Sep 20, 2023
6.2/10
I hate being the person that complains about the plot in a story oriented around wholesome, romantic moments, but this plot just makes absolutely no sense nor does it flow smoothly. The dialogue, descriptions, and introductions are also poor and awkward, causing the reading experience to be lackluster. To make up for it, there are wholesome moments and interactions, but the characters are incredibly “stupid” or inconsistent, furthering the confusion in the manga. This is a poor attempt to make a wholesome character romance, but there’s quite literally no substance nor thought put into the plot or pacing, which negates most of any forms of
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enjoyability.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired & A Huang Teizan Original)
10 – God’s penmanship
9 – Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 – Instant bookmark
7 – Entertaining
6 – Good to pass time
5 – Why are you reading this?
4 – Bad.
3 – Typical garbage.
2 – My head hurts.
1 – Retirement is a thought.
0 – “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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