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Just going to start off by saying I LOVED THE EXTRA AT THE END SO MUCH

The main story is fine, I just personally think things with Ushio should have happened differently.

"Catch the Happy Rabbit" (the name of the last chapter) was so CUTE OMFf. It probably boils down to: low self-confidence character is given attention and it's cute as fucking hell.

Five stories in one! :D

INDIVIDUAL RATINGS: (in order of short story appearance)
2/5, because the lip thing is kinda weird. 4/5, because the ending is interesting. 2/5, because it wasn't very memorable,. 4/5 for being hot. 3/5 for being cheesy.

In case anyone wants some warnings for this: BDSM, dubious consent, bloodplay, bondage, incest, implied abuse. (These mostly apply to the second and fourth story.)

It's so short, you might as well read it.

Four unrelated short stories told in five chapters.

Story one: meh

Story two: Really sweet couple + pointless stalker character

Story three: This one takes up two chapters! It doesn't feel as random as the first two. Seigo and Touma's relationship is sweet and awkward and I honestly really loved this story???

Story four: THIS IS ACTUALLY NOT BL LOL The story and the characters feel really unique, and their reactions to their situation feels genuine to their personalities. Definitely worth reading.

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RATING: (in order of short story as they appear)
2/5, for being confusing. 3/5, for the unnecessary stalker. 5/5, because it was so sweet! and 5/5, for a really great ending.