Maybe that’s why I am so wary of propaganda – I’ve read so much about my “slave’s way of thinking” in the last year, that I can produce this discourse from any point even if woken in the middle of the night. At this very moment a Belarussian guy on a gaming forum tries to prove to me that I am a raving nationalist, who lives in a hellhole, and he is damn disrespectful… Sorry, I’ll end the rant.

kuraiken said:
Did you read my answer do our dear and valued friend wrenchbread, who so eagerly plunders the internet for memes to bolster his drained firepower?


Nah, sorry, just looked through it not very attentively – I was not at home and didn’t have enough time. I’ll do it later, if we disagree again.

Btw, thank to you, I’ve reread the Barthes essay, so, at least, the discussion is inspiring. :D

I am not sure if it works in English, but that’s why I tried to distinguish between types and stereotypes. Types are simply a sort of features that usually coexist in a person in reality – they’re ok. I think that it covers the cases, which you mention as a necessary usage of easily recognized patterns in character building.

Sterotypes – are types that don’t reflect reality and are harmful to people, they’re types gone bad, the way I use it. Of course, there’re different ways of using the term, but this one is close to the everyday language and represent an important idea.

Like, I guess, there’re different types of Chinese people – types that you can see on streets of Peking, types that you see in different provinces. It is important to reflect those properly, when writing on China. On the other hand, there is a stereotype, that all the Chinese students are spies or the infamous Chinese tiger mother.

I’ve looked through the text you linked, and it too starts with telling that stereotypes are bad, and then has several paragraphs on subversion.

kuraiken said:
1. I don't believe that everything that happens in Mahouka is necessary, but everything that is included in Mahouka is included via selection: the author decides this, and not something else, has to be included (in some parts, conventions of course play in, as some anime series have this dreadful habit of fanservice, which, of course, contributes nothing to the story itself).


Yes, that’s why I say that the absence of some things is meaningful. Yep, you can’t expect everything to be included, but, as I said, not making enemies one dimensional seems to be a norm these days, though there is the aforementioned problem of not understanding fully, what is the main point of Mahouka, and also it brings us to the 2.

kuraiken said:
2. That's not accurate, in my opinion. The reason being that (as I argued earlier) it's impossible to control the audiences reaction. You can try to, to some degree, but how any individual receives the medium depends entirely on that person and unless the person *allows* the medium to influence him, it won't in significane.


I believe in the theory of the ideal reader – someone, who the author pictures as the addressant of his utterance. I don’t think that people can create just for themselves – they create, so that other people may see their work (even if they don’t plan to publish it, there is a figure of the interlocutor). An author tries then to affect his reader.

I think that a certain template of a reader and reader’s supposed reaction is included in the work, though, of course, it can go not in the intended way, if the system is broken or is inadequate to the available readers (no one meets the demands of the work for it to be understood in the intended way).

kuraiken said:
3. This part, I'm not sure what you mean. Do you mean a. he can create anything that he wants to, even if its considered an undesireable creation (morality argument) or b. he is in full power of creating a universe entirely to his wishes (author-as-god argument)?


a. I was referring to your argument, that we can’t judge a work of art.

kuraiken said:
I don't think you could ever actually use "presumption of greatness" to consider a work as finite.


Nah, it’s not about evaluation, it’s about not nitpicking. That’s an approach that views a work of art as a system, where everything has its meaning without lose ends. It is used sometimes in literary analysis, I believe. Something to prevent from criticizing instead of analyzing.
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Maybe it's just me, but I don't see the point in having such an in-depth argument when at least one of the parties hasn't read the source material (at least, as far as I know). It's not like the anime was an amazing adaptation.

Anyways, I think people just need to look at this as a work of fiction and separate it from reality. Tatsuya and his cohorts are aliens from Mars, the GAA are aliens from Jupiter, and the USNA are from Venus. And the other countries can be the other planets. Switzerland is Pluto, which isn't a planet anymore. So it's neutral.
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dream_eater1012 said:
Maybe it's just me, but I don't see the point in having such an in-depth argument when at least one of the parties hasn't read the source material (at least, as far as I know). It's not like the anime was an amazing adaptation.

Anyways, I think people just need to look at this as a work of fiction and separate it from reality. Tatsuya and his cohorts are aliens from Mars, the GAA are aliens from Jupiter, and the USNA are from Venus. And the other countries can be the other planets. Switzerland is Pluto, which isn't a planet anymore. So it's neutral.


It's just you. It's rather hard to assume, that GAA are from Jupiter, when we were told, that they are Chinese - despicable foreigners. Even if it is fiction, it doesn't mean it isn't propaganda.
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
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It's just you. It's rather hard to assume, that GAA are from Jupiter, when we were told, that they are Chinese - despicable foreigners. Even if it is fiction, it doesn't mean it isn't propaganda.

Or it doesn't mean that it's propaganda Jakkubus ;) I'm now starting to believe that your account is solely made and destined to hate Mahouka isn't it?? Your signature shows it already like that other user that I remember, but can't recall its name. Now just your profile pic and then you're complete!! ^^
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deadoptimist said:

You know, while I like discussing finer points of narrative, I have a growing suspicion, that Mahouka anime is simply badly written. XD No one can agree on about what it has been.

Well, maybe the invasion wasn’t that important, but it was the main event of the last arc, and preparations for it were made in the previous arcs… I can’t understand how a decent writer can sideline the enemies, who are given a lot of screentime, to the extent of turning them into cardboard beating material without any personality. I honestly thought, that you don’t do things like this these days – now even irredeemably bad guys are given some human traits to make them more interesting and the show more entertaining and tense. That’s why the way Mahouka doesn’t invest anything in the enemies seems meaningful to me.

That doesn’t mean that Mahouka is badly written. It simply means that many people have their own personal interpretations of the anime, which is absolutely common. And I think the majority of people can agree what Mahouka is about, because it’s right there in the setting. School, magic.

That’s just not a valid argument. You assume someone has to go out of their way to portray someone as particular human, but that’s neither standard nor should it be. As long as someone does not dehumanize the enemy, you have the fiction of the unmentioned: The audience can realize by themselves that just because something isn’t mentioned doesn’t mean it’s not there. Everyone has a family, everyone has his own life. But you can’t portray it for everyone.
The portrayal of opponents in Mahouka is not remotely different from that in countless other Animes.
An example would be Aldnoah Zero. Yes, the main antagonist is attempted to be portrayed as more human: he wants revenge for his dead wife who died when invading planet earth. It doesn’t change the fact that there’s not remotely any sympathy for him and he just seems like a selfish bastard. (Oh no, she died! Well, maybe she shouldn’t have been invading other planets, killing people?)
Even if you attempt to give someone a valid reason, make human traits visible, it doesn’t really change that the enemy is a flat character with some reason to ultimately attack and kill as many as possible in revenge.

deadoptimist said:

Hm, I can hardly imagine such a story to be one-sided, if it is not intentional. Usually at the personal or family level human traits are the most visible. People usually mention even smallest human gestures of the enemies – if not sympathy, then their enemies’ truths.

