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Jul 17, 2016 1:43 PM
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めんどくさい

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THIS IS A MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER.
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Well, for a while I was worried this story might have a poorly done finish, but this chapter more or less came across well and, with help from a third party, Misuzu finally got Haruka to drop her wall.
Aug 10, 2016 6:00 AM
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I was already not satisfied since each chapter was not making me happy, cause they never seemed to have mutual feelings and we didn't know what Murakami was thinking at all.
Then the subs changed, and even their names changed. At this point, we don't even know which translations are correct and which are wrong, but the new translation didn't translate some parts so we can assume that they are in the wrong.
Giving 8-9 because it was not obvious that Murakami shared the same feelings. In pursuit of seeking this obviousity, I read all chapters at once, which I originally did not plan to do. Being obvious is usually not good, but there were really just no hints they were going to be together which made me really sad after each chapter ended.

But even Murakami didn't realize her feelings so I guess it's normal for hints not to be shown on the chapters

Also the final chapter does not show that they are going to stick together even after they graduate.. My god, this makes me even more sad.

to translators :ONCEYOU START WITH A MANGA, STICK WITH IT TIL THE END YOU DUMB TRANSLATORS!! CHAPTER 18 STILL NOT TRANSLATED.
Aug 10, 2016 3:22 PM
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Ako- said:
I was already not satisfied since each chapter was not making me happy, cause they never seemed to have mutual feelings and we didn't know what Murakami was thinking at all.
Hmm. To me, that was much the point of the story - two people who didn't know how to communicate with others, or understand their own emotions, struggling to understand each other. Since most of the story was from Moriya's point of view and the emphasis was on her trying to understand Haruka, I didn't have much of a problem with it.

Again, I thought it ended well. But maybe because I didn't get the impression they were going their separate ways, but the opposite actually. (shrug)

Ako- said:
IThen the subs changed, and even their names changed. At this point, we don't even know which translations are correct and which are wrong, but the new translation didn't translate some parts so we can assume that they are in the wrong.

Kanji by default is difficult to translate, names more so - often during introductions you may see someone specifying how to read the kanji of their name. I assumed that whomever did cp 17 was just reading the kanji a different way. Interestingly, "Google Translate" says "森谷 美鈴" is read as "Misuzu Moriya" (caveat: never assume Google Translate is correct, but it's a starting point).
Aug 17, 2016 7:35 AM
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gotta say 2 things. took way to long to translate regardless of the generic life excuse.

and 2, I do not believe she loves her. she was TOTALLY using her for her powers.
Jan 31, 2017 1:52 AM
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💉 🩸 🩹 💖 🏥

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Decent ending, but I genuinely liked the first volume of this series more. A lot more.

Oh what fun it is to be naughty. :3
"Be the change you wish to see in the world."

Aug 26, 2018 4:11 PM
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When they finally managed to confess to each other it ended =(

I would like to see more after the confession... to see now the beginning of their TRUE relationship. But sadly it ended that way.

I more or less understood their feelings, but it somewhat didn't convice me.

Regardless, an easy 8/10
Mar 16, 2019 3:50 AM
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this was wierd in a wierd way.
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Aug 4, 2019 1:31 AM
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It was an alright ending. They both grew so much but I did enjoy when they were just messing around in the beginning more.
:)
Sep 12, 2019 10:31 AM
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Such a wholesome ending. Good to see misuzu getting some self confidence.

Really sweet story 9/10
Apr 5, 2020 5:51 AM

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Not very impressed with this manga. The actual reason behind Murakami being the way she is, it's pretty ridiculous. What's more, I don't even feel like her character was portrayed very consistently, unlike Aihara Mei or Nanami Touko. The later parts of the story feel like they're lacking a bit of focus. The yuri isn't even that good because the reader was left wondering for basically the entire time if Murakami actually cared about Moritani or not, with not much evidence that the answer to that question was actually "yes".

I don't regret reading it, the earlier parts of the story were pretty enjoyable, but it's not something that I would recommend even to most yuri fans.
May 3, 2020 10:38 AM

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Such a sweet story, really ♥

I totally lost track of real time, and my surroundings while reading this, it was so very enjoyable!

I'm really glad it had a happy ending, but too bad we didn't see a real kiss at the end, but at least they both confessed their love

10/10, I truly loved it!
May 22, 2020 8:36 AM

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(lol I read this manga in 2016! so much happened, I even learned japanese)

Can someone let me know where I can find the mentioned, untranslated prequel chapter 18? Thanks in advance.
Jun 7, 2021 8:41 AM

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Pretty decent. 6/10.
May 22, 2022 5:06 PM

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this series i honestly didnt like it much i mean it started out pretty nice and fun but its like the second half got really awkward to say the least like when she started losing her power everything else just kind of went down hill from there

and then even the ending its like nothing happened in the end even though everything was finally out in the open there was nothing of it it was just like ok that happened and then nothing .......

i was hoping this would be good and yeah it started out really good but as it went on it just went bad real fast

idk if i even wanna waste my time with the movie or not cause i didnt even know this even got an anime till now and i knew about this series for a while now but only now got around to reading it

but seriously i was really expecting this to be much better

god am i annoyed with how things played out and really annoyed at how things ended

but well least Kami eshi JK to OL fujoshi is much better have been reading it for a while now and its the reason why i even remembered i still needed to read this lol
DazeFireMay 22, 2022 5:16 PM
"one step at a time"
Jul 18, 2023 8:41 AM

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These last two chapters were corny and nonsensical as hell but needed and alright in terms of characterization. An ok quick one time read thanks to the realization of the characters, but certainly not for the plot.

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