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Dec 9, 2022 4:55 AM
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Hey there! Saw the title and wondering what the hell I am smoking? Well now that I have your attention, let's dive right into why I made this topic.

To start things off, we need to go over what a Plot Contrivance is (defintion from google so we are all on the same page):

A contrived plot is one in which the events unfold in a way that simply doesn't make sense or seems forced.



So what am I talking about when I say this series is the worst written Gundam? Well it has to do with one particular event that takes places in Episode 1 of Witch of Mercury:

The Assassination attempt on Miorine Rembran's dad.



What we have with this event is the following:
1. An event that is completely unknown to our Characters Miorine and Suletta.
2. An event that was planned in advance. I am sure you don't just wake up one day and say to yourself "Now would be a good day to kill my boss by planting a bomb on his shuttle... you kinda gotta plan something like that in advance.
3. An event that is set to happen at a fixed time (you can go back and see in episode 1 around the 21 minute mark we are LITERALLY ABOUT TO SET OFF THE BOMB MOMENTS AFTER THE DUEL BETWEEN GUEL AND MIORINE ENDS)
4. An event that our Characters Miorine and Suletta cannot control.

^so let's break down these problems.



If that was all it was to this issue, it wouldn't be that big a deal... but dear god did our FMC save just the right person the plot needed!.

Turns out that little miss Miorine is just a minorly important character (Sarcasm so heavy in this statement Jupiter is looking like a paper airplane). Here is what happens because Suletta "rescues" Miorine in the first three minutes, and brings her back to the school:


I want to point out these are all events based on The FIRST THREE episodes of Witch of Mercury. You can completely ignore the Prologue...







1. A duel is established between Guel and Suletta. The Duel happens because Suletta wants Guel to apologize for wrecking Miorine's greenhouse.

2. Miorine steals the code to use Gundam Aerial in a duel against Guel. Suletta is not in the Gundam when the fight begins.

3. Guel's father plans to assassinate Miorine's dad by blowing up his transport. THIS IS AN EVENT THAT WAS PLANNED IN ADVANCE, WITH NO WAY OF BEING PREVENTED BEFOREHAND BY OUR CHARACTERS.

4. Guel loses the duel, due to Suletta jumping into the Gundam halfway into the fight.

5. Due to Guel losing the duel WITHIN LITERAL MINUTES OF THE BOMB WINDOW, the assassination of Miorine's dad is called off because the duel nullifies the engagement of Guel and Miorine. He will not become the boss now because Guel lost this duel.

6. Due to dueling in a "forbidden type of mobile suit", Suletta is detained as a Witch.

7. A trial is held to determine whether Suletta's suit is a Gundam. The stakes are "we are voiding your duel due to an illegal Gundam and will be destroying the machine."
This was not for debate until...

8. Miorine, reveals she is the President's daughter, comes into the meeting and proposes another duel because those are the rules her father established.

9. Suletta wins her second duel against Guel, and is allowed to remain in the school with her Gundam.








Now let's break down each of these points, but with one tiny, miniscule change. you can choose one of the following:

1. What if Suletta and Miorine never ran into each other in the first three minutes?.
2. What if Suletta enrolled in the school 1, 12, or even 24 hours later?
3. What if it wasn't Suletta that rescued Miorine, but someone else?
4. What if Miorine hopped on a transport and booked it to Earth on this day?

(Each of these plot points match with the previously stated 9 from above)

1. The Duel never occurs, and Guel's reputation is not ruined.

2. Miorine is no longer at the school/hasn't run into Suletta, so she doesn't steal Gundam Aerial and use it in a duel.

3. Guel's father carries out the assassination against Miorine's dad, the president, and becomes President in his place.

4. Because there is no duel with Guel, Miorine and Guel are still engaged.

5. Refer to point 3 for this one, but the bomb goes off because no duel ever occurred.

6. If Suletta ever duels at this training school, she will be branded a witch, and have her Gundam confiscated or destroyed.

7. Because Miorine's dad is dead, and a new president is running the company, Miorine cannot bail out Suletta... because she no longer has any power.

8. Miorine is now completely powerless due to the death of her father, and Guel's father controls her future.

9. Suletta eventually has to duel at the school, has her Gundam confiscated/destroyed with no way to prevent this without Miorine's intervention, and is kicked out of the school.



You see, the thing about plot contrivances is that they AREN'T ALL BAD, AS LONG AS YOU PUT CONTROL OF THE EVENTS IN YOUR CHARACTERS' HANDS.

Let me give you an example from Mobile Suit Gundam Iron Blooded Orphans:

Kudelia Aina Bernstein's decision to choose the CGS to escort her to earth forever alters the fate of the characters in the CGS (the company that will eventually become Tekkadan). CGS becomes Tekkadan because Gjallarhorn attacks them, seeking to eliminate Kudelia. Because portions of the CGS choose to flee, they leave behind the main core of what will be the future Tekkadan. This is the event that enables Orga to enact his takeover of the CGS.