Since often, those stories are written from a single perspective, and focus on the escape or the suffering and hardships, yes, quite often the human gestures don’t come from the enemies. Why? Because in historical novels, enemies simply didn’t often provide human gestures. And secondly, if you portray enemies as too human, too understanding, you eliminate or reduce the perceived danger and threat. So you can end up with the narrative of a jewish family, leaving Germany helped by Frenchmen, that, from the perspective of the family, fears any and all germans because they’d turn them in in a heartbeat (or so they believe). And that’s fine. Because the novel narrates a perception and gives an idea how it feels like and what sort of perception arises from the situation. The point is not to humanize the enemy, the point is to let one experience how acts of cruelty paired with fear can distort perception on a general level – so much that you might find the family in the end to hide and not trust a Germany family who offered them refuge. And as a result, the jewish family is found, and being led away, they see the german family watching with tears in their eyes, realizing that they fell victim to their own fear.
But how could you create a narrative to suggest fear to such an extent when you portray real human gestures from the enemy (say the SS)?? If the SS who follow them show acts of kindness or mercy, and the family knows this, it would prevent the same atmosphere of breathtaking fear and ever-approaching darkness.
Which is the one thing you seem to constantly overlook: to portray something doesn’t mean to add something to a narrative. It means you *change* the narrative and the story and influence nearly every aspect within, and as a result, you have to change what you are writing to accommodate it. The direction changes, the focus, the pacing, the themes, the atmosphere.
To assume you can always include particular humanization for the enemy means to assume every story should be written in a certain way, and that means you impose a standard on stories. That’s just insane.

deadoptimist said:

I think that Tatuya’s views on merit and effort are warped. Those ideas are supported by Miyuki, and are not opposed by anything or anyone.

Can you mention what views those are? And how they play into dehumanizing the enemy?
It just keeps returning to this: you mention something that you think is in the story, but you don’t tell where and what it is. If you refer to something in-text, please give a quotation, because otherwise I won’t know what you mean.


deadoptimist said:

Hm, by the way, I think, Juumonji’s words and the last words of the Chinese captain can qualify as propaganda stuff.

Which were? And why are they propaganda? (I can’t know what you’re pointing at, unless you either post the quotation or tell me episode and minute, so I can watch that scene. E.g. Which Chinese captain? The superior of Lu Gonghu? Or the one who leads the fleet against japan?)

deadoptimist said:

I won’t! By the way, I think that in this season Terror in Resonance was good at setting the moods in meaningful ways – a proper direction can hint at the underlying darkness very well.

But what if I would say that it’s not enough? Then we have two lines, your perception it’s enough, and mine that it’s just a token effort that meaninglessly interferes with the portrayal. I want a Chinese main character, I want to see how the people in the GAA perceive the conflict.
To which do we adhere? Which is acceptable as standard?

deadoptimist said:

Oh god, does everybody perceive something… Every opinion you can imagine – it is here. -_-“

Maybe that’s why I am so wary of propaganda – I’ve read so much about my “slave’s way of thinking” in the last year, that I can produce this discourse from any point even if woken in the middle of the night. At this very moment a Belarussian guy on a gaming forum tries to prove to me that I am a raving nationalist, who lives in a hellhole, and he is damn disrespectful… Sorry, I’ll end the rant.

Well, in the international (west-influenced) media, the portrayal of Russia is rather grim, particularly concerning how much opinion can be expressed in public in Russia and how well Putin manipulates the public through media. And while some go out of their way to portray Russia as particularly dark, it still seems that Russia does have a strong grip on how much the public knows or is made aware of.
Maybe it’s the distorted coverage in the western hemisphere, but it doesn’t seem like the majority of the Russian population are disturbed by the invasion of Ukraine, or the homophobic tendencies. So that’s why I assumed Russia was very much a propaganda nation. How else could a nation sit by and watch not just people in a neighboring country but also their own country suffer?
But if it’s a sore topic, we don’t need to go out on that tangent.

deadoptimist said:

Nah, sorry, just looked through it not very attentively – I was not at home and didn’t have enough time. I’ll do it later, if we disagree again.

Btw, thank to you, I’ve reread the Barthes essay, so, at least, the discussion is inspiring. :D

I am not sure if it works in English, but that’s why I tried to distinguish between types and stereotypes. Types are simply a sort of features that usually coexist in a person in reality – they’re ok. I think that it covers the cases, which you mention as a necessary usage of easily recognized patterns in character building.

Sterotypes – are types that don’t reflect reality and are harmful to people, they’re types gone bad, the way I use it. Of course, there’re different ways of using the term, but this one is close to the everyday language and represent an important idea.

Like, I guess, there’re different types of Chinese people – types that you can see on streets of Peking, types that you see in different provinces. It is important to reflect those properly, when writing on China. On the other hand, there is a stereotype, that all the Chinese students are spies or the infamous Chinese tiger mother.

I’ve looked through the text you linked, and it too starts with telling that stereotypes are bad, and then has several paragraphs on subversion.


Well, I don’t consider myself an expert in English, but type generally refers to a category of people or things, often identified on one or more attributes. Types are rather descriptive, in that they already contain the essence of what it’s about. E.g. “The type of people who always read a book’s ending first”, would be an example of a type. It already contains all information necessary, but it does not contain, hint or suggest anything more to the people grouped into that category.
Stereotypes are highly suggestive. E.g. They go beyond the fact that “the type of people who have darker skin color” and then attribute a wide variety of attributes to them that are not part of their type, but are attributed to them regardless.
Big, strong people – are a type of people.
Big strong people are always dumb – stereotype.

