Dec 24, 2024
7.9/10
I seriously love everything about this, but I also hate it. I read around 15 chapters of the web comic prior to the manga (this) to get a full understanding of the background, and I wanted to see some clear revisions that would’ve made the web comic “manga-worthy.”
Instead, there were only small additions like the fmc’s thoughts, which, don’t get me wrong, helped a lot to the story, but there were just so many other gaps that the manga does not address.
To be honest, as a manga, the pacing is really weird — scenes that would usually be given some chapters to develop in
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another manga are instead filled with dialogues like “this happened.” The plot points are also interesting and valid, but they are also very sudden — it’s almost like reading a chapter but you felt like you skipped a chapter because of the drastic change in every scene.
This comes from the manga not really being a separate entity but rather a compilation of the webcomic chapters.
Enough with the disappointed taping, this is honestly really engaging — the plot is relatively weird and original, but it incorporates a lot of wholesome moments with plenty of character development.
The characters are nothing short of amazing, as they all add so much to the story — the side characters add the necessary humor, while the main cast fulfill the role of making everything wholesome and cute.
Besides for the pacing being a bit wonky sometimes, the story is undoubtedly good; the author is clearly cooking with the plot points, but I wish he/she spent a little more time on subtle developments.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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