One would say this is a pretty big Plot Contrivance yes? Not exactly, because the anime points out that Kudelia would have been attacked by Gjallarhorn Regardless of who she chose. Kudelia's father was after her because he feared what her political activism was doing to their family name.

Would the story have changed had Kudelia not chosen the CGS? Absolutely, but Kudelia's dilemma was always present with the Gjallarhorn attack, and her CHOICE to choose the CGS was one she made herself. After the CGS drove off Gjallarhorn and was altered to be the new company Tekkadan, they could have cut ties with Kudelia then and there...

But they didn't by CHOICE.



The same cannot be said for Episode 1 of Witch of Mercury. The entirety of Episode 1 is written with the objective of PREVENTING AN ASSASSINATION THAT IS COMPLETELY UNRELATED TO THE ACTIONS OF OUR MAIN CHARACTERS. They don't even know what they have done, but their "fated meeting" is a plot contrivance that has damaged the entirety of Witch of Mercury from episode one.

The Story of Witch of Mercury quite literally only works because THE ENTIRE FIRST EPISODE BENDS TO PREVENT THIS ONE EVENT.


Thank you for coming to my TED Talk.
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Dec 9, 2022 5:07 AM
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Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer
Dec 9, 2022 5:12 AM
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Gundam SEED Destiny exists~

And too early to judge Witch From Mercury, I will wait and see what they will do with the Earthnoids/Spacenoids tensions~
Dec 9, 2022 5:16 AM
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I honestly don’t even see what’s bad about this. The prevented assassination serves to establish the importance of the duels in world affairs and introduce the running theme of the school being a microcosm of the world’s corporate conflicts, not to mention the theme of the school’s students being largely ignorant of the wider conflicts around them due to living in a bubble of peace.

Meanwhile, trying to include the core cast directly into the assassination plot would be a subplot in its own right that would be far too much for a single first episode, and would most likely be completely unworkable within the planned framework of Suletta and Miorine’s character arcs.

Your only criticism of this point, meanwhile, is that it would be prevented in a completely hypothetical scenario where things went differently… which applies to all plot points in all of fiction

Also, do not even begin to say something is the “Worst Written Gundam Show” when SEED Destiny exists
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Dec 9, 2022 5:23 AM
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You have zero idea what the Tempest is…?
Dec 9, 2022 6:01 AM
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I'm trying really hard to understand your point but I can't chief
Dec 9, 2022 6:30 AM
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NewestPersonHere said:
Gundam SEED Destiny exists~

And too early to judge Witch From Mercury, I will wait and see what they will do with the Earthnoids/Spacenoids tensions~

yeah the witch from mercury is getting more serious every episode and the aerial is also captivating.
Dec 9, 2022 6:52 AM
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boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Until you realise the kind of author tatsuki fujimoto is and know that he doesn't normally write action and that chainsaw man isn't a shounen as much as it is a deconstruction/reimagining of it hence the asspulls which are a mirror of the genre itself and its numerous issues, not saying chainsaw man is a 10/10 best of all time, just saying that setting up rules and judging things by them in a story are pretty pointless if they don't apply to them at all, you can't say a question is wrong because you using the wrong formula gives you the wrong answer, stuff isn't that simple especially with something as subjective as media made for our consumption
Dec 9, 2022 7:17 AM
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While I agree it's contrived as fuck. I don't think this is enough to call the show "the WORST WRITTEN gundam" . Not that I can tell for sure since I haven't watched all of them but there are so many other problems with this show. The world as a whole doesn't make sense.
Dec 9, 2022 9:50 AM
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I was hoping that it was only forcing dumb conclusions to so many plot points to hurry and get to the good parts, but even now when they have their own gundam company it continues to get even more absurd
Dec 9, 2022 9:55 AM

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Idk chief… there’s some pretty bad gundams. Like have you seen SEED?
Dec 9, 2022 11:37 AM

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boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Here's your kny's explaination:-
Tanjiro family probably got killed at night time when tanjiro was sleeping.


Here's your Csm's explaination:-

Why would Denji deny his yakuza boss's order?

Pochita was probably already far away from Denji but pochita sensed a human so it came where Denji was.
Dec 9, 2022 12:03 PM
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ImElitist said:
boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Until you realise the kind of author tatsuki fujimoto is and know that he doesn't normally write action and that chainsaw man isn't a shounen as much as it is a deconstruction/reimagining of it hence the asspulls which are a mirror of the genre itself and its numerous issues, not saying chainsaw man is a 10/10 best of all time, just saying that setting up rules and judging things by them in a story are pretty pointless if they don't apply to them at all, you can't say a question is wrong because you using the wrong formula gives you the wrong answer, stuff isn't that simple especially with something as subjective as media made for our consumption

The only way something becomes a deconstruction of something is when it does things completely out of the norm. So far Denji has been super powerful and invincible, garnered the attention of beautiful girls, and the fight scenes have been typical action like JJK. It is not an effective deconstruction of shonen in the slightest. If anything, AOT is a deconstruction of shonen considering the ending.
Dec 10, 2022 12:57 AM
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TheFounder131 said:
boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Here's your kny's explaination:-
Tanjiro family probably got killed at night time when tanji
Here's your kny's explaination:-
Tanjiro family probably got killed at night time when tanjiro was sleeping.


