Jun 14, 2024
3.2/10
This actually just sucks. There’s nothing redeeming about this, as I honestly have no idea what the f*ck the author is writing, since he just inserts the mc here without explaining anything at all while adding more and more miscellaneous details about his warped, psychotic personality, which I have absolutely no care for, since nothing is ever explained or properly introduced.
You got the gist of the plot, but it’s basically a clusterf*ck of the typical story of an “I can fix him” mc with the pure fmc. In other words, it should be a wholesome-fest, right? Nah. Whenever there are moments of “wholesomeness,” if
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you could even call it that, the author inserts unnecessary and random fan service to break the mood every time.
The characters are actually god-awful — when I say they’re inserted into the story with no explanation, they really are. And don’t “THERE WAS A FLASHBACK IN CHAPTER …” yeah, there was, but the flashback added more questions than answers, and we’re supposed to go with the flow of a outlandishly creepy mc with a seemingly amnesia-induced fmc.
Apparently this was a hentai before a manga or novel, and I am not surprised at all, since the plot and characters are written with little to no thought, and it seemed like this should’ve stayed a hentai.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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