You are right to say that stereotypes in reality are usually harmful. (And as you noticed, the author of the source I quoted agrees)
The important fact is that we’re talking about a work of fiction, and in the realm of fiction, stereotypes become much more and are not necessarily bad. (As the author shows after she assures everyone she isn’t justifying stereotypes in reality are okay)
Stereotypes create connotative space: you can, with few words, say much more or create a more extensive idea about mood, setting, character, etc.
The friendly uncle, the grumpy grandpa. They’re far more than just that, but often it suits the narrative to reduce a character to the role they’re playing because they have to play that role to create the narrative.
Take the stereotype of the wife-beating husband. We can all agree, I think, that that’s a despicable practice. But he’s still a person. He’s more than a wife-beating husband, has dreams, fears, things he wants beyond anything that concerns his wife.
But if we wish to portray a story of fear, a story of intimidation where the reader can follow and understand the wife’s anguish and her absolute dread that prevents her from walking away, then we need the reader to see the husband as the wife sees him. It’s irrelevant if the wife’s perception of her husband is truthful or accurate, because what matters in that narrative is her perception.
If we were to go out of the way and show the husbands longing for a better income, for more love from his wife, his envy for his successful friends, his acts of kindness to the grandmother who lives above them – then we destroy the perspective of the wife. We create so much information in the reader that doesn’t hold up with what we know, that we would no longer understand the wife.
“Why, he’s human, too! Just talk to him. He feels other things than hate and rage, so there has to be a way.” Not only do we no longer understand the wife’s fear, but often we also start to dislike her. Start to shift blame *to* her. After all, her husband clearly isn’t the monster she makes him out to be!
That’s what I mean when I say: you can’t simply start humanizing everyone.
You can’t simply put something in a story and expect it not to change the perception of the story – which in some cases, can be very much to the detriment of the narrative.

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Yes, that’s why I say that the absence of some things is meaningful. Yep, you can’t expect everything to be included, but, as I said, not making enemies one dimensional seems to be a norm these days, though there is the aforementioned problem of not understanding fully, what is the main point of Mahouka, and also it brings us to the 2.

Absence can be meaningful, but that doesn’t mean it’s meaningful the way you think it is.
That, perhaps, is part of why we so strongly disagree about this.

The absence of significant portrayal of the antagonists as particularly human and giving far more space to their side of things would detract from other things. You’d have less Tatsuya, less other main characters, less academy-side characters, less of the academy plot, less of interaction between Tatsuya and others, less interaction of other side-characters (such as the investigators), etc.
You’d have to find places to put scenes for the antagonists that don’t detract from the pacing but still bear significance and you need a bigger reason than “well, this scene is here so people don’t think I’m against Chinese”.

To me, not going out of your way to focus more on the Chinese antagonists and thus reducing the portrayal of the main characters and the established side-characters is simply understandable. You have a story to tell, and you need to craft scenes that tell that story. Creating scenes that show just how human the antagonists are do not add to the story but rather change the perception of it – at the price of forgoing other aspects of the story.

And the absence of scenes that show exactly how human the Chinese antagonists simply don’t mean that the author didn’t care about Chinese and hates them. It means that he didn’t consider their perspective of the events to alter the story or to be beneficial of the narrative and perspective.
And I think the author is right in this. You’d have an entirely different mood and an entirely different perception of the story, because at the same time you make your antagonists more human, you make the main characters less human (and less important) by robbing them of their narrative space.

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I believe in the theory of the ideal reader – someone, who the author pictures as the addressant of his utterance. I don’t think that people can create just for themselves – they create, so that other people may see their work (even if they don’t plan to publish it, there is a figure of the interlocutor). An author tries then to affect his reader.

I think that a certain template of a reader and reader’s supposed reaction is included in the work, though, of course, it can go not in the intended way, if the system is broken or is inadequate to the available readers (no one meets the demands of the work for it to be understood in the intended way).

I don’t think I can subscribe to that since it seems to suggest authors craft works for an audience except themselves. It suggests the act of writing is, from the outset, so that you reach and affect people. And that would make every authors very presumptuous.

But it’s also beside the point: my argument is not what or how or why authors write in that part of my reply. It’s about the fact that you’re suggesting ways of how to alter Mahouka so it’d be more humanizing and I’m stating that it’s impossible to control the reaction of the audience.
People are just too different in their reception. They like and dislike different things, react strongly to different things. At the same time as you’d be happy to have a dual-perspective of the conflict, I’d be asking “What’s going on? Since when did this become a war-story and not a story about a guy in a magical school? What’s the point of creating all the characters in the school if they’re not used anymore because some antagonists rob all the screen-time?”

You assume that humanizing the enemy should be a standard and would only positively affect the story. I say otherwise and claim that as you pacify those that (like you) react strongly to the current portrayal, you’d find new people for whom you’d have ruined the story because you change what the story essential is about.

deadoptimist said:

I was referring to your argument, that we can’t judge a work of art.

My argument about not judging a work of art had a few more lines to it that showed that the term that disturbed me was the idea of rendering “judgement” of making a “verdict”.
It’s entirely possible to analyze art (or anything else for that matter) and to come to a conclusion.
The difference between analyzing something and coming to a conclusion and rendering a verdict or judgement is this: a judgement or verdict presumes it’s final and ultimate and ends the discussion.

“Mahouka is racist, whether you believe it or not. It just is.” is a judgement.

“I’ve found no passages in Mahouka that suggest or imply Chinese to be inferior to Japanese, or found any evidence that suggests that the portrayal of Chinese was chosen out of racist sentiments” is the conclusion of a analysis.

The former denies that any contrary opinions exist, the latter invites other arguments and conclusions to be brought forward.

My argument was not that specific works of art are “holy” or “beyond the realm of what you can encompass” or anything similar. It was about the way of the discussion and the assumption that you can find an ultimate standard works should adhere to that everyone would agree to. It was my way of saying that, regardless of what conclusion someone arrives at, it can never claim to be universal – it’s only that person’s conclusion.

The context is that you assume that there is a “standard” something that is “done today” and thus should always be done. It denies the fact that there are people who simply don’t share that point of view, and that you are thus speaking from your own personal opinions, not any universal standard but are trying to enforce that personal opinion (of what should be done nowadays) on everyone.

deadoptimist said:

Nah, it’s not about evaluation, it’s about not nitpicking. That’s an approach that views a work of art as a system, where everything has its meaning without lose ends. It is used sometimes in literary analysis, I believe. Something to prevent from criticizing instead of analyzing.

But that’s an approach to analyze a work, it has little to do whether the work actually is finite.
But you’re actually making my own points here.
If we consider a work finished so we can analyze it, and assume that everything has a meaning, does that not show you how shallow the idea of inserting humanization for humanization would be? It breaks right down to the level of “we’re inserting this piece of humanization right here, so they’re more humanized. Don’t worry, doesn’t affect plot or story – might affect the atmosphere and pacing negatively though. But we have to insert it, so people can point at it and feel satisfied there standard is met! Humanization right here!”
It’s inserting something for its own sake, regardless of how it affects the current direction and narrative. It would be a loose end, because it doesn’t impact anything but the audience’s reaction. Why make the Chinese more human if there is not a result of it in the actual story?
There certainly are stories where it’s essential for the atmosphere and the understanding of the conflict for the audience where you do that, but a magic high school adventure just simply isn’t one of them. It’s the perspective of a group of gifted people thrown into a crises that disturbs their daily life in that arc, it’s their perception that matters.


