Sep 26, 2024
honestly, this wasnt as good as i expected it to be, from the score and 2 positive reviews. it is bad, average at best.
5.6/10.
art 8/10, honestly there is nothing special about it, typical manhwa artstyle with full color and a shit ton of accessories. many pretty boys and girls. very generic. though the FMC's design is cute + there are a lot of steamy scenes so 8 is deserved, i guess.
story 6/10, the premise is generic, nothing special, digestable. the structure is really bad, which we will go over it at the plot rating section, but the overall lore of the world is pretty
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decent and could be built into something good. with a billion time resets, different stories, a billion versions of MC, MC's mother, etc. it has potential.
plot 3/10, the structure and sequence of events is very poorly written. you have your generic encounter between male and female MCs, then for some reason they fall in love in first sight or something. im not saying that is bad, but the way it is written is bad. like, they crushed each other so quickly, but then acted like they are already lovers since forever or something. i dont see the small things that build up their relationship for it to feel like theyre truly lovers, husband and wife. instead we have this stupid villainess act that only serves as a very minor plot device for some chapters, then completely forgets it. like, 90% of the story she doesnt even act like a villainess, but the title has the word "villainess", and the ending! not cool! there is not enough villainess-ish stuff in this, they should have done some other stuff than the villainess trope.
Characters are dumped into the story instead of being introduced. so many unecessary supporting characters being added into the story so late they didnt even get a proper introduction. i think i have to read the novel to get the full story of them? really bad adaptation no wonder it only got 104 chapters, gosh, hands down one of the worst manhwa i have ever read. have it been 200 chapters instead i think this would have been good.
This manhwa is very plot-driven, but the sequence of events and the narrative is really, really lackluster. it just doesnt feel like the main plots and the subplots connect and intertwine, instead it feels like they wrote it in a half-assed way to focus on the fluff part.
pacing is terrible, events happening too fast and furious.
characters 4/10, the lead couple is decent but the other couples just really badly written. fell in first sight, in the frickin first chapter they met, no buildup to their love, just have fluff to bait teen girls into reading. nah nah nah. relationships between characters are badly written, on the outside they have good relationship and stuff but there are not much events and small interactions between them to solidify that bond and build proper emotional connection with the reader. plot takes so much of the story its insane, everything else is sidetracked.
worldbuilding is really really bad, but imo its a very outside, a very insignificant part of the series so i refrain from using this as a metric of my rating.
enjoyment 7/10, even though this is bad i decently enjoyed it. not to the point i would actually give it a higher rating than it deserves though.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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