Here's your Csm's explaination:-

Why would Denji deny his yakuza boss's order?

Pochita was probably already far away from Denji but pochita sensed a human so it came where Denji was.

Do you not get that I was being sarcastic
Dec 10, 2022 7:00 AM
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To throw my two cents as someone who doesn’t know literally anything about Gundam and only started watching because someone told me there’s an Utena reference in the opening:

I kind of agree. I can’t pinpoint exactly why in terms of specific plot points because I don’t know all of the kooky terminology and don’t care to learn it, but scanning OP’s post — stuff just kind of happens. There’s no rhyme or reason to why a lot of it happens and character reactions always feel two steps away from being incredibly forced. The Gundam battles look great and have fun effects, but when it comes to all this interpersonal stuff … like, what? Who is this? Why am I supposed to care? For the sake of having funny slice of life tropes thrown in with all the techno babble, what ends up happening is just some cardboard cutouts of characters we’ve seen done much better in shows with much smaller budgets, running around aimlessly among plot features that seem to be continually pulled out of the writer’s asses. Even if they are supposed to be homages to things from previous shows or even actual continuations of plot points from previous Gundam iterations, I cannot in my right mind comprehend how any plotpoint naturally flows from one place to another or how the characters are able to get away with things in one instance and not the other.

Of course, this is all just a gut feeling, so while I can’t speak to it being the worst, from a layman’s perspective, it’s not that the show is confusing, it just feels weirdly … unbalanced.
Dec 10, 2022 11:11 AM
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Gonna add onto this topic now that it has simmered a bit:

There is a way to fix this writing ctonrivance in episode 1. You remove or move the Assassination attempt out of Episode 1.

The issue with Episode 1 of this Gundam series is not that the assassination took place, but that So many events have to be FORCED to line up to prevent this specific event from taking place.

If Miorine's dad is killed, WITCH FROM MERCURY AS A SERIES CANNOT HAPPEN.




I use the "Importance vs Vital" mindset. Characters in a story can be Important, Vital, Both, or None.
An example of a vital character in a story would be Frodo Baggins in Lord of the Rings. No one else can carry the Ring to Mordor for him, but just because he is vital to the story does not mean the Story Bends logic for him to remain.

An important character is Raphtalia from Shield Hero. She is Naofumi's first true companion, but she could have been replaced with any Demi-Human slave for his first companion. The importance comes from the journey of healing that this first companion gives our Main Character Naofumi.




Witch of Mercury with episode 1 has outright said "IF THESE TWO GIRLS DO NOT MEET UP ON THIS EXACT DAY AND HAVE THIS DUEL, THE DEATH OF A KEY FIGURE IN THE STORY OCCURS".

The story is not giving you an introduction, but saying "VITAL PLOT POINT MATTERS OVER CHARACTER INTRODUCTION".




The assassination attempt in episode 1 was an event completely outside the control of any character, save for the Assassin himself (Guel's Dad). The writers for Witch of Gundam quite literally WROTE THEMSELVES INTO A CORNER WITH A SINGLE EVENT FROM THE VERY BEGINNING.

No one, and I mean this quite literally, NO ONE IN EPISODE 1 OF WITCH OF MERCURY WAS AWARE OF THE ASSASSINATION PLOT, NOR COULD THEY STOP IT IF THEY WANTED TO.

So what did the writers do?

They CREATED A SOLUTION IN THE CHARACTER SULETTA.

If you remove Suletta from episode 1, No one can stop the Assassination from happening.

1. An individual needs a Mobile Suit/Gundam to challenge Guel
2. An individual needs a reason to challenge Guel
3. They must challenge Guel on this specific day, and beat him before this assassination goes off.
Dec 10, 2022 11:22 AM
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Infamous_Empire said:
I honestly don’t even see what’s bad about this. The prevented assassination serves to establish the importance of the duels in world affairs and introduce the running theme of the school being a microcosm of the world’s corporate conflicts, not to mention the theme of the school’s students being largely ignorant of the wider conflicts around them due to living in a bubble of peace.

Meanwhile, trying to include the core cast directly into the assassination plot would be a subplot in its own right that would be far too much for a single first episode, and would most likely be completely unworkable within the planned framework of Suletta and Miorine’s character arcs.

