Reloaded into the Other World

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Fan concept but many problems

The story without any major spoilers is basically: sihan a 16 year old got isekai into another world due to a prophesy, he got imprissoned due to the king thinking he was a failure but after the king went mad he escaped, gathered allies and launched a rebellion lasting 3 years, he then kills the king and gets betrayed and send back to earth (he is now 19) 10 years later he returns to get revenge gathering new allies and starting more rebellions against his allies who have split the previous kingdom into 6 parts

what are the biggest problems?
-First and biggest ... of all the main character, he has every reason to want revenge but when he learns the reason behind it (no spoiler: they disagreed on important choices and whilst the rest were going with the safe/hard option he always picked the idealistic one and if they didnt go along with it instead of debating he would put out his sword and threaten his own allies/friends and thought he wasnt qualified to be king and send him back to his home in earth instead that) that made him more mad and ever since then tries to gaslight the reader that it was the other way around (they are worthy of rebellion but common let the mc take at least this L)
-Secondly the villains, from potrayed as good in the mc's memory and given valid reason to justify their betrayal along with their obvious greed they have been degraded to cartoonishly evil where the writer intentionally leaves out the why and instead they make a poor excuse, admit their greed the mc starts throwing copium and they fight (edit: 3 chapters later the mc straight up lies for how earth actually is and was at this point)

Overall its a 5-6/10 desptie its faults but i personally will give it a 5 for now due to the story constantly self sabotaging whenever its close to creating depth

In any kind of story, pacing comes before everything, and this manhwa has failed to achieve the right balance.
Likewise, with pacing comes clarity; readers need to understand the "why" with the "when."

The flaw of this manhwa centers on the clarity of characters hindered by the pacing of the story.
The MC's reasons for doing what he does aren't bad, it's just lacking with common sense.
The "bad guys" resolve for doing what they do is messy and even after dozens of chapters, readers still don't understand the "why."

Revenge plots in Manhwas can be peak only if all details are accounted for in terms of depth.
You could pass ... on reading this series, to be frank, you wouldn't be missing anything.