Dec 16, 2024
First at all, im gonna say, im s*cker toward this genre, Regression, Loser to hero and Reincarnation, Everything about it, im just read it at this point especially i have no book to read
Lets begin, First Story
Story s*ck not gonna lie, at first it was good but slowly but surely turn into rotten tomatoes when your mom forgot to cook it yesterday. Story is simple, oh i hate this game, i want have 2 extremely POWERFUL TRAIT, then game decide just pick random WORST TRAIT. I put caps lock because its important, At first, he trying to survive like getting something getting this, extend timer
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etc. Here's the problem, everything goes as he planned, its just way too smooth, Oh im going to enter forest to retrieve something, and im underleveled, Its fine, Then COMPLETED, then after that, oh lets go to some random *ss dungeon, ITS SUCCEED also. Wow, 0/10 There is no tension anywhere
Character, Oh boi, oh boi, its worst, everyone one dimersional, woman exist in this story to become s*cker of protagonist, protagonist also s*cker cause everything he said like God, He said everything will be fine, then it will be fine. Oh the building gonna crumble, its crumble. Are you prophet or what? He is just gamers who complete the games 25 times (it written in story) and somehow cause butterfly effect and somehow all game script still functional like nothing. If a car have motorcycle gear, the car will not move right? This one, even it doesnt have gear, it can move like nothing. Red hair just straight up annoying, blonde hair just straight up believe in him like his father, and green hair arguably the only character have brain and white hair character just straight up empty shell. Then they introduce another girl, i dont need to read it anymore, i just guess it she gonna s*ck protagonist cause somehow protagonist is God.
Dont forget they totally forgot blue hair potion girl who appear earlier, so far she have no mention at all, which its crazy despite her skill basically one of kind.
Not gonna talking about art, because its staple that sh*tting story have good art tendency, like i can smell it from 1km away from here. Final rate? i give it 3/10 nvm, 1/10, not worth it, waste time. Unless u dont have anything to read, sure go ahead.
Good bye
Reviewer’s Rating: 1
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