Gokukoku no Brynhildr Chapter 181 Discussion

allenallenallen said:

I feel like this ending is not only rushed but also just poorly done.

Kiriio said:
Do you guys and girls remember the first chapter where Ryouta is seen murdering Neko? I was expecting that to happen, since it would come around to a full circle.

jejehartadi said:

That did happen on the chapters when they battle Neko's older sister iirc(before Murakami pressed Neko's button). You could check it again, coz I'm not really sure lol.

Ok, back to the manga impression. Overall I'm pretty disappointed with second half of the manga. The first half was really good until around chapter 100 or so, but second half felt dragged, unfocus, no clear plots, rushed ending, etc. I'm conflicted whether to score this 7 or 8. If only 7.5 exists.

alinet86 said:

Who is that stalking at the corner. Also is that really the last pages. No more???

T31 said:
I found the last arc of Brynhildr to be of lower quality than the rest. When I first read it, I couldn't ever stop. Breezed through most of it in two days. Shortly after Ryouta's uncle and Loki became a thing, I thought it had jumped the track. Still, I was invested enough to see it end, and it finally happened after several weeks of waiting. I still really liked this manga for some reason. Pretty rushed at the end there, but I've seen worse.

I believe that the child at the end is supposed to be a young Kazumi who had uploaded herself into EDDA as a final moment and deleted everything from it apart from her and her memories. Either that, or she infused her own fantasy Kazumi x Ryouta babyspawn into it, considering that one of her running things was that she wanted to bear his child.

allenallenallen said:
What the heck was Ryouta's uncle's plan?

The girl that popped up in Ryouta's and Neko's memory space is Kazumi, right? She has the same headband Ryouta bought her. I guess she wrote herself in the memory space as a loli girl with bigger breasts.

TiamatNM said:
So it is possible I am forgetting something, or a lot of things since I have been reading this manga for so long with long breaks between reading at times. But...

Aren't the other girls still going to hatch??? don't they still need the medicine? what even happened with that? weren't they gauranteed to hatch even if they took the medicine?

T31 said:
I found the last arc of Brynhildr to be of lower quality than the rest. When I first read it, I couldn't ever stop. Breezed through most of it in two days. Shortly after Ryouta's uncle and Loki became a thing, I thought it had jumped the track. Still, I was invested enough to see it end, and it finally happened after several weeks of waiting. I still really liked this manga for some reason. Pretty rushed at the end there, but I've seen worse.

I believe that the child at the end is supposed to be a young Kazumi who had uploaded herself into EDDA as a final moment and deleted everything from it apart from her and her memories. Either that, or she infused her own fantasy Kazumi x Ryouta babyspawn into it, considering that one of her running things was that she wanted to bear his child.

marconii2002 said:
Last page from tank

Zeldriss said:
well, there goes my first "That's it!?" ending manga reaction. reading in one go, starting from chapter 50 to end in one day, absolutely disappointing? well not entirely but the ending really affect everything lol, thought it was meant to have a sequel. since it was already been more than a year, i'm still doubting, what do you guys think, is there a chance for a sequel with ending like that?

marconii2002 said:
Last page from tank

Xaelath said:

Lucky you, i start reading this on 11 am and end on 9pm chapter 1-181 over 3600 page what do i got.
Absolutely disgusting ending with alot of rushed crap nonsensical killings, and here i was if he become a fucking god at least try to resurrect people who died.
And the fk with that ending?
There's no explanation with the Hatchling, theres explanation with the war, what the fk even happened to all 1000 kids?
I know the kid might be a hint to a good ending but the fuck?
Here's a proper ending look like
> An open ending where he revived all the crap , do something about the earth, show all characters looking up to the ocean about bla bla input fucking text roll camera
> A proper harem ending with him taking all the bitch including that child he bad with Kazami,Kuroneko(ffs sake stupid losing memories cliche),Kotori and her brother idk if she had feeling but fuck it, and the Kana(i knew she had feeling but oh god they dropped it).
Me? I prefer reading a goddamn hentai after reading chapter 100 onwards.

Thanks for wasting my time i hope that parallel paradise didn't get any rushed nonsense and shit ending.

Mezo-RPWPA said:


can you sum up the story to me and what happened to all the characters from chapter 115 till the end?

Xaelath said:

My memory may not be exactly correct but
Be wary this is a full spoiler.

