Mar 11, 2025
As has been made clear by the previous two reviewers, this is erotica. Go in expecting bouncing bosoms and lewd imagery, all of which is drawn delightfully. Unfortunately, that is the only thing done well, because after a certain point, it becomes clear the mangaka Mitsudoue either got his serialization cancelled or got bored. The ending sinks the whole thing. Be forewarned, I am going to spoil everything.
Our protagonist Kei has developed psychosomatic erectile dysfunction due to witnessing his father's self-destruction. As his dad has become a NEET in his depression, Kei supports the household. One day after work, he discovers an OnlyFans thot named
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Yami, who he suspects is actually his classmate Saki, a quiet chick with huge boobs. "Yami's" naughty pics actually arouse him, and help his libido begin to recover. The very night he sees Yami, he also finds himself lusting for Hirata, his senpai at work, which makes him confused as he had never seen her in that light before, despite Hirata being incredibly hot.
Anyway, he confirms Saki is Yami, but Saki busts him. Unfortunately, Saki is hot but crazy, unlike the hot but sweet and sincere Hirata. Saki gets off on the exhibitionism and sexual taunting she inflicts on Kei, but as we discover later, her OnlyFans thottery is as much a reaction against her slut of a mother as it is an attempt to gain money. Hirata discovers them and gets jealous, as she quite reasonably liked Kei before Saki blackmailed Kei, so she begins her own efforts to get Kei for herself.
There's tension, a love triangle, there's escalation... and then it all comes crashing down as all the goddamned plot lines are resolved in two chapters, and in the laziest, most half-assed way possible. Kei's dad, the whole reason for the premise to launch? Two pages, last chapter, all fixed. It's infuriating, because Mitsudoue doesn't even bother to care about what he set up, he just wants it all out of the way. There are lessons to be learned here about drawing and story writing if you care to read it. Ultimately, I think this story would have been better served if someone else wrote it and Mitsudoue was limited to drawing what he is told to draw. Any mangaka who is so fond of NTR should be kept on a tight leash during a legit serialization, as this manga demonstrates.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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