The story is cute. Nice romance, but a bit confusing. The main character is switching from one crush to another, which makes no sense.
Also there should've been more development of the characters. Many characters are left with no explanations and were just thrown in there. The family relationship is also very confusing and many questions arise and no answers are provided. Furthermore, the ending is kinda abrupt and it leaves you puzzled over what happened or what should/will happen.
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Mar 14, 2013
Bitter Virgin
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The story could've had few more chapters to make it more appealing. Everything was thrown in at once in the first chapter and all kinda scattered around the place. It takes you by surprise. Only afterwards did it start to develop. The theme/topic for a story was excellent, but it could've been developed much better. The main character overcame her fear of everything way too easily. And therefore left so many questions unanswered, that could've been done nicely in the later chapters or in the middle of everything.
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