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Feb 27, 2024
Well, we talk about Berserk, famous story and deserve it, however we must focus on elements the story has, in Golden Age and after Eclipse..
One friend says "Golden Age and Eclipse's events are enough for story(he means the adaptation), by deleting that reversed beginning, and it will fit being excellent story, open ending", i agree with him, because Golden Age in manga has more secrets that must be solved, but here we are, we will look onto elements and compare it.
Golden Age and its major theme is about tragedy, Guts is cursed, friendships, less of unnecessary comedy and more serious events, it has excellent Actions
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and Dialogues, we can't forget or denying facts, Golden Age is great story itself, elements in its perfect place, it's called realistic, some of you may say "It is a fictional story, how is it realistic?"
I say "Fiction follows structure, so there are levels in writing fictions, or i would like to say Fantasy in case of berserk, we can see Plot, Characters' design, writing characters' psychology and levels of community, so we rate Fantasy and Fiction and review them by critical excellent points of the story, also we see events that serve story and give reader more attention, good plots, no unnecessary events don't serve story, that's all to be a story with good ending -i don't say happy-, "
However, after Eclipse, Guts and his friends face many events, i see the story had lost its major theme a bit and it changed to be less serious and more comedy, i don't mind existing it, it is necessary to change points of view Guts has, thinks more about friends he has, saving them instead of seeking revenge, but i -at least- see jokes don't fit with story case, especially after Eclipse that don't fit major theme that time.
Point two, the actions and plots became more easy, iron hand moves freely and it holds Dragon Slayer? Guts falls from a mountain with armor and sword? scary monsters becomes easy? and the most important of them, monsters watch Guts they don't attack as they are supposed, you may see them frozen for no reason for a time watching Guts in a surprising moments and react, it effects on actions get more weak than before
Point three, dialogues became chatty and unnecessary that don't build characters and make them strong, draws are more enough than some chatty dialogues
I understand the goals Miura seeks to achieve by building his fantasy and characters both, took 3 decades and half, it is a hard story to write and draw, in despite of it, facts are facts, even if Muira was alive, i don't guess we may witness good writing ending, maybe the best choice that he died before completing it -i don't disrespect his death-, maybe the best choice is left as it is.
The problem is how Guts is supposed to achieve his goal? he has no strength to compare him with God hands, the plot may become more easy that's to break realistic element
some people say "Guts may leave seeking revenge", the problem is how is it built well? revenger and savior are main themes of berserk that's built after eclipse for more than 20 years, how is the writer supposed to throw all of it for Quitting Revenge? however new plot appeared in Miura's last chapters that's about killing god hand, we saw them in Berserker Armor last holder, and reflects in his world, foolish king, in case Guts continues his fight and reach Femto, we may see unhappy ending.
The question is May we see built future event and good writing ending?
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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Feb 27, 2024
Since i made it this far, watched both seasons and movie 0, read the manga at the beginning of end Syibuya Incident, i say
It is either recommended to watch nor i don’t recommend it
It is all about hype and enthusiastic, if you are into this type that’s story is made for fan service and memes it can enjoy readers, it may be suitable to you, so at this far i can tell:-
Story and its elements all weak
The biggest problem is in action itself, it ruins the plot, existing of Gojo Saturo himself and reversed cursed technique in general ruins the plot and weakens it to
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the lowest, the plot is the conflict, it gotta be made balance that’s to show the world itself is balance, and protagonist’s sake is worth, it is gotta be made well for the protagonist that’s himself is the point of view of his world. If conflict and plot ain’t made well, what is worth to watch? In general we see protagonist and the story fills us with meaning within his journey, so if there no plot, the story is meaningless, he can pass all through without disadvantages, that’s not true and ain’t good to watch, the plot must be made well, keep that in mind.
Since the action is merge with Physical world and Invisible world(Non Physical and it is all about souls), i find it ridiculous that’s non sense conflict and fights!
You can’t effect on physical world by merely cursed techniques, it is silly, and how some non users jujutsu can fight those techniques? Ridiculous
It is gotta be balance to be good action, i kept asking friends for years how souls effect on physics, all i got is “It is japanese culture”
At least Berserk deserves some credits it is good merging with the two world, it didn’t happen in no time or the world was what it is.
The characters relations are shallow, there is no well made conflict between character, and if it is there, it is no realistic, how are there characters acting like this, and believing it is a good thing?
Characters must have dimensions that’s to be a real conflict or effect on characters’ belief, no complex relation has been shown
The most important relation in my guess is between Geto Sujuru and Gojo Saturo, and it is week, at least i have to confess that’s been ideas in Geto and Mahito, Sukuna, few dialogues those were interesting about Philosophy, i enjoyed reading them, though it ain’t making this work great.
All i can say Gege had really some thoughts about Jujutsu Kaisen, but ain’t been made well, Thanks to him i enjoyed, but it has to be made well or put in in consider what’s good and bad, Because knowing what level is it showing to you helps you to consider things better.
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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