1. Have we so far any textual evidence that we can quote (either text or an episode number and minute) that dehumanizes Chinese?
2. If not, if we’re arguing about a nebulous standard of the portrayal of antagonists that some people consider as mandatory and consider necessary to any and all stories that in any way contain different nationalities, then we’re having a discussion between your idea of imposing your value system on everyone else (and mediums in general)

And in that respect, we can only agree to disagree. I do not think you can enforce a particular narrative or portrayal on any and all mediums in general because “you think it’s what should be done nowadays” and use that to demonize all works that don’t adhere to that standard. The absence of something does not necessary suggest the presence of something different. It primarily suggests the absence of something. Anything else is speculation and interpretation – and for those to have any value we *need* evidence from the text.

The argument: "Mahouka is propaganda and anti-chinese, because they do not show the chinese side of the conflict sufficiently enough" simply is invalid, because "sufficiently enough" is a quality that differs from person to person and thus means nothing more than "Mahouka is propaganda and chinese, because they do not show the chinese side of the conflict to a degree I find acceptable".
It's an opinion born from subjective values, not a fact.
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But Japan beside fodders has also strong ones, when GAA doesn't (Lu wasn't a big deal). Also that moment, when Chinese were close to achieve their goal, was just PIS on Japanese side, because Shiba siblings needed to shine.

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VudisOct 15, 2014 11:04 AM
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
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TKMike said:
I'm not that childisch ^^ I simply don't see any reason to discuss with you if you haven't provide any evidence that it's propaganda. Simply saying that the enemies are being portrayed as weaklings or dumb isn't a valid argument if the Japanese are also weak and stupid compared to Tatsuya and not being portrayed superior than a small part of an army that succeeded their mission if it weren't for Tatsuya or Miyuki :)

But Japan beside fodders has also strong ones, when GAA doesn't (Lu wasn't a big deal). Also that moment, when Chinese were close to achieve their goal, was just PIS on Japanese side, because Shiba siblings needed to shine.

Okay, now you're revealing yourself that it isn't propaganda to be honest. First Lu Gangshu fought against one that's on par with the 10 head clans and 2 who aren't weak and are stronger then the fodders of Japan. He destroyed those 3 as if they were nothing. The only problem was Mayumi. Simply because of 2 reasons.
1. He was outnumbered. There's no way that he would succeed if he's facing 2 strong mages and 2 elites on his own. Yet he managed to put up a fight and wrecked 3 out of 4.
2. He didn't see what Mayumi was really capable of in their last encounter, while Mayumi saw what he's capable of. So one had an advantage. If the situation was different, then maybe he could've won. In fact, Mayumi would be already dead if Tatsuya didn't destroyed that truck...

This is also the case with Tatsuya. He's simply overpowered, because everyone is underestimating him. If GAA knew that the one they were afraid of was there, then they wouldn't use a tactic like that, would they??
And the most important one about this whole propaganda that the Chinese are being portrayed as weakling argument.
Which one was superior??

The Japanese army or the GAA army if we leave out Tatsuya?? Why is it propaganda when the Japanese army wasn't strong enough to defeat the GAA army?? The reason why there is an army in Japan is because they serve to protect Japan right?? Yet they relied on students, since they've put up a much better fight than the Japanese army themself. So you think it's right that it's propaganda, when Japan itself failed?? I believe that the anime even portrayed it. Even the adults in Japan + the army weren't strong enough. Juumonji and Masaki were needed to lead them. Tatsuya was needed as a restoration device. Soo many things outside the failed army of Japan were needed to defeat a small group of the GAA army. The GAA army didn't use innocent of their own kind. They used machines instead. They even knew that the army they had wasn't enough and the reason why it was a distraction. Yet that distraction was able to kill alot of innocent people that the Japanese army failed to protect, while almost achieving their goal if it weren't for Mizuki's eyes and Miyuki's strength. 2 innocent citizens succeed to protect the thing. Innocent people succeed to defend Japan. The army not, they only stole the succes by using a neutral guy that even they fear that he would rebel. So tell me, how is this propaganda?? PIS is also BS, because I can also say that Japan won because of Tatsuya and Miyuki being on the side of Japan.... I can write many more and all the things I've listed here can be found during my previous comment. I fail to see the argument weak and dumb being a good argument that it's propaganda. I personally believe that it has propaganda elements, because everything has to attract their target. But it isn't made to be a propaganda, atleast the anime didn't. I exclude LN, because A: I just start readed it, but lack enough knowledge to say if it's propaganda or not and B: This is an anime-only thread and forum. I don't really understand why LN points that hasn't been pointed out in the anime can be used as an argument when it isn't about the LN. Srry for not using space and so on:p Didn't had enough time, but wanted to write down why I think your point doesn't make it propaganda.
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I have a modest proposal.

When the Chinese government stops using Japanese hatred as their "two minutes of hate" in order to prop up their increasingly corrupt dictatorship and when the Chinese government allows an honest assessment of the horrific abuse that Mao perpetrated on the country, and when the Chinese government no long seeks to destroy Tibetan culture, then we can have an honest discussion about Japanese propaganda in manga and animation.

I find it hilarious that some people are obsessed with the supposed propaganda in a work of fiction, but ignore the blatant propaganda that exists in reality.

Fair enough?
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I don’t think I can subscribe to that since it seems to suggest authors craft works for an audience except themselves. It suggests the act of writing is, from the outset, so that you reach and affect people. And that would make every authors very presumptuous.

Just to support this, my experience has been that the majority of people who go into writing as a profession do it because they genuinely enjoy it. An audience outside of themselves is just the icing on a cake. Most writers just write for themselves, though.

Plus, my experience has been that people who only write for others make utter garbage, since they often don't have any interest in self-improvement and care way too much about what other people think, therefore making them uninterested in any sort of critique that could help them.


And anyway, even if Mahouka is or isn't propaganda, does it really matter?
Plus, I could write a story from the point of view of someone who supports sex trafficking. Does that mean I myself also feel the same way?
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You know, while I like discussing finer points of narrative, I have a growing suspicion, that Mahouka anime is simply badly written. XD No one can agree on about what it has been.


That's what I thought as well. It's badly written or racist. Story line is non existence unless Tatsuya Stuness or wincest qualified as story line to you. Mahouka feel like a poor attempt at trying to excel in both slice of life and action genre(bringing in Chinese,war setting) but fail both. As a result,too much time spend on info dump/slice of life and neglect the villains background and detail.

kuraiken said:

That’s just not a valid argument. You assume someone has to go out of their way to portray someone as particular human, but that’s neither standard nor should it be.

