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Usually i don’t care much about the art, but the art was way worse than the version boichi draw as manga format the 2006 version, even though its coloured.
Also the story is exactly the same except with a tiny bit more explanation and this time the humans survived instead of robots.
I actually dislike this ending because it makes armstrongs effort less worth it,

In the other version armstrong literally saved all of humanity and his efforts paid off.

He kept the dna safe etc while the other robots came back and thanked him

Other wise it was quite decent

it was good when shinji was the main character. but
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he dies midway, and replaced by mr elvis wanna be cry baby. holy shit worst protagonist every seen. at one point it took him 10 chapters to shoot some one with the constant monologues.

and then there is kiriyama who is literally kid batman fucking invincible plot armor. written to be used as a whim to take down everyone who is a trouble for the protagonist. since the author doesn't want him to actually get to kill anyone lmao.
horrible story elements destroys suspension of belief in the middle somehow they start jumping like ninjas and ... flipping over flying cards etc. this is supposed to be science fiction or something wtf is with the KI bullshit introduced midway.
it started off very good though i liked the plan to construct a bomb. but after midway it was a painful read. the art was very good though so that kinda kepted me reading. if it wasn't because of that i would have given this a 5/10



JK THE REAL REASON WHY THIS IS 10/10

I SWORE TO MYSELF WHEN I FIRST READ THIS.
IF THE ASSHOLE FAT TEACHER DIED THEN I WOULD GIVE THIS A 10/10
WASN'T DISAPPOINTED IN THE END.

WHATEVER YOU DO DON'T READ THIS

YOU WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO FAP AGAIN.


not if you want getting nightmares while fapping mate.

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... as an anti drug commercial this is a master piece, maybe some schools should show this instead of those info-graphic drug videos.

however as a hentai....
not really.

Story: The portrayal of Maki's downward spiral was actually pretty good. The one thing I didn't really like was that she didn't get any smarter or get a better idea of her situation. Since its really short I would have to spoil everything to say the full story.

Art:
The art style however like most of shindoLs other works were pretty good
most of the scenes were pretty repetitive and some of the expressions were too over the top.

Character:
the main character kind of loses her self to lots of stuff actually. First she loses herself to popularity, then money and sex, then drugs. Starts off as an anti social girl trying to fit in. But by the end of the manga you couldn't even tell if thats the same girl

Overall: I guess this is like the king Lear of hentai
honestly its a better plot than SAO even without the memes