Sword Art Online (light novel)
| Now, well this chapter really surprised me. I didn't anticipate any eroge in this, yet there actually was... and quite the massive type, which I didn't expect, even though the story itself is based on an MMORPG, it's just weird that they put eroge in it. Anyway, the actual story is pretty good, I sometimes find myself reading like crazy, just because I'm too curious to know what will happen next. I'm almost there at the end of the first novel, but it'd be good if BT translated the second book ASAP. |
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| lol to think there a topic for 16.5 the publishing version doesn't have eroge, it come from Reki's personal sites (which i can't seem to find it now). there are quites a few of those chapters actually so u can expect more lol yeah this novel is really really good that i keep reading over and over again...can't wait for more |
| Huh, you relieved me. But yeah, that makes sense, I was indeed very suspicious about that one, it was kinda out-of-context. Btw, I think it would be good to adapt into a series, I guess it'll be a big hit, considering only its genre. |
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| “…so…in the options menu, all the way on the bottom…there's an option called «Ethic Code Off».” “…Kirito, hurry up and take your clothes off,” she said in an authoritative tone. “What…w-we’re continuing?” “It would be stupid if we stopped here!!” |
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| The sex scene is one of the funniest things I have ever read. |
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marusamarento said: The sex scene is one of the funniest things I have ever read. Tell me about it |
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| Did this actually happen in the chapter though? I does kinda seem like it. |
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| Chapter 16.5 is a bonus. +++ =D I love how they put an unexpected H-scene there. |
| （／_＼）Oh god... i was thinking stuff like, will the gel excretion absorbing hospital beds cover this? |
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marusamarento said: The sex scene is one of the funniest things I have ever read. It was pretty funny - |
| there's a rumor he did wrote another one with kirito and lizbeth, and also kirito and silica but this has yet to be confirmed and released |
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| Awesome side story, Author! Keep up the good work! XD |
kamikaze_1996 said: It's true that there are some stories for Liz, Silica, even Sakuya and some tentacle rape for Asuna but it is rumored to just be fan-written. The raws for those are floating around in the internet. I found them but I haven't opened them as I can't into moon. There was actually some dispute in the staff of B-T to translate them since they did 16.5 but it would not be good for the site's policies and image. Along with all the talks and jokes about 16.5 scattered in the internet and the situation when the novels will be recommended to future readers just for that chapter, it led to its removal in their site.there's a rumor he did wrote another one with kirito and lizbeth, and also kirito and silica but this has yet to be confirmed and released |
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| Does anyone know where I can still read there everyone is saying it's funny as hell but I cant find it. |
belatkuro said: kamikaze_1996 said: It's true that there are some stories for Liz, Silica, even Sakuya and some tentacle rape for Asuna but it is rumored to just be fan-written. The raws for those are floating around in the internet. I found them but I haven't opened them as I can't into moon. There was actually some dispute in the staff of B-T to translate them since they did 16.5 but it would not be good for the site's policies and image. Along with all the talks and jokes about 16.5 scattered in the internet and the situation when the novels will be recommended to future readers just for that chapter, it led to its removal in their site.there's a rumor he did wrote another one with kirito and lizbeth, and also kirito and silica but this has yet to be confirmed and released I always thought that was a silly reason to ever remove something. I understand it's for their website's image, but aren't they in essence censoring an author's work? The whole thing seems kind of arbitrary. Lol however, I do like that fact that they now have slapped a note over the side stories, saying that they might or might not be canon. |
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| Reki also has young time hahahaha |
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| I downloaded volume 1 when they still had 16.5 included and so while I was reading it, I stumbled across this random sex scene xD That was slightly awkward... |
| wow...2 years worth...i guess asuna felt heaven, for the 4th ( or 5th ) time, damm kirito, so lucky |
| Being a fan is like having a penis. Its nice to be proud of it But don't pull it out in public and wave it in other's faces Kyurem Black. Kyurem White. Together they are Pretty Kyurem. |
| It was "eh" at best. |
| What if the Hokey Pokey is what it is all about? |
| I found the doujin for this lolololol XD |
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| What an interesting chapter... -.- Go Kirito? |
*Mindblown* Not sure how I should feel after reading this... but it was definitely both hilarious and interesting. Interesting in the fact that I haven't read something so intently in a long time. Maybe because I've never read a erotic novel before. Might have to check out some in the future lmao. |