Actually,it is standard at least in anime. It's what make a good story telling. For example, Gundam and even the alien that go war with human in Uchuu Senkan Yamato are portray better than the Chinese in Mahouka.

kuraiken said:
The important fact is that we’re talking about a work of fiction, and in the realm of fiction, stereotypes become much more and are not necessarily bad.


You've gotta be kidding me. Stereotype are always bad even in fiction especially when it comes to racial stereotype. I heard Asian people complain about the portrayal of Asian in Hollywood like how they are always portray as nerd, some martial art master and Dragon Lady.

Takuan_Soho said:
I have a modest proposal.

When the Chinese government stops using Japanese hatred as their "two minutes of hate" in order to prop up their increasingly corrupt dictatorship and when the Chinese government allows an honest assessment of the horrific abuse that Mao perpetrated on the country, and when the Chinese government no long seeks to destroy Tibetan culture, then we can have an honest discussion about Japanese propaganda in manga and animation.

I find it hilarious that some people are obsessed with the supposed propaganda in a work of fiction, but ignore the blatant propaganda that exists in reality.

Fair enough?


Because we are in anime/manga forum. If you really want to condemn China and it's propaganda,you can always do it in many other site such as Japan Today(but they also condemn Japan if Japan did something wrong). I also condemn China before,but not in anime forum. For example, I've condemn China anti Japanese riot last time but not here in Myanimelist,I think it was in China Smack if I remember correctly.
ZapredonOct 11, 2014 2:19 AM
But it's important to remember that a movie review is subjective;it only gives you one person's opinion.

http://www.classzone.com/books/lnetwork_gr08/page_build.cfm?content=analyz_media&ch=30

It doesn't matter if you like LoGH,Monster etc.If you are a jobless or college/school dropout living in your mom basement, you are still an unintelligent loser. Taste in anime does not make you a better person.If elitist don't exist, casual pleb and shit taste also don't exist.
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Takuan_Soho said:
I have a modest proposal.

When the Chinese government stops using Japanese hatred as their "two minutes of hate" in order to prop up their increasingly corrupt dictatorship and when the Chinese government allows an honest assessment of the horrific abuse that Mao perpetrated on the country, and when the Chinese government no long seeks to destroy Tibetan culture, then we can have an honest discussion about Japanese propaganda in manga and animation.

I find it hilarious that some people are obsessed with the supposed propaganda in a work of fiction, but ignore the blatant propaganda that exists in reality.

Fair enough?


Nope. For example I live far away from China and no one broadcast their propaganda here (mostly because they are too busy with Russian propaganda :P ). But Mahouka is rather a bit more subtle in propaganda, not so rough like Communists. It doesn't matter, that GAA would succed, if the conditions were a bit different. Because they weren't. Chinese looked like pathetic weaklings and that's what viewer gets. Author wrote Mahouka to appeal to full of complexes part of Japanese society.
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
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Zapredon said:

kuraiken said:

That’s just not a valid argument. You assume someone has to go out of their way to portray someone as particular human, but that’s neither standard nor should it be.

Actually,it is standard at least in anime. It's what make a good story telling. For example, Gundam and even the alien in Uchuu Senkan Yamato are portray better than the Chinese in Mahouka.

Bolded part makes you a person that people shouldn't take you as serious as how I did in the past(if we exclude your signature...).... Seriously, I hope you aren't serious here, but I can sadly tell that you are serious based on your comments in the past. Let me tell you one thing here. If you think that your personal preferences are facts in this world and the writing world, then you've really a long way to go my friend. There are already alot of people saying that I should ignore you, but I wanted to state this thing only, because of my thought about the last "sorta" discussion we had and every previous one you mentioned before.

ALL THE PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD ARE DIFFERENT FROM EACH OTHER AND HAVES THEIR OWN OPINION ABOUT MATTERS/SUBJECT THAT WOULD MAKE US DISAGREE WITH EACH OTHER. WHAT YOU LIKE ABOUT CERTAIN THINGS, DOESN'T NECESSARILY MEAN THAT THE "MAJORITY" AGREES WITH YOU. IN FACT, THE FACT THAT YOU THINK IT'S THE "STANDARD" OF GOOD STORYTELLING, MAKES YOU ALREADY THE PERSON WHO DOESN'T KNOW ABOUT THIS SMALL, YET VERY IMPORTANT THING IN THIS WORLD.

BUT

If you want to continue to take this dedicated path to solely hate on Mahouka(for whatever reason the anime has ever done to you) and only think that your preferences and opinion are the right one in this world, than my advice is that you should think before you write.

A nice example is this one that I bolded, or your comment that said that Tatsuya is a copy of Hei and Alucard, because those 2 were for you the original one, while they were copies too of older anime character (should mention here that Tatsuya has indeed some traits(noooo copies my friend, except in your own world maybe) from other anime characters, just like Hei and Alucard has. In fact, if you've watched a decent amount of anime, then you would've noticed that alot of characters has traits that resemblance each other. But ohwell, you probably forgot that, since you need every single little thing there is to hate the anime Mahouka and Tatsuya right??) and ofcourse many more.

It also seems that I'm not the only Chinese who thinks that you're more racist then the anime, since there was another comment of a Chinese that fellt the same way as I have that the "majority" of the people that are complaining here that this anime is about racism and propaganda are actually the more racist one.

And I must confess something here too. I let many of my Chinese and Asian friends read these comments in this forum and they all agree that some here are ignorant, naive and more(that I would prevent to write in this thread.) and has weak arguments, incl. from my friends that don't like Mahouka nor Tatsuya at all.

In the end, based on all your previous discussions. The thing that was clearly to me is that you don't hate the anime for all this "supposedly" racism stuffs or propaganda stuffs. You just don't like the writing style of the author of this anime and just want to use every single thing there is to justify your reasoning. Just look at your signature that has grown over the last few months. You added every single thing that has been mentioned about Mahouka in your signature. I was surprised that you didn't add : "Mahouka's info dump is the anime version of my engineering book" or something towards that direction, since you spammed that all over the forum too...


I believe that I can write more about this and the reason why I am writing something like this, is because your whole comment isn't about why it's propaganda and only about why you dislike this anime and the "suppossedly" racism(DO REMEMBER THAT RACISM ISN'T THE SAME AS PROPAGANDA).. I believe that a thread like that is already created. So go there with all your complaints... And you may have the last word here;) I don't care about it.
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TKMike said:
Zapredon said:


Actually,it is standard at least in anime. It's what make a good story telling. For example, Gundam and even the alien in Uchuu Senkan Yamato are portray better than the Chinese in Mahouka.

