Maou ni Natta node, Dungeon Tsukutte Jingai Musume to Honobono suru
Now I'm a Demon Lord! Happily Ever After with Monster Girls in My Dungeon

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So... since i seem to be the first to review this i'll have to clarify a few things before i come over as too negative. I am a sucker for isekai. I do read a lot of them even if they seem bad and I also enjoyed this novel for a long time.

I've had times where i absorbed chapters of it/ clicking the refresh button of the translation page just to read the newest chapter. I thought the setting was pretty original and the MC in comparison to other isekais since hes what a person from another world should be when he comes ... into an unknown world. A little bit goofy and stupid, not all knowing but yet resourceful. The reason why I'm giving this such a bad score is,
that almost every aspect of the novel took a punch in quality while the story developt. Things became too unreasonable and characters became unbelievably stale to me.

First of all the Story... i gave it a 6/10
It does what it's supposed to do. nothing more nothing less. The worldbuilding is ok,
It portraits the way of living pretty well and you honestly do not have to think at all to understand whats happening. Can be Summorized as: Demonlord does stupid shit in his everyday live and goofs around with the characters that know him.

Art i gave it no score. While i could give it a very good score,
i feel like this is not really that important for a novel. On my behalf I have read only the webnovel which would require me to rate the title picture of the novel.

Now to the characters... i gave it a 4/10
This is something, where people could call me out for nitpicking... But to me it honestly matters since i do compare it with other novels of its genre.

All characters started out with an interesting concept.
They do get explained, get their own arc and do act accordingly. That is fine.
I also explained above that i liked how the main character was portrait at first.

Now where is my problem?
My answer: It's the credibility.

The longer I read the novel the more everything fell appart. After reading 291 chapters ive finally reached a boiling point of not accepting it any longer.
The main character did some questionable choises, the dragon loli acts too stupid considering her age, another character acts like a child even though she also already lives for a decent amout of years as well (it gets more or less explained with shes just beeing pure but thats not enough for me), another one is just comedic relieve and a pushover with rarely any more lines then 1 smug sentense and then getting the shit teased out of her, another one has only the is very smart and can cook trope as of now, another 3 that are part of the dungeon are just there for having them there and beeing children... i could go on but you get the gist.
Characters do not develop much throughout the story.

Enjoyment: i put it at a very low 7/10 almost 6 since I have a bias for Isekais and i just enjoy them.

Overall: 5/10
When starting this novel out i enjoyed reading it a lot and everything seemed interesting to me. But that feeling is long gone and i feel like the novel is in a stalemate story and characterwise for a long time now. Not because there arent any new charakters or storys. no, its because of there is no massive change in them. Nothing in this story grows up is probably the right way of putting it. Therefore i can only leave an: I'm very disappointed at the review page of myanimelist

I hope it was helpful, if you want to discuss it please send me a message.
I'm always up to talk about it.

~Z

This ln is straight up feels like wn without any editing. It has its moments, but most of the time you are reading filler content without any relation to the plot. There is no structure to the story, there is no subtext or anything really - just a power fantasy with a good premise. The longer the story goes on, the more obvious it becomes that the author is simply operating on generic tropes and canned reactions from popular media.

Main thing here is MC tries to build relationships with a dragon girl, and when he does not do that - it feels like a filler. ... Also boring POV of girls that can only talk positive things about MC. You can see attempts to deepen story with a war or parenting - but it looks equally bad. All those events and their justifications are superficial and do not mean anything. They are just happen to make character troupe grow (in number) and give them something to react to, with pretty generic reactions to boot. Results are inconsequential to the MC and he operates mostly the same way throughout whole story.

What worse is that translation also kinda suck - at some point it looks more like localization to USA literature which can be equally alien to the reader. Just as an little example: "Itadakimasu" = "Bon Appétit". And dwarf speech stylization is just blegh.

I picked up LN version at book 7, after reading manga. And let me tell you, dude that adapting it to the manga is doing excellent job - all needless inner thoughts blabbering is nonexistent. After dropping on 11 book, I gave a try to the first one - it is bad. Stick to the manga is my best advice.