Dec 6, 2024
Spoiler free review. Overall, disappointing.
The beginning is strong, but, it goes too far into revenge p*rn territory, without any actual decent narrative payoff.
At times, the story becomes incoherent, in a rather tasteless manner, in an attempt to "gaslight" the reader into questioning how trustworthy the memories of the main character are. Either that, or there is a genuine lack of continuity.
The pacing goes out the window after the initial 5 chapters, and the artwork loses any semblance of balance. The rule of 3 isn't followed at all, and most compositions turn into jumbled messes of too much detail, that makes the action hard to read.
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Gives off the vibe of an intermediate artist slapping on more and more little details, in an attempt to "show off", but it just backfires, and results in hard to look at images.
It just stops being enjoyable. Chances are, that if you got as far into the story as me, it was because the one-shot grabbed your attention, you bookmarked it, forgot about it, then picked it up when 8 chapters were translated and available to you all at once, so you binged them.
But, after the binge streak stops, and you start getting updates at a normal pace... You're gonna feel like most of the chapters are just a slap in the reader's face.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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