Bolded part makes you a person that people shouldn't take you as serious as how I did in the past(if we exclude your signature...).... Seriously, I hope you aren't serious here, but I can sadly tell that you are serious based on your comments in the past. Let me tell you one thing here. If you think that your personal preferences are facts in this world and the writing world, then you've really a long way to go my friend. There are already alot of people saying that I should ignore you, but I wanted to state this thing only, because of my thought about the last "sorta" discussion we had and every previous one you mentioned before.

ALL THE PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD ARE DIFFERENT FROM EACHT OTHER AND HAVES THEIR OWN OPINION ABOUT MATTERS/SUBJECT THAT WOULD MAKE US DISAGREE WITH EACH OTHER. WHAT YOU LIKE ABOUT CERTAIN THINGS, DOESN'T NECESSARILY MEAN THAT THE "MAJORITY" AGREES WITH YOU. IN FACT, THE FACT THAT YOU THINK IT'S THE "STANDARD" OF GOOD STORYTELLING, MAKES YOU ALREADY THE PERSON WHO DOESN'T KNOW ABOUT THIS SMALL, YET VERY IMPORTANT THING IN THIS WORLD.

BUT

If you want to continue to take this dedicated path to solely hate on Mahouka(for whatever reason the anime has ever done to you) and only think that your preferences and opinion are the right one in this world, than my advice is that you should think before you write.

A nice example is this one that I bolded, or your comment that said that Tatsuya is a copy of Hei and Alucard, because those 2 were for you the original one, while they were copies too of older anime character (should mention here that Tatsuya has indeed some traits(noooo copies my friend, except in your own world maybe) from other anime characters, just like Hei and Alucard has. In fact, if you've watched a decent amount of anime, then you would've noticed that alot of characters has traits that resemblance each other. But ohwell, you probably forgot that, since you need every single little thing there is to hate the anime Mahouka and Tatsuya right??) and ofcourse many more.

It also seems that I'm not the only Chinese who thinks that you're more racist then the anime, since there was another comment of a Chinese that fellt the same way as I have that the "majority" of the people that are complaining here that this anime is about racism and propaganda are actually the more racist one.

And I must confess something here too. I let many of my Chinese and Asian friend read these comments in this forum and they all agree that some here are ignorant, naive and more(that I would prevent to write in this thread.) and has weak arguments, incl. those who don't like Mahouka nor Tatsuya at all.

In the end, based on all your previous discussions. The thing that was clearly to me is that you don't hate the anime for all this "supposedly" racism stuffs or propaganda stuffs. You just don't like the writing style of the author of this anime and just want to use every single thing there is to justify your reasoning. Just look at your signature that has grown over the last few months. You added every single thing that has been mentioned about Mahouka in your signature. I was surprised that you didn't add : "Mahouka's info dump is the anime version of my engineering book" or something towards that direction, since you spammed that all over the forum too...


I believe that I can write more about this and the reason why I am writing something like this, is because your whole comment isn't about why it's propaganda and only about why you dislike this anime and the "suppossedly" racism(DO REMEMBER THAT RACISM ISN'T THE SAME AS PROPAGANDA).. I believe that a thread like that is already created. So go there with all your complaints... And you may have the last word here;) I don't care about it.


Oh,I'm not sure about writing world in general but for anime,yes,it's standard and common. It's a FACT that the anime I WATCH so far portray everyone as human. Even alien is more human than Chinese. Does it make a better story telling? It certainly does at least in my opinion.

You can call me bias,insult me whatever you want but it won't stop from thinking Mahouka is racist or had bad writing. And it certainly won't make me change my signature buddy.

Mod Edit: Removed baiting.
VudisOct 15, 2014 11:09 AM
But it's important to remember that a movie review is subjective;it only gives you one person's opinion.

http://www.classzone.com/books/lnetwork_gr08/page_build.cfm?content=analyz_media&ch=30

It doesn't matter if you like LoGH,Monster etc.If you are a jobless or college/school dropout living in your mom basement, you are still an unintelligent loser. Taste in anime does not make you a better person.If elitist don't exist, casual pleb and shit taste also don't exist.
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it's amazing how many people in this thread don't actually understand what the word racist means
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it's amazing how many people in this thread don't actually understand what the word racist means

Yes, this kind of thing makes me sad for humanity.

And even though people still just want to complain, it's just wasted breath on something insignificant. But people tend to do that a lot, for whatever reason.

I guess people just want to feel superior and that their opinion is the right one.

Seriously, though, I don't see why people care so much about this. All of this is just an opinion, like any other one out there.
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Found this in other forum. This is a very interesting read especially on how people from China view this show(some bolded part is something that has been brought up by members of Myanimelist).

Before I start, please allow me to say there are many good reasons that people declaring this will be the most controversial anime in 2014. Please allow me to explain:


I can definitely understand people saying the main characters are Gary-stu or Mary su. Tatsuya and Miyuki were portrayed as god-tier characters that their drawbacks feels irreverent or just having the excuse to say: they are not perfect. Here is the thing: Tatsuya is a weed, but who needs basics in magic spoiler[if you can overwhelm your opponent in seconds, literally?] I often heard people calling this Chuck Norris, the anime; I always hate myself for unable to debunk that idea, because no matter how hard I can list all the "flaws" the characters have, in the real fights that count...they are just...flawless.

Oh, for anime watchers, please do get used to this formulaic introduction every time Tatsuya enters the fight:

[Miyuki: My borther is super awesome! He is unbeatable!
Others: Yeah righttt...you liar.
Tatsuya: Since my sister's honor is on the line, I will have to destroy you (curb-stomping his opponent)
opponent: You are awesome!
Miyuki: I told you.]


But the reason this anime being controversial has a little to do with characters, it's how politically-heavy and biased this fiction (yes I am aware it's just a fiction) is. Especially given how much tension is between various Asian countries.

You know, it's ok to have your setting aimed negatively at certain groups or country, as long as it did not go overboard. Several Literary classics have done that. But Mahouka ignores all kinds of sugarcoating and potential bias, and willing to continuously portraying certain country and group as ultimate "villains", and wants audience to have enjoyments when seeing those "villains" getting either nuked, destroyed or becoming "particles".


Remember seeing the big fleet getting exterminated in the first anime scene? [Because evil Chinese armada wants to invade Japan (lol wut) and our hero must stop them since they are portrayed as savages ]

And here's the most ironic things in Mahouka:

World war III? No, it's world war-II again except this time China and Japan's roles being reversed. And even more disgusting, Rape of Nanjing (Massacre that took away 300000+ lives of Chinese) now China is taking this role in the fiction. No one asking for balance in political preference, but can Mahouka at least stop mocking the historically victim countries like that? If you refuse to admit history, fine. But don't let those victim countries do the same thing in your novel that Japan did realistically! That's beyond suspension of any belief!

