This episode had a really great start then somehow went completely to shit. The story started with a good premise, we have a company which pollutes the nearby sea and causing a new type of disease due to pollution. We have a girl which we could relate to and the usual comedic relief characters in the shape of the inn owner and the cab driver. It was all going good until Black Jack operated on the little girl and run across Tsukiko, which changed the focus of the story from finding a cure for the disease to curing exclusively Tsukiko. I will list the problems after that;
1. Why on earth Black Jack decided to act like a spoiled brat and insisted operating on Tsukiko in the inn when there is a perfectly equipped hospital nearby. By doing that not only he wasted precious time to start the operation, therefore risking his patient's life, he also had to make long preparations to turn the inn into an operating room. Not to mention, no matter what he does there is no way the inn could be as sterile as an actual operating room of a hospital.
2. How come people of the town supposedly help Tsukiko yet seemingly no one warns her not to go diving in a polluted sea, or take precautions to stop her. They also buy poisoned fishes from her as an act of good will, yet no no one makes sure that Tsukiko doesn't eat the poisoned fishes she caught, which most likely she does.
3. We understand that Tsukiko is a mentally challenged girl, yet she behaves more stupidly beyond her mental capacity. She should have known that diving with a crippled leg is a really bad idea. Her leg could get cramped or give up any moment and cause her to drown. This is pretty much a basic logic which she should be aware of even with her mental capacity. It's also a miracle that she didn't get pneumonia or something by living in a damp cave right next to the sea.
4. It simply doesn't make sense that they can't make a health card for Tsukiko . She is obviously a mentally challenged girl with no real awareness of the things happening around. She also doesn't have any relatives to look after her or any official documents as expected. I'm pretty sure the government has specific laws to take care people like her and they can't just discard without providing any support. They could have at least taken her case to the court and they would have probably won as the court shows sympathy to the ones who were affected by the pollution due to the company's waste management.
5. We have already seen and heard during the anime that Black Jack has amassed a great deal of money in exchange of his services. Yet somehow he goes asking others for money when he should be perfectly capable of take care of Tsukiko 's monetary needs. It simply doesn't make sense, at all.
6. How come Tsukiko managed to get out of inn without anyone noticing and walked down a long staircase when her legs were barely healed. Leaving all that aside, they should have watched over her all the time because she is mentally challenged and does stupid things.
All in all, it was a huge mistake to throw the logic out of the window in favor of feels in this episode. The focus of the story should have been finding a cure for the disease, not curing Tsukiko. It's as if the subplot took over the main plot halfway in the story. The only part of the episode I really liked was the story of the mermaid told through the murals.
Normally I wouldn't write such a long article to criticize an episode of a show but it really pisses me off to see a potential going to a waste like this. Just my two cents. |