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I like drawing, so I really enjoyed this story about mangaka in Japan. That aspect was one of the best parts. A lot of it was really meta, like a story style being talked about in the manga at the same time as it was being used by the manga. The artist is the same as Death Note's, and he went less serious for this manga, which is awesome. Characters make lots of silly expressions, and the visual humour is top notch.
The story is very cliche, to the point where I was sneering while I read. Main character will become ... a mangaka so he can marry his true love!! Seeing women as a "prize" is old hat and kind of gross, and the female in this particular case doesn't do a lot on her own. Her entire career choice is done for the man she loves. It wouldn't have killed the writers to give her something of her own, instead of putting this pretty young girl up on a pedestal to be won.
The character's that do focus on their own dreams (ie. mostly men) are very well written, so it's not a total waste of time. However, the manga banked a lot on the weekly format of Shonen Jump, so it was a little painful for me to read the first half or so of it at once. Cliffhangers get kind of tedious when all you need to do is press the next button. If you have the self control, take breaks between chapters or between every few chapters. It makes a world of difference in reading experience.

Picture the typical sports manga: Main character is untalented initially, but genuinely enjoys the sport they want to be a part of, and will work hard to make it to the top!! Their main rival is an arrogant bully (but the protag might be oblivious to this) who wants to beat down the main character and show them their place because of some serious personal issues. The bad guy is also extremely talented, and find the sport so easy that it's boring.

Now flip that whole thing upside down. There you go, it's Teppuu. You are rooting for a total jerk. The ... antagonist is an alright girl. Run with it.

I am no expert in MMA, but the martial arts I've seen come off as realistic with the occasional break from probable done for rule of cool.