And wow...the novel did all the expositions, foreshadows and righteous reasons to justify nuking [Chinese Union] as necessary and reasonable.

worst of all, if making certain countries as villains doesn't satisfy the author, he blatantly stating people living on China towns in Japan are all spies or traitors, and should be alienated and better...exterminated. Even immigrants were being targeted into this madness?

And please don't make your villains sound stupid only to make Tatsuya smart, the author is actually doing Tatsuya disservice.

All in all, I hope Mahouka can still enjoy the anime as the show goes on. But would it be too much to ask...can you guys being a little cautious on "I cannot wait to see Tatsuya did XXXXX on volume X!" because for some people in other countries, or originate from those countries, that's...really insensitive.

PS: In China, various websites already brought simulcast rights for most spring anime, but no one is daring to touch Mahouka. But Mahouka is actually currently the most popular show in Chinese internet show right now with 20 million+ views. People over there can't wait to see how their country is portrayed and already give the show nicknames (although not very accurate if you read novel): The Legendary Hero who Annihilates China and Humilates America / The Light of Yammato / The Battle Spirits of Eastern Hope.

It is controversial, and that's the biggest selling point for the Chinese audience, because some admit: It's a surreal and ironic feeling to see China actually become an invader, and realistically it is amusing for wrong reasons.


I apologize if anyone felt offended, and wish everyone has a great spring anime season!


As Takuan_Soho mention before, people from China does indeed think Mahouka is racist,nationalistic,propaganda(or somewhere along those line) since they see it as controversy show to the point no websites in China want to brought simulcast right for Mahouka.In fact,Mahouka is one of the watch show in China for the wrong reason,'controversy'. This kinda apply to me as well since one of the reason I keep watching Mahouka is also because of controversy.

I also agree with him that it's ironic to see the role of China and Japan have been reversed where in WW2,Japan is the villain that invade China but in Mahouka, it's China that invade Japan while Japan don't invade other countries. Of course,I'm aware today,China is being view negatively more than Japan,though China has yet to invade Japan.

LOL! Chinese people calling Mahouka The Legendary Hero who Annihilates China and Humilates America. Seems to me everyone including Chinese people like to make fun of Mahouka. Indeed,Mahouka is easily the most controversial anime of 2014. I myself have never seen an anime as controversial as this.
ZapredonOct 11, 2014 10:10 PM
But it's important to remember that a movie review is subjective;it only gives you one person's opinion.

http://www.classzone.com/books/lnetwork_gr08/page_build.cfm?content=analyz_media&ch=30

It doesn't matter if you like LoGH,Monster etc.If you are a jobless or college/school dropout living in your mom basement, you are still an unintelligent loser. Taste in anime does not make you a better person.If elitist don't exist, casual pleb and shit taste also don't exist.
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Found this in other forum. This is a very interesting read.


In the novels it is made clear that what started WWIII wasn't caused by aggression, rather it was a conflict between environmental migration and national sovereignty.

So no, Japan's and China's roles were not reversed. China was not portrayed as being wrong in the story.

Even when the writer touched upon the Korean invasion of Tsushima and the death's of nearly all the Japanese inhabitants he stressed that the Koreans were not wrong, but rather that was what every country (including Japan) did at that time.

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Zapredon said:
Found this in other forum. This is a very interesting read.


In the novels it is made clear that what started WWIII wasn't caused by aggression, rather it was a conflict between environmental migration and national sovereignty.

So no, Japan's and China's roles were not reversed. China was not portrayed as being wrong in the story.

Even when the writer touched upon the Korean invasion of Tsushima and the death's of nearly all the Japanese inhabitants he stressed that the Koreans were not wrong, but rather that was what every country (including Japan) did at that time.


In Mahouka,did China invade Japan because of environmental migration? Reason don't justify war.It just lip service. Any country that try to invade is view as villain. Also,in Mahouka,did Japan ever invade other countries?

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Takuan_Soho the one that brought up LN first.
VudisOct 15, 2014 11:14 AM
But it's important to remember that a movie review is subjective;it only gives you one person's opinion.

http://www.classzone.com/books/lnetwork_gr08/page_build.cfm?content=analyz_media&ch=30

It doesn't matter if you like LoGH,Monster etc.If you are a jobless or college/school dropout living in your mom basement, you are still an unintelligent loser. Taste in anime does not make you a better person.If elitist don't exist, casual pleb and shit taste also don't exist.
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In Mahouka,did China invade Japan because of environmental migration? Reason don't justify war.It just lip service. Any country that try to invade is view as villain. Also,in Mahouka,did Japan ever invade other countries?



Nice that the discussions for Mahouka here is still alive :)

Japan didn't invade other countries since they are too busy constantly infighting between themselves with the 10 MC's can't be said to be under the control of the government and the government is only slightly influenced by the 10 MC's.Everyone has it's own agenda and faction and just basically gets united in event's like in Yokohama or Okinawa.

For propaganda,as I said before I can't call it propaganda since:

-Japan is not portrayed as a hero of justice and even shown to be as bad as any country with their discrimination's,inhumane experiments and later on back stabbing and infighting within.

-MC's Tatsuya and Miyuki don't fight for peace,justice,for country,blah,blah,they fight for each others safety and protection,nothing else.

-story doesn't revolve around Japan vs GAA or USNA or any other country like for Code Geass or another anime that has a similar storyline.The story is about Tatsuya and Miyuki and their daily lives either it be fighting another country,Japanese,vampires,etc,or just doing school stuff.Another side of the story has too many spoilers,just search Dahan and Zhou's character profile in wikia for further info :)

-In Yokohama arc the only characters that fought for country is Masaki and Juumonji,Tatsuya fought to protect Miyuki's peace,the other First High students fought for their safety. and later escaped.


-Tatusya is not a hero of justice or nationalistic,he will kill anyone that will disturb Miyuki's peace and safety (as long as it doesn't have high political problems later on for him and Miyuki,unless Miyuki gets almost killed again).even if they are from the JSDF,10 MC's,Japanese government or from another foreign country.Think if the Saegusa clan will start to target Miyuki or harm her,he will decompose everyone of them even Mayumi if she has shown to be hostile.

-Satou can't be called nationalistic,blah blah since he has portrayed the Japanese can be more evil than the GAA.
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Nice that the discussions for Mahouka here is still alive :)


Cause necromancy is fun. :P

Japan didn't invade other countries since they are too busy constantly infighting between themselves with the 10 MC's can't be said to be under the control of the government and the government is only slightly influenced by the 10 MC's.Everyone has it's own agenda and faction and just basically gets united in event's like in Yokohama or Okinawa.