Kuroha dies, and revived again uh how many times is that? Well she basically didn't do much nothing theres alot of useless nonsensical filler in her story after 115

Kazumi is dead, sacrificed herself to help MC in the ending that's pretty much it.

Kana will regain her power again, she will met her mother i think? Or was it her sister? I think it was her sister but killed by MC brother which own godlike power. See for yourself it's just nothing but a bloody murderfest.

Wakabayashi met another asspull generic stereotypes male, so basically she turn her head from the MC. She supposed to turn into monster yeah I'll say it there's a limit time till all of this Esperanza shit turn into living mud. She turned into one get killed by MC brother which father is the one who makes this human like hybrid alien ass. So MC father basically another crazy bastard that never got mentioned till the very late if the story.
There's nothing about the mother though, it's just left unexplained, not sure what happened about MC acquaintance professor i forgot his name lol.

So last one is the MC, MC later got kidnapped to the facility which his father own to create a perfect like being . To create one you need a valkryie which is Kuroha or the other Valkryie which i also forgot her name but that doesn't really matter he dies later either way and the other being was MC himself or his brother, the brother got killed but I forgot who killed him.
So bla bla the Valkryie i mentioned absorbed by the perfect being facility got destroyed world almost destroyed? Idk it wasn't explained Kuroha died killed and then revived again fight the thing but failed MC sacrificed himself , Kazumi helped to overwrite something and dies using the super mode.
So MC turns into somekind of God but not visible on human eyes.
As you can see on image that i think was Kazumi and MAC child, uh yeah Kuroha also wandering to find MC she met him first but stopped by the brat.

The end.

Basically alot of plot hole left.
- So how they supposed to survive without being turned into monster
- The abducted children, what happens exactly.
- What happen to character above? No happy ending?
- What happen to the world

It's was frustrating to read it and disappointing because the mystery was unresolved and it was quite good early but felt like a shit after middle half.
I have to force myself to make a review because i wasted whole day reading it but slapped with shit in the face.

It's not even worth mentioning what happened after the great Kuroha fight.
Overall enjoyment was like 7-8 then drop to 2-3.

Mezo-RPWPA said:



thanks, I actually read it in during time after I asked :D
yeah the ending was meh and the stereotype guy kinda pissed me off because he pretty much forced his way in, also even at the end hatsuna hinted that she still loves murakami but also likes the other guy??
it was random as fuck so i would say that the manga probably got cancelled, i would give it a 6 tbh it was a nice read at the start though the ending was meh.

Thanks for the help again.

Xaelath said:

Weird how can it get cancelled in the middle of nowhere.
Let's say 115, then suddenly abit of calm before storm but author still insist to put the stereotype guy? It was still fine then the rush start on 3/4 of the story, i guess yeah it was rushed very very rushed and planned.
There's too much asspulling the story doesn't connect dots and i stop bothering reading some text on some chapter.

No problems,
Also do yourself a favour try to not read the author current Manga.
It was promising but yeah, again it's whole another mindfuck Manga which might offend you.
It's called Parallel paradise,(i know most of author works already adapted so far but i doubt this one would), made a thread about it quite a sometimes ago you can go ahead read it if you are thinking to read it as a warning before reading it.

marconii2002 said:
Last page from tank

marconii2002 said:
Last page from tank

Wolfiesmal said:
This is the ending as I understand it: (Thanks for uploading the final page of the entire series, I can't believe it was left out of the upload I viewed! Roughly translated the text is just the Ryouta mocking Kazumi because her chest size is the same as when she was little. Imo that is the ideal feel good joke to go out on so I'm happy with that.)
1) Kotori is there because the things Loki eats get absorbed into EDDA and she was eaten after the memory purge.
2) It doesn't explain why Kazumi is there or why she is little but my best guess would be that when she had access to Loki's memories she uploaded herself. She probably knew that not destroying his memories entirely meant there was a chance Ryouta could still end up merging with them or at the very least thought it was better than dying. As for why she is little my best guess would be that she only had a limited amount of time to upload herself to EDDA as she was melting so she sent the important stuff.
3) The shadow in the bottom left is hopefully Nanami because if Ryouta's brain is EDDA and it contained a planet full of aliens the idea that it could run out of space is bullshit and she never should have needed to delete herself in the first place. Also Ryouta promised he would never forget her which is probably why she is just a shadow but as Kazumi pointed out in her cyberfight earlier deleted data is easy to recover if you don't write over it, so hope for her being restored more fully exists.