**THIS REVIEW CONTAINS SPOILERS**
Kaguya-sama: Love is War followed the student council of a prestigious private school in Japan. The central focus, however, are the two (so-called) genius students at the very top of the council, and their unwillingness to confess their feelings to each other. The manga featured the two battling in these psychological mudslingings similar in structure to that of Death Note. I would say it parodies these elements, among other things. Kaguya-sama loved to poke fun at cheesy romance tropes, over-the-top wit battles, and overthinking high school drama. But in the midst of all this, the manga held a cute and light-hearted atmosphere
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that served as a reminder that the series was true to its fun, comedic and parodical nature. And the cherry on top of this elegant cake was that the goal was resolute and us as readers had something to look forward to.
I truly miss those days.
Exceeding the initial premise was the first issue with the series. However, I still believed this was a fixable one. Once the relationship forms between our two protagonists (or rather when the events of Volume 14 happen), wouldn't it make sense if the mind games with each other continued? Confrontations spawning from overthinking each other's actions or exploring relationship power imbalances would add to the satirical nature of the manga and still be natural. Instead, the concept of mind games is completely tossed out the window and never returns. Not only is the premise gone, but also the key component of what makes Kaguya-sama unique.
In its absence is mushy and exaggerated melodrama that removes this manga of any "parody" tag it had before. The characters were already clichés, just now without the irony behind it. Character development is also something the mangaka focuses on after Volume 14, but I think the efforts are futile. In the beginning, every member of the student council tormented and manipulated each other for their own selfish desires. It seriously felt like I was watching It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia. This is even acknowledged, as multiple characters state how they have terrible personalities. However, in Always Sunny, it is thoroughly impressive how you are able to sympathize with the characters while their personalities remain the same awful ones they were in the beginning. In Kaguya-sama, I don't care about these people. The crude humor they displayed in the first volumes is unforgettable, and I'm unable empathize with Kaguya when she whines about Miyuki. The only member of the student council I could feel bad for was Ishigami during the sports festival arc. The arc had a message to get across and it did it well. I actually loved how risky the red balloon chapter was, where "Ishigami's character development disappeared". It would have been a genius move for Ishigami's character, had all the character dynamics in the council remain the same. Post-Volume 14, the mangaka focuses on developing these characters individually and there is rarely a chapter with all the student council members' comedic dynamics together. If the series was going to depart from its initial formula, why couldn't Ishigami just keep his growth after all? Why even joke about it when the series wants to take itself seriously?
At a certain point during the later volumes, you're forced to treat the manga like a soap opera. The comedy doesn't fulfill its half, and the melodrama is exaggerated to an absurd degree. If I'm treating this manga as a drama with comedic aspects, the characters are just not good. Kaguya and Miyuki were remarkable, but the mangaka attempted to give them depth and they became bland. Chika was a buffer for Kaguya and Miyuki. She served well as that role and was funny as shit pulling it off. As the characters move their separate ways, her place in the story shifts too. There are chapters where she spends her time in a ramen shop. They aren't funny, and they don't even make the effort to develop her like other characters. Ai was probably my favorite character. She was the reserved maid for Kaguya who had to deal with her whining. She didn't even have to do anything to become the most tragic character in the whole series (joking aside, I still felt more for Ai in those scenes than most other characters, and that’s saying something considering this manga certainly aims for tragedy). My favorite scenes with her were when she attempted to seduce Miyuki in order to disprove Kaguya. Unfortunately, her character is completely overwritten once the Shinomiya family is explored. Speaking of that, the mangaka paint the Shinomiyas out to be some ruthless family like they are the Uchihas or some shit. Kaguya's background as a stereotypical rich girl was a foil for her inexperience but is later used as a reason to prolong the story. Even though Kashiwagi and her boyfriend were a plot device, they still contributed to the better aspects of the story. The rest of the supporting cast is unremarkable. I appreciate the subtlety of characters like Osaragi but, to me, that itself cannot grant the character section any more points. And nevermind Miko, because her addition was one of the worst things to happen to the series. She is the epitome of replaceable, uninteresting, and bothersome. She adds no flavor to the comedy and adds nothing worthwhile to the romance and drama. She is purposeful for a handful of forced gags and derailing Ishigami off his character course. Nothing else. The common defense for her character is that “she’s cute”, which seems to be a typical thing in the manga with most female characters, and it's needless to say what a worthless value that is.