Sorry, but that is bullshit. If it was true, Shiba siblings identity would be already known among Ten Master Clans, thanks to Tatsuya's showy performances. But no, no one really tried to investigate him, because he is a precious friend...

For propaganda,as I said before I can't call it propaganda since:

-Japan is not portrayed as a hero of justice and even shown to be as bad as any country with their discrimination's,inhumane experiments and later on back stabbing and infighting within.

-MC's Tatsuya and Miyuki don't fight for peace,justice,for country,blah,blah,they fight for each others safety and protection,nothing else.


-Tatusya is not a hero of justice or nationalistic,he will kill anyone that will disturb Miyuki's peace and safety (as long as it doesn't have high political problems later on for him and Miyuki,unless Miyuki gets almost killed again).even if they are from the JSDF,10 MC's,Japanese government or from another foreign country.Think if the Saegusa clan will start to target Miyuki or harm her,he will decompose everyone of them even Mayumi if she has shown to be hostile.


Um, what do you have with that "hero of justice" thing? It's not the main problem here. The problem lies in how Chinese are presented. Leaving out good vs evil case, they are portrayed as weak and pathetic. And before you say, that they would succed, if Doge siblings weren't there, it's just making excuses. That moment was PIS on Japanese side and it was written that way only to make siblings shine.

-story doesn't revolve around Japan vs GAA or USNA or any other country like for Code Geass or another anime that has a similar storyline.The story is about Tatsuya and Miyuki and their daily lives either it be fighting another country,Japanese,vampires,etc,or just doing school stuff.Another side of the story has too many spoilers,just search Dahan and Zhou's character profile in wikia for further info :)


The story is about wanking to Tatsuya's power and Miyuki's beaty. That's all. :)

-In Yokohama arc the only characters that fought for country is Masaki and Juumonji,Tatsuya fought to protect Miyuki's peace,the other First High students fought for their safety. and later escaped.


How that is making GAA less pathetic?

-Satou can't be called nationalistic,blah blah since he has portrayed the Japanese can be more evil than the GAA.


When Japan was presented as a country in worse light than GAA?
No wonder, dragon with no head must be retarded.
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The story is about wanking to Tatsuya's power and Miyuki's beaty. That's all. :)

This one I agree. The story is about Tatsuya and Miyuki and not GAA and Japan :)


How that is making GAA less pathetic?

Japan's army being weak maybe???????

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Extract from volume 8 chapter 2:


A big black male teenager[4], who wore a disheveled worn out army uniform — a ‘Left Blood’.

Due to the intensification of the twenty years of continuous border conflicts, the American (at the time it was still the USA) forces garrisoned in Okinawa eventually withdrew to Hawaii and left behind their children. The majority of them were not abandoned by their parents, but rather because their fathers had died in the war. However, many of them were taken in and raised by the National Defense force who had inherited the base, afterwards they became part of the military.

They are valiant soldiers who superbly fulfill the duty of defending the border, and many of their children also become soldiers. However, a private ***Okinawa Tourist Guide website contained an article warning that many of those children, in short the second generation, were known for behaving badly so one should be wary of them***.


Form me this is a bit racist, not to the Chinese but to the Blacks people
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Extract from volume 8 chapter 2:


A big black male teenager[4], who wore a disheveled worn out army uniform — a ‘Left Blood’.

Due to the intensification of the twenty years of continuous border conflicts, the American (at the time it was still the USA) forces garrisoned in Okinawa eventually withdrew to Hawaii and left behind their children. The majority of them were not abandoned by their parents, but rather because their fathers had died in the war. However, many of them were taken in and raised by the National Defense force who had inherited the base, afterwards they became part of the military.

They are valiant soldiers who superbly fulfill the duty of defending the border, and many of their children also become soldiers. However, a private ***Okinawa Tourist Guide website contained an article warning that many of those children, in short the second generation, were known for behaving badly so one should be wary of them***.


For me this is a bit racist too, not to the Chinese but to the Blacks people

Hmm it can be seen as racist, especially that the black race are a target for violent and so on, but this isn't pointed towards the whole black race. But only towards those who has lost their dad and joined the millitary.

Also as it states here. The media is warning here that "many" are badly behaved. Meaning that not everyone of them are badly behaved. Also if we look at it from the real world. In Netherland, the Muslim religions are portrayed as terrorist and badly behaved people too in different medias. But the people who knows Muslims can say that the medias are portraying them very badly, since Muslims are one of the kindest one I've ever met. It's only because of a small group of Muslims that they look very bad. So maybe the author meant that too. But I dunno, I personally don't see it as racism. It's a little bit racist, but every animes, movies and so on contain little racism like these.

Another thing would be this :) Not saying that the video is right. But it's about the message that already many knows :) Don't always trust/judge everything you read or see, especially the medias.
https://www.facebook.com/occupyforlifeonearth/posts/637445113036633
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Form me this is a bit racist, not to the Chinese but to the Blacks people


That's because you are ignorant. Sorry if I am sounding mean, but that is the case.

This wasn't something that Satou made up, the problem of "half children" is a constant, not just in Okinawa, but also in Korea and Vietnam. Far too often the US army abandoned the children of their soldiers in the host countries, letting them suffer discrimination and hatred. Give Satou credit, at least he ascribed the father's lack of presence to their dying in war instead of just leaving their "bastards" behind (which unfortunately was often the case).

Though to be fair, it wasn't just Americans, the French in Indochina, the Dutch in Indonesia, the British in their colonies, also did the same thing.

I know of what I talk, I've met their descendents, in Korea, in Vietnam, and yes in Japan. While I can fault the host countries for their discrimination, they at least have the excuse of being forced to accept the US military, the US doesn't have that excuse for ignoring the result of their soldier's "liberty".
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alien321 said:
Form me this is a bit racist, not to the Chinese but to the Blacks people


That's because you are ignorant. Sorry if I am sounding mean, but that is the case.


are you sure?


While I can fault the host countries for their discrimination



And this is not racism? Even if there are excuses is always racism.
Anyway I'm reading the entire novel and is full of propaganda, but to Tatsuya. ^^

Tatsuya is great
Tatsuya is good
Tatsuya is beautiful
Tatsuya is ...

Too bad if the author had been more balanced, it would have been a great novel
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Thread cleaned.
I had to remove a lot of posts because it was just an on-going back and forth baiting.
You should really try to calm down or the thread might be locked due to the insults being thrown by mahouka vs non mahouka fans.
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