Apr 7, 2023
Its zero to superhero story. its good to read for passing time, but not for actual plot, here's why
1. Too much time shift, im fine with time shift but its like every 3 or 4 chapter, also the story start off as 12 yo kid or around that, and suddenly he already 18 yo.
2. MC is too powerful or OP, I like smart mc at early beginning but after few chapter, the progression of power really fast, u cant even catch up whats going on here and there, when he is young he already beat adult, latest chapter he basically can beat demon, i
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mean reincarnation plot should have limit the power because he is not in prime time. So yea i hope there is challenge at least mc cant deal with
3. MC is magnet chick, meaning every single woman, just walk pass by mc, instantly fall in love with mc, i know i know its harem but again, harem without relationship development, they only meet once, and they just like "im gonna marry mc not matter what". So yea at least make it logical
4. Plot going downhill after chapter 53, everything is bearable till chapter 53, but after that, everything downhill, so many plothole and inconsistency, also this story use plot revenge which mean mc will revenge someone, till chapter 87 there is no progress toward there. before Chapter 53, mc still do something to progress revenge, but after that, everything just happy go lucky.
Cant recommended it, its fine to read pass the time, but not for plot. Again this review is totally subjective so u try it then decide, i already warn you
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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