Your only criticism of this point, meanwhile, is that it would be prevented in a completely hypothetical scenario where things went differently… which applies to all plot points in all of fiction

Also, do not even begin to say something is the “Worst Written Gundam Show” when SEED Destiny exists



I have to disagree here. If you remove the Assassination, you still have the importance of duels, but with the Assassination event still in the story, you have placed an emphasis where the writers have written themselves into a corner from the outset.

If this assassination is not prevented, the entire story falls apart. The Company that Miorine and Suletta form? It can't happen because Miorine is Guel's fiancee, and has no political power. Suletta is no longer at the school, and duels are now removed from the equation because of Guel's father (he comments on episode 1 that he finds them to be stupid, and I would certainly as an assassin prevent myself from losing the power I have gained)

If Gundam SEED is written where episode 1 destroys the entire story, by all means tell me... because Witch of Gundam destroys its story all on its own, in the very beginning.

You say Seed is bad, but unless it does this amount of damage in the very first 20 minutes, I have to call bullshit.
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Typecero said:
I have to disagree here. If you remove the Assassination, you still have the importance of duels, but with the Assassination event still in the story, you have placed an emphasis where the writers have written themselves into a corner from the outset.

If this assassination is not prevented, the entire story falls apart. The Company that Miorine and Suletta form? It can't happen because Miorine is Guel's fiancee, and has no political power. Suletta is no longer at the school, and duels are now removed from the equation because of Guel's father (he comments on episode 1 that he finds them to be stupid, and I would certainly as an assassin prevent myself from losing the power I have gained)


I don't really see how that's "being written into a corner". You keep saying that it's bad because if it had happened differently the entire story would have fallen apart, but, well, that's how all stories work, it's called having Pivotal Moment. You could say the same thing for almost every part of the episode ("what if Suletta hadn't noticed Miorine drifting in Space?" for example). I feel like there's a bit of a point buried in what you're trying to say (the fact that the duel occured just as the assassination was happening did seem a bit contrived) but you're communicating it rather poorly and, in my opinion, kinda blowing it out of proportion (one semi-contrived plot point does not mean a show ruined forever)

Typecero said:
If Gundam SEED is written where episode 1 destroys the entire story, by all means tell me... because Witch of Gundam destroys its story all on its own, in the very beginning.

You say Seed is bad, but unless it does this amount of damage in the very first 20 minutes, I have to call bullshit.


SEED spent its entire first episode lazily copying Gundam 0079 and doing every single part of it worse (and, in fact, continued ripping off 0079 for the next 25 episodes), squandering its potential to form its own identity and leaving most of the cast (including the protagonist) feeling about as dry and uninteresting as sandpaper. So, yeah, I'd say it had a worse first episode

Also, I was specifically referring to SEED's sequel, SEED Destiny. SEED was at least halfway decent, SEED Destiny had 20 episodes straight of pure crap which ruined all the potential the first half of the show had and left more than a few people (myself included) rather frustrated with its ending (though, ironically, its first episode was pretty good, but I personally value endings more than beginnings anyway)
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boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Kamados were killed intentionally by Muzan. But yeah, OP complains about first episode which suppose to establish everything so there is no plot contrivance yet.

ImElitist said:
boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Until you realise the kind of author tatsuki fujimoto is and know that he doesn't normally write action and that chainsaw man isn't a shounen as much as it is a deconstruction/reimagining of it hence the asspulls which are a mirror of the genre itself and its numerous issues, not saying chainsaw man is a 10/10 best of all time, just saying that setting up rules and judging things by them in a story are pretty pointless if they don't apply to them at all, you can't say a question is wrong because you using the wrong formula gives you the wrong answer, stuff isn't that simple especially with something as subjective as media made for our consumption

Stop pretending you are smart or elitist. Most of your comment is gibberish.
CSM is shounen because it's published in shounen magazine, just like Death Note was, in the same one.
SHOUNEN IS NOT A GENRE. IT DOESN'T SPECIFY ANYTHING ABOUT THE PLOT. You can't deconstruct it.
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Typecero said:
I have to disagree here. If you remove the Assassination, you still have the importance of duels, but with the Assassination event still in the story, you have placed an emphasis where the writers have written themselves into a corner from the outset.

If this assassination is not prevented, the entire story falls apart. The Company that Miorine and Suletta form? It can't happen because Miorine is Guel's fiancee, and has no political power. Suletta is no longer at the school, and duels are now removed from the equation because of Guel's father (he comments on episode 1 that he finds them to be stupid, and I would certainly as an assassin prevent myself from losing the power I have gained)


I don't really see how that's "being written into a corner". You keep saying that it's bad because if it had happened differently the entire story would have fallen apart, but, well, that's how all stories work, it's called having Pivotal Moment. You could say the same thing for almost every part of the episode ("what if Suletta hadn't noticed Miorine drifting in Space?" for example). I feel like there's a bit of a point buried in what you're trying to say (the fact that the duel occured just as the assassination was happening did seem a bit contrived) but you're communicating it rather poorly and, in my opinion, kinda blowing it out of proportion (one semi-contrived plot point does not mean a show ruined forever)


Actually, you’re wrong here. Not all stories are written with such rigid events that MUST TAKR PLACE ON A CERTAIN TIME AND BEFORE A CERTAIN DEADLINE.

