Dec 1, 2022
The first story is super cute and I rate that a 9 and has potential to be a 10 if it had been a bit longer. There is consent, communication, and many cute adorable scenes that will make you feel happy or fluffy inside. A shame it isn't longer because their relationship is just so cute with no toxic traits or horrible miscommunication like most BL.
The second story with Nao and Haru on the other hand is super annoying and a 4 at best. It could have been cute as well but there is a girl who knew about the MC's feelings who was
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cruel and got in the way by begging the MC to get them together. Then there is the MC who constantly tries to force Haru and that girl together even after Haru said no to her as well as how he doesn't want to. It was just a horrible plot of the MC trying to force Haru to be with a girl and completely ignore Haru's feelings/responses. The author should have made this side story a one shot and focused more on the first story.
I recommend reading the first story and just stopping there. The second story isn't worth a read.
I rate it a 7 just because the second story brings down the rating otherwise I would have given the fist story a 9.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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