Jul 4, 2013
Nutshell: Okane ga Nai meets Boku no Pico meets a handful of relatively soft kinks. Pass it unless you enjoy watching bad smut for giggles.
Story (3/10) - There is too much going on for a pwp short. Namely, it chooses to bother with a plot, and that plot is executed poorly. There are elements of soft horror, angst, lighthearted comedy, a sprinkling of romance, and of course the porn, and that's simply too much for such a short film. Culling these elements would have done a great service to the whole.
Art (6/10) - The art is decent, there's nothing too offensive but then again
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it's not a treat either, really. I'll join the others in complaining about Mitsu's design fitting his role awkwardly.
Sound (3/10) - I get it, it's Japanese porn and the uke has to whine and moan constantly. I would have been more forgiving but when my sex scenes are sabotaged with atrociously poor foleys, especially the "almost out of ketchup" blerp, all mercy just evaporates.
Character (5/10) - For a chance there's a main uke I like: tiny and cute perhaps, but well spirited enough to get annoyed and show it. Mitsu's not bad but fails to be memorable.
Enjoyment (2/10) - In this short, there is no rhythm: scenes and moods come and go and transform in a chaotic pace and with little build-up.
Overall (3/10) - I tend to go easy on smut but when the execution is so awkward it sabotages the whole hotness thing, well then, it just doesn't fill its purpose.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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