The show operates on PREVENTING this assassination. IT HAS TO HAPPEN, period.

If the assassination does not get prevented, then sequel events also fall apart. There are pivotal moments in stories, and then there are stories that write themselves into a corner. This is a corned story that needs to be rewritten, or the assassination be taken out completely.

The fact I can pick it apart with such simple questions means the story does not hold up to scrutiny.

I should not be able to say the following and know the story will fall apart.

“hey, what happens if Guel gets a fever and skips school for a day?”
“What happens if Miorine doesn’t go to the training grounds and spot Suletta?”
“What happens if Guel doesn’t go visit Miorine at her greenhouse?”


If I delay by an hour or remove any of these events in episode one of Witch of Mercury , Miorine’s dad is dead, and MANY THINGS change about the story.

Let’s go with an easy one:

Guel’s father forces his son to not attend school for the day. The assassination against Miorine’s father now has no chance of failing. No duel can possibly take place now.


I’m only doing a simple thing with my “communicating it rather poorly”. I am questioning the events of the story. I should not be able to “poorly communicate” that your story has thus many writing inconsistencies in it.

For everyone of my questions as to the sequence of events of episode one, there should be an easy answer. A flexible story can hold up to scrutiny. I used Iron Blooded Orphans as an example of the same event (a decision that leads to the creation of Tekkada), and it holds up.

An assassination that was planned in advance, that would have huge repercussions for the story, is stopped ON THE DAY OF THE EVENT, by a childish argument, but precisely when it needed to occur.

You don’t get to hand wave away bad writing. We aren’t Rings of Power or She-Hulk.

We should have pride in a Gundam series being well written… but why can I pull it apart with my poorly communicated questions?
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If the red droid didn't break down purely due to luck, Luke wouldn't have gotten R2D2 instead, the entire Star Wars trilogy would not have happened, Death Star would not be blown up, and honestly Luke would probably be killed by sand people.

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bastek66 said:
boxexp01 said:
Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Kamados were killed intentionally by Muzan. But yeah, OP complains about first episode which suppose to establish everything so there is no plot contrivance yet.

ImElitist said:

Until you realise the kind of author tatsuki fujimoto is and know that he doesn't normally write action and that chainsaw man isn't a shounen as much as it is a deconstruction/reimagining of it hence the asspulls which are a mirror of the genre itself and its numerous issues, not saying chainsaw man is a 10/10 best of all time, just saying that setting up rules and judging things by them in a story are pretty pointless if they don't apply to them at all, you can't say a question is wrong because you using the wrong formula gives you the wrong answer, stuff isn't that simple especially with something as subjective as media made for our consumption

Stop pretending you are smart or elitist. Most of your comment is gibberish.
CSM is shounen because it's published in shounen magazine, just like Death Note was, in the same one.
SHOUNEN IS NOT A GENRE. IT DOESN'T SPECIFY ANYTHING ABOUT THE PLOT. You can't deconstruct it.

It should be obvious that when I use the term shounen I mean the tropes surrounding the materials published through it regardless of what it may or may not be, learn to understand/comprehend basic sentences before making useless points which are irrelevant to it.
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Until you realise the kind of author tatsuki fujimoto is and know that he doesn't normally write action and that chainsaw man isn't a shounen as much as it is a deconstruction/reimagining of it hence the asspulls which are a mirror of the genre itself and its numerous issues, not saying chainsaw man is a 10/10 best of all time, just saying that setting up rules and judging things by them in a story are pretty pointless if they don't apply to them at all, you can't say a question is wrong because you using the wrong formula gives you the wrong answer, stuff isn't that simple especially with something as subjective as media made for our consumption

The only way something becomes a deconstruction of something is when it does things completely out of the norm. So far Denji has been super powerful and invincible, garnered the attention of beautiful girls, and the fight scenes have been typical action like JJK. It is not an effective deconstruction of shonen in the slightest. If anything, AOT is a deconstruction of shonen considering the ending.

