Dec 9, 2023
5.7/10
What defines an erotica? Is it the multitude of women? Is it the sex scenes? Is it the awkward-moving plot? Well, how about all three. If you were to define a “text-book bad erotica,” then this would be on the example list, as it doesn’t do anything different, but exemplifies all of the “bad” qualities that are apparent in an erotica.
Let’s talk about the plot: The plot is extremely circular and predictable; to elaborate, each .1 or .2 chapter uses the exact same formula; one chapter will be used to move the plot, and the next chapter is used to add “fan-serivice” via sex
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scenes with women. This usually isn’t much of a problem, however, none of the “fan-service” scenes felt necessary to the plot, and the plot progressed in a spoon-fed way where it wasn’t interesting to read.
As expected of the genre, there’s a heavy emphasis on gender within side characters and characters that the mc will interact with. As such, all of the women the mc meets will eventually, one way or another, fall upon his Excalibur, removing much of the interest in character; there’s also no progression to speak of.
This is yet another poorly done erotica that has sex scenes for the sake of sex scenes, which becomes disinteresting quite fast if the plot is equally as uninteresting and bad.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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