Juvenile Detention Center

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The plot was unique & had potential however the writing is horrible and the characters are also not lovable or even well written.

To start off the female love interest...The good worthy girl who stuck by the MC dies right off the bat, (as mentioned in the synopsis) yet the new one who will now become the love interest (MC blushes and didn't push her off when she tried to seduce him) turns out she is a prostitute who was prostituting herself out because she wanted to pay her moms debt which her mom was already taking care of, and then also is the "poor ... damsel" in distress that gets raped by a villain the MC takes care of which leads me to the 2nd thing that is disappointing about this story

OFTEN the MC says he is going to do something and it ends the chapter there, then next chapter he doesn't do it, and it only ends in him beating up the villains which leaves you wanting more, and SUPER dissapointing, not to mention the MC will get his butt handed to him MANY times yet somehow still wakes up right away and is no longer hurt from the horrible injuries he got?
Alright whatever throw logic out the window, what about the plot?

Father constantly beating him up EVERY SINGLE DAY yet somehow loves him and asks the warden to take care of him, making the MC to get lots of special privilage.


The MC isn't even written well to where we sympathize with him, its like umm...well that just happened, and he just accepted those beatings everyday yet somehow he can fight SUPER good and is super strong yet still gets beat up only to get up and beat them up everytime.

It's repetitive, lacks character development since the MC is just BOOM magically one way then another and leaves you disappointed a lot, not to mention the love interest is for the streets, sigh...