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To clarify, I'm writing this review after reading the first volume of this series. The next couple of volumes are supposed to be translated later this year, so I'll be focusing on the first one for now.
The prevailing feeling I had throughout my time with this book was "Maybe it gets better later on?"
To be clear, this isn't a good read. The plot sounds fine when you look at it as a whole, from a distance, but it's very poorly executed. Information is delivered in a haphazard fashion, the narrative is poorly paced, and the story jumps from scene to scene in
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Alternative TitlesSynonyms: The Penetrated Battlefield Should Disappear There Japanese: 撃ち抜かれた戦場は、そこで消えていろ More titlesInformationType: Light Novel
Volumes: Unknown
Chapters: Unknown
Status: Publishing
Published: Jan 19, 2019 to ?
Theme:
Military
Serialization:
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Your Feelings Categories Nov 10, 2020
May These Leaden Battlegrounds Leave No Trace.
In typical light novel fashion, the long title relates to the overall plot of the story, which one will see immediately upon entering the novel. This novel series has great potential. It has an interesting story, that, while not unique by any means, can still hold readers invested in the world it takes place in. Unfortunately, I found the overall writing quality of the book lacking. Events that have little correlation to each other spring up in succession, leaving me feeling a bit confused at what was going on. There doesn't seem to be any plot consistency as continuity ... Jun 4, 2021
This book has got me completely captivated in its world and story. The magic system and characters are pretty unique and fit well with the setting of the book.
The first volume's writing is definitely what is holding the series back. Especially in the 2nd half of the book, scenes are hard to visualize and character's actions are not consistent. After finishing the second and third novel however, the content makes me eager to read the next volume. The issues with the writing have been resolved and the plot has diverged completely from your average Magic/Mecha story. The story in book 2 and 3 had me ... |