If you are an anime only then that would be true but I'm talking about tatsuki fujimoto, the person who wrote the manga. Part one of the manga is what is being currently made into an anime, and it is finished and
and by the end trust me the last thing he wants to do is repeat what had happened to him, even in the second part when faced with a slightly similar scenario we can see how he is very unnerved by the situation that has happened again. If anything I shouldn't be telling people this stuff because it'll merely ruin their shock when they see what happens and also the similarities are on purpose the tropes are used because of it being what it is, the only reason it follows the shounen tropes is because it wants to completely flip the script and make a world that doesn't make sense in the same way other shounens do - the systems are meant to be unfair like other shounens and although in essence when you think about what happens by the end it is still following the shounen system of storytelling it does so by changing everything else that isn't required. so to summerize, it breaks down what a shounen is takes the tropes plays with them, makes sure that you realise why this story is written by him and not by anyone else and at certain points if not all of them after the point now in the anime, gives you chaos.
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Dec 11, 2022 1:55 AM
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That reminds me of an epic quote, 'If my grandmother had wheels, she'd been a bike'. Or in this case, 'My grandmother is only human because she doesn't have wheel'.
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as if lesbian wannabe main couple isn't bad enough they have to try and slip this NTR drama in, pls bandai, cancel this trash for god sake do not let it sullies the gundam name anymore, pls.
Dec 11, 2022 5:01 AM
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I invite the OP to go and watch ZZ Gundam, Reconguista or Seed Destiny before writing something like this. While clearly Mercury will probably not reach the heights of episode 1 again, it's not that awful of a story.
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this is unironically shaping out to be one of the better gundam shows. I highly doubt anything will dethrone Stardust Memory and WING from being the "Worst" in a long long while
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Farabeuf said:
I invite the OP to go and watch ZZ Gundam, Reconguista or Seed Destiny before writing something like this. While clearly Mercury will probably not reach the heights of episode 1 again, it's not that awful of a story.

ZZ is peak though.

Also, this thread sucks. G witch is great
Dec 11, 2022 11:30 AM

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SEED Destiny, X, Wing, Thunderbolt, all exist.
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Sir, this is a Wendy's.

On a serious note, your point is pretty dumb. Not only because of your "IBO contrivances good, G-Witch contrivances bad" which are 100% arbitrary, or the face that you can use the same logic in every Gundam (I'll use Turn A as an example):

*What if the FLAT landed on Luzianna instead of Inglessa?
*What if Loran wasn't saved by the coyotes because Guin Rhineford wasn't flying there or didn't have his gun? What if he had missed his shots?
*What if he decided to go swim one hour earlier/later, therefore never meeting the Heim family?
*Isn't it a bit too lucky that he happened to meet the only person in the world that looks like Diana?
*What if the Earth Invasion didn't happen the same day as the "Coming-of-Age Cerimony"?

But also because of the fact you're criticizing something you yourself invented. No, the events of the first episode don't exist solely to prevent the assassination sub-plot, but rather have value into themselves, the sub-plot only serves as dramatic irony.
In fact, if this "offends" you so much, know that this sub-plot could've been removed with some pretty trivial changes and wouldn't change anything in the plot, just make Prospera being forced to explain herself to the Benerit Group instead of only being able to go there because she blackmailed Vim Jeturk.

If something, what you should be complaining instead is Delling accepting the duel proposal when he couldn't just said "No" since he was earlier presented as an "I am the rules" guy that no one can go against, but based on events that happened afterwards this could be explained with "he always favors his daughter in a way or another".

Typecero said:

If Miorine's dad is killed, WITCH FROM MERCURY AS A SERIES CANNOT HAPPEN.


That's a fallacy, since you can only say that knowing the following events.
G-Witch could have 100% happened in an alternative version where Miorine's dad is killed, the only thing is that we would have a different story, which essentially makes your point "If something relevant in the plot changed, it would go other way", for which the answer is "...Yes?".
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Gundam SEED Destiny exists~

And too early to judge Witch From Mercury, I will wait and see what they will do with the Earthnoids/Spacenoids tensions~

Aren't you the same person that complains about seed on every gundam forum yet go as far as to shill G Reco over evangelion. It is kind of obvious this show flopped outside the children demographic age. Its mal rating despite being a new hyper show is already much lower than the previous entries and has some abysmal performance on polls. Kind of time for people to admit this show has become hot garbage
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People do realize there isn't a single well received nor good Gundam show after zeta. There is a reason Tomino said the franchise should have ended after 79. yall are addicted to burning your salary on model kits to realize most people are not enjoying this show. It regularly fails on polls, extreme amounts of people dropped the show, those who continue are complaining. The only reason the mal rating is fairly high because gigguk and anitube shilled this show and even they aren't watching it.
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icefirestone23 said:
NewestPersonHere said:
Gundam SEED Destiny exists~

And too early to judge Witch From Mercury, I will wait and see what they will do with the Earthnoids/Spacenoids tensions~

Aren't you the same person that complains about seed on every gundam forum yet go as far as to shill G Reco over evangelion. It is kind of obvious this show flopped outside the children demographic age. Its mal rating despite being a new hyper show is already much lower than the previous entries and has some abysmal performance on polls. Kind of time for people to admit this show has become hot garbage

I have not compared G-Reco with Evangelion before, not sure who you are describing. A lot of people criticise SEED because of Kira/Lacus.