Maturity is something this manga pretends it has, but it never achieves. It gets to the point where you think to yourself "Aren't we past this?" in scenes involving the main two. And just because the main characters are intelligent for their age and most of the gags delve into intelligent vocabulary (calling the interactions intelligent would be an insult to average intelligence), this doesn't enhance the quality of the manga and/or give it any inherent maturity. The same goes for all the other elements of this manga. Many of the jokes are tongue-in-cheek in the way they present romantic concepts and the romance is strikingly immature. I'm shocked this is considered seinen, especially when you get chapters like the one dedicated to Kaguya laughing from the word wiener. But then again, I can't exactly see Ishigami's tasteless suicide jokes in the early volumes fitting well in a shonen magazine. This manga will trick you with pseudo-sophistication in Kaguya blabbering about some sort of sex statistic in adults but the actual romantic content in the manga is on the level of a sub-par shoujo.
Every romance in this manga is annoyingly generic. Even when Kaguya and Miyuki get together, their scenes are dime-a-dozen. Miko's scenes are the same way. You can find the same things shown here in any other rom-com and you can find them done better. The huge disappointment in Kaguya-sama is that it had something genius then it cashed out at its first opportunity. It abandons all the fun things that made it so special. Even the win/loss thing at the end of each chapter is scrapped. Well, it actually makes infrequent appearances, but if the mental battles are discarded, what's even the point of it? The ongoing allegory to The Tale of the Bamboo Cutter is the only creative element the series holds onto. And despite inaccuracies, it’s still thoughtful and worth discussion. However, its active inclusion in the story naturally sparks unrealistic character dynamics, and it’s ultimately not a major strength I give the series.
The final overarching plot line with the Shinomiya family starting at the end of Volume 24 is the most contrived in the entire story. Family members of the main cast are sloppily written into the series for no rhyme or reason, dynamics between characters emerge from seemingly nowhere, and the whole situation is a plot-shifting distraction from everything we knew before. The circumstance presents itself as an unexpected variable to destroy the main couple’s relationship, while in reality, the relationship was already doomed, and (for plot convenience) this saves them from an actual breakup that would have made sense given the emphatic toxicity that was snowballing ever since the beginning of the series. Once again, we are meant to sympathize with the characters and this time direct all our hatred toward the ‘big bad corrupt family’. Miyuki is our ‘hero’ and Kaguya is our ‘damsel in distress’. Am I supposed to clap when Hayasaka does a T.H.U.G. 2 ‘20-trick-combo’ off the mountainside? Or cry when we learn some new random detail about Kaguya’s past? Or cheer when Chika says what everyone is thinking to a rich, misogynistic elder? The manga pulls an honest-to-god ‘rotten adults’ tactic like you would see all throughout Persona 5. I was in disbelief. It was even delivered with the same amount of conviction. The writing in this arc is not good, and the final “Farewell Arc” that follows it acts as remiss reparations before they send you off. There is no true emotional value and the manga ends in its worst state.
Kaguya-sama has consistent qualities such as good worldbuilding and some great art for this genre, but those things have lesser value when I sum up the pros and cons. The initial 10-12 volumes of this was engaging, fun, and unique but everything afterwards feels like a totally different manga with the same cast. It is less intriguing and less creative. It was always a rom-com, but the comedic aspects used to be dominant while the romantic aspects were controlled. As the manga shifts, the blend of comedy and romance is piss-poor and sitcom level. When this manga is a hilarious rom-com, it's genius. When this manga is a high school melodrama, it's a joke.
Additional comments:
I’m not trying to discourage the idea of stories evolving past their initial premise, but in doing so, Kaguya-sama never managed to recapture the magic it had in the first few volumes.
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