Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint gets a 1/10 from me. Here’s why:
Repetitive Plot: The story just keeps repeating itself. Major twists are predictable, and it feels like the same thing happens over and over again.
Weak Character Development: Kim Dokja stays pretty static throughout. He doesn’t grow much, and the side characters are just there to move the plot along.
Too Much Exposition: Instead of showing us the story, it just tells us everything. It’s like the characters keep explaining stuff instead of letting us figure it out, which slows everything down.
Pacing Problems: The pacing is all over the place. Some parts drag on for way too long, while
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