MAL rating does not matter, profits matter to Bandai. Well, gunplas and Gundam games here always sell out faster than shounen fighting games~

I won’t judge Witch From Mercury until its final episode.
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icefirestone23 said:

Aren't you the same person that complains about seed on every gundam forum yet go as far as to shill G Reco over evangelion. It is kind of obvious this show flopped outside the children demographic age. Its mal rating despite being a new hyper show is already much lower than the previous entries and has some abysmal performance on polls. Kind of time for people to admit this show has become hot garbage

I have not compared G-Reco with Evangelion before, not sure who you are describing. A lot of people criticise SEED because of Kira/Lacus.

MAL rating does not matter, profits matter to Bandai. Well, gunplas and Gundam games here always sell out faster than shounen fighting games~

I won’t judge Witch From Mercury until its final episode.


The Gundam fandom outside japan has to one of the most brain dead anime fandoms I have ever seen. What fandom has some OCD on a 20 year old series that had the best ratings and sales out of the entire franchise. Then goes on to praise one of the worst anime shows of the decade (aka G Reco). I have seen you defending G-Reco a lot as well as flops like after war and turn, and constantly hating on seed, wing, ibo.

Here is bad news by the way. Bandai is not going to hit their sales margins overseas. Many overseas retailers are starting to put even their uc kits on clearance. Just like what happened to transformers and gi joe. It is pretty obvious that people think this show is trash, despite anitube shilling this show like crazy. We have people dunking on this show every week now, and social media buzz is low. Poll turnouts are terrible.

If the only defense of a show is dunking on another 20 year old show, the show has to be hot garbage.
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Idk chief… there’s some pretty bad gundams. Like have you seen SEED?


Comments like these shows the overseas fandom need to touch some grass thinking they know the Gundam franchise better than Japan. I have seen so many Gundam fans fiercely defending G Reco and saying it is a better show than Evangelion when the entire internet trashed it and sales reflected it.

People need to just admit this show is dog shit and is just an excuse to burn money on plamo rather than having a riot on r/anime whenever anime corner rankings come out, and a bunch of gundam fans have to get banned on facebook and reddit.
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icefirestone23 said:
Monochrosanity said:
Idk chief… there’s some pretty bad gundams. Like have you seen SEED?


Comments like these shows the overseas fandom need to touch some grass thinking they know the Gundam franchise better than Japan. I have seen so many Gundam fans fiercely defending G Reco and saying it is a better show than Evangelion when the entire internet trashed it and sales reflected it.

People need to just admit this show is dog shit and is just an excuse to burn money on plamo rather than having a riot on r/anime whenever anime corner rankings come out, and a bunch of gundam fans have to get banned on facebook and reddit.


Seed is bad a rip off of the original gundam, are u specifically saying the vocal minority who defends that series because majority of gundam fans hated that series
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NewestPersonHere said:

I have not compared G-Reco with Evangelion before, not sure who you are describing. A lot of people criticise SEED because of Kira/Lacus.

MAL rating does not matter, profits matter to Bandai. Well, gunplas and Gundam games here always sell out faster than shounen fighting games~

I won’t judge Witch From Mercury until its final episode.


The Gundam fandom outside japan has to one of the most brain dead anime fandoms I have ever seen. What fandom has some OCD on a 20 year old series that had the best ratings and sales out of the entire franchise. Then goes on to praise one of the worst anime shows of the decade (aka G Reco). I have seen you defending G-Reco a lot as well as flops like after war and turn, and constantly hating on seed, wing, ibo.

Here is bad news by the way. Bandai is not going to hit their sales margins overseas. Many overseas retailers are starting to put even their uc kits on clearance. Just like what happened to transformers and gi joe. It is pretty obvious that people think this show is trash, despite anitube shilling this show like crazy. We have people dunking on this show every week now, and social media buzz is low. Poll turnouts are terrible.

If the only defense of a show is dunking on another 20 year old show, the show has to be hot garbage.

You probably got me mixed up with someone else.

I enjoyed X, Turn A and G-Reco but I don’t defend these titles if people don’t enjoy them, I usually recommend people other anime. Both Turn A and G-Reco require a lot of experience watching Tomino-directed anime or the viewer will be lost.
I don’t criticise Wing or IBO, I just have mixed feelings with those titles.

Gundam community is huge and diverse. You can get many different tier list or watch orders if you asked a bunch of people in the Gundam community.

Not sure what you meant by Gundam merchandise not selling well, probably in the West? Bandai is terrible in marketing in the West. Here in Southeast Asia, Gunplas can cost up to hundreds and are always out-of-stock.
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Yes I agree good point:
If tanjiro come back to his home 1 hour earlier or later or if muzan feels like eating hamburger instead of his family, tanjiro will never get a chance to be a demon slayer. Surely it is the worst written shounen since ep1
If denji didn't went to Yakuza hideout or if pochita somehow dying some 100 meters to the left of his father's grave, denji wouldn't ever become chainsaw man. Oh damn, chainsaw man might even be worse written than demon slayer

Here's your kny's explaination:-
Tanjiro family probably got killed at night time when tanjiro was sleeping.