KuroDubZero said: *Mindblown* Not sure how I should feel after reading this... but it was definitely both hilarious and interesting. Interesting in the fact that I haven't read something so intently in a long time. Maybe because I've never read a erotic novel before. Might have to check out some in the future lmao. Sounds like a tarp as was reading this chapter. Damn Asuna and her six climax's........ trollface.jpg |
| .................... Dafuq did i just read -_- |
| Kinda disturbing picturing Asuna and Kirito doing this *In Shock* In a game? |
| [Input amazing signature] Jelly? |
| FUCK YEA!! see ya guys, I'm going to fakku right here right now... |
| The only thing I've read from SAO, and the only thing I don't regret witnessing in the universe of SAO. |
| I'm a douche. Deal with it. |
| "Yes... Make me...full...with your thing Kirito..." dying. |
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| I dare you to read this and not smile, cause it's impossible. Too funny, glopping just killed me. |
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| need this in the anime ITS TOO HILARIOUS XD |
| Can someome give me a link that would work? For some reason, Minus bugs out when I click "download". |
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| Man... The imagination of Asuna and Kirito doing that.... Kind of hilarious, considering how old they are at that time xD |
| That was kinda intense though loved it at how they changed the pace of the story. I am seriously hooked to this novel, beyond doubt, the best |
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| It sounds exactly like every other hentai ever. If it wasn't SAO, nobody would care or make a big deal out of it. |
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| ITT Kids and Virgins find awesome sex "HILARIOUS ROFL DERP" Like the poster above me said, Kirito is a legend. He, unlike 98% of manga/anime's male characters, takes no bullshit and lustfully fucks the brains out of his girl [and in the first fucking volume!] I was saturated of that typical "first kissu" after ~83 chapters (or ~45 anime episodes) in most series. Kudos to Kawahara and also for not making this canon, otherwise there'd 4 times as many kids here yelling how "random and funny" that was. |
| Finally done reading this shit and... despite I've read lots of H-scenes from different eroge, I feel like I'm going to have nightmares even though the writing is nothing different from other eroge's H-scenes that I've read. |
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| The guy is shit at writing porn too. |
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| I apologise if this isn't allowed, and feel free to disregard this post if that is the case, but.. Where can I find this chapter? It's not included in any of the ones I've found. |
| Haha, this stuff is epic. That wasn't unnecessary actually. I really like this one. Thanks, Reki-sama. |
Wardog442 said: God damnit, so was 16.5 real or not? (As in made by the novels author and not fan made) The chapter was posted on Reki's website where he had posted all his SAO content before he had it published. But there was a debate over whether he wrote it or not. To the point Baka Tsuki took it down long before they took down the entire series when it gained English publication. They had questioned it being canon or whether he wrote it. But Reki admits to writing it as sort of an experimental thought. He doesn't like talking about it much. I can see why. It's rather embarrassing chapter. But he did say it officially wasn't canon. Part of me thinks his stance on the chapter is to cover his work form excess criticism and scrutiny. http://www.t-ono.net/sakura-con-2013/Reki-Kawahara-Panel-Sakura-Con-2013.html ------------------------------ On a side thought. I had a hilarious thought about the chapter as well. I was thinking "What if Sugaha was at the Hospital visiting when Kirito and Asuna consummated their virtual relationship?" She would be moping around changing his flowers and just tidying up and taking turns just sitting by the bed holding his hand. While sitting in the chair and looking across his bed, she would suddenly notice that there's a bulge under the sheets. At first she jumps up and says "what is that!?" Being curious she would awkwardly check it out. Obviously it would be with a few tsundere freak out moments of second guessing her actions. Then she finally gets the nerve to pull off the sheets and flips his gown to the side and there's his Penis poking out, throbbing away at full attention. She freaks out again. But then she notices it pulsating. She leans in to look at it closer. Just then, in the virtual world, Kirito is climaxing with Asuna. AND, in the real world, his penis suddenly explodes like Mount St Helen all over Suguha's face, hair, and chest, with some of it even going in her shocked mouth. She falls back into the chair beside the bed while being literally drenched in 2 years of built up seamen. Then, a staff nurse would walk in briskly to check on the patient cause she noticed a strong change in Kirito bio signs, She finds Suguha covered in goo and Suguha's face turns beet red and she rushes out the room with her bag and runs home. The nurse giggles and turns around to notice the mess Kirito made and giggles some more. Then she says something cute and proceeds to clean up Kirito, change his bedding and gown. Then the nurse will tuck Kirito in, lean in and say "pleasant dreams", and walks out the room. The End. |
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