Here's your Csm's explaination:-

Why would Denji deny his yakuza boss's order?

Pochita was probably already far away from Denji but pochita sensed a human so it came where Denji was.

thank you for saying this so I didn’t have to 😂 it’s more than reasonable that pochita and Denji crossed paths and then they spent a lot of time together before the boss’ order
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Sir, this is a Wendy's.

On a serious note, your point is pretty dumb. Not only because of your "IBO contrivances good, G-Witch contrivances bad" which are 100% arbitrary, or the face that you can use the same logic in every Gundam (I'll use Turn A as an example):

*What if the FLAT landed on Luzianna instead of Inglessa?
*What if Loran wasn't saved by the coyotes because Guin Rhineford wasn't flying there or didn't have his gun? What if he had missed his shots?
*What if he decided to go swim one hour earlier/later, therefore never meeting the Heim family?
*Isn't it a bit too lucky that he happened to meet the only person in the world that looks like Diana?
*What if the Earth Invasion didn't happen the same day as the "Coming-of-Age Cerimony"?

But also because of the fact you're criticizing something you yourself invented. No, the events of the first episode don't exist solely to prevent the assassination sub-plot, but rather have value into themselves, the sub-plot only serves as dramatic irony.
In fact, if this "offends" you so much, know that this sub-plot could've been removed with some pretty trivial changes and wouldn't change anything in the plot, just make Prospera being forced to explain herself to the Benerit Group instead of only being able to go there because she blackmailed Vim Jeturk.

If something, what you should be complaining instead is Delling accepting the duel proposal when he couldn't just said "No" since he was earlier presented as an "I am the rules" guy that no one can go against, but based on events that happened afterwards this could be explained with "he always favors his daughter in a way or another".

Typecero said:

If Miorine's dad is killed, WITCH FROM MERCURY AS A SERIES CANNOT HAPPEN.


That's a fallacy, since you can only say that knowing the following events.
G-Witch could have 100% happened in an alternative version where Miorine's dad is killed, the only thing is that we would have a different story, which essentially makes your point "If something relevant in the plot changed, it would go other way", for which the answer is "...Yes?".




The assassination plotline is stopped because of a Duel. A duel that Guel's dad would know could derail his plans.

If Guel's Dad does the smartest, and simplest thing, and says to his son "Hey Guel, if you stay home from school today, I will buy you new a Mobile Suit".

Anything to get him to stay home to prevent Guel's loss, and Miorine's dad is killed with 100% CERTAINTY. Bribe your son for ONE DAY, and his dad gets everything he desires in one fell swoop.



So with the assassination plotline in, you go from three quirky teens interacting, to THESE THREE TEENS HAVE TO INTERACT, ELSE YOU CANNOT PREVENT THE ASSASSINATION.
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This is the thread of all time
I did not foresee my one offhand comment about seed starting a battle of the thesis’s
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Snuffleskin said:
This is the thread of all time
I did not foresee my one offhand comment about seed starting a battle of the thesis’s

You should feel proud, you got these lads writing an entire bible
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So with the assassination plotline in, you go from three quirky teens interacting, to THESE THREE TEENS HAVE TO INTERACT, ELSE YOU CANNOT PREVENT THE ASSASSINATION.


You seem to ignore my point of "even if the assassination happened, you would still have a plot", but nevertheless...

Typecero said:
The assassination plotline is stopped because of a Duel. A duel that Guel's dad would know could derail his plans.

If Guel's Dad does the smartest, and simplest thing, and says to his son "Hey Guel, if you stay home from school today, I will buy you new a Mobile Suit".

Anything to get him to stay home to prevent Guel's loss, and Miorine's dad is killed with 100% CERTAINTY. Bribe your son for ONE DAY, and his dad gets everything he desires in one fell swoop.


I'll assume you haven't watched episode 10 where pretty much the rest of Benerit group admits that they think Vim Jeturk is dumb and incompetent.
Either way, doesn't the entirety of episode one happen in the span of a single day?
If so, why only complain of the second duel and not of the first that happened that day?

Your only argument here would be "But if he was 200% careful-" (Despite the fact that Prospera had proof of his direct involvement with the assassination, either way), but even so: There is a rank list in Asticassia, Guel knows who he can lose against and who he can't, so there's nothing strange with him accepting a duel with a literally-who that appears to be weak.

"B-b-but what if he asked Guel to-"
Yeah, like he asked Guel to leave everything to the AI system in the Darilbalde, or to not enter in any duel after his second loss, or to go work in his subsidiary, those definitely worked, right?
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This is the thread of all time
I did not foresee my one offhand comment about seed starting a battle of the thesis’s


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