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Good morning, afternoon or evening to everyone who reads this review, I hope you can understand my point of view and respect it.

Story: 10/10

We begin with a beginning already known by almost all the stories of "heroes" of the isekai genre, unlike what our protagonist tells us through an article he had in the middle of a search for resources with his friend from a village , after some mutual talks between them, one of them notices that his home is in the middle of a fire, a few seconds later our protagonist asks what one of his "heroes" is doing abusing his friend while ... he watches lying with his neck broken, a sheet later, stunned listening to what one of the 2 "heroes" who appear shortly after the incident said, says his last words.

Following the story, we are introduced to the remaining "heroes", making us understand that there is a plot between them.

Waking up thinking that everything was a dream and excited, our protagonist notices around him that he was not, presenting himself in an unusual way, his savior before him proclaims herself saying that he hates the supposed "heroes", and clarifying his doubts, proposes to finish them off.

Art: 7/10

From the first page to the last presented in this first chapter they are acceptable and clean, there are no drawing errors, on the subject of fights it is good, both architecture and structure are visible, it is noted that there is better work on some pages where they show psychological or emotional problems.

Character: 8/10

Lute: our protagonist, coming from a village and killed by one of his so-called "heroes", healed and informed about his situation, is persuaded by his savior to put an end to said hogwash.

Lydia: Lute's friend, abused and murdered or vice versa, before the tragedy it is implied that she preferred our protagonist to a flashy "hero" as in typical stories.

Kylt: 4th “hero” introduced and captain of the 9 heroes mentioned.

Honda Yuuya: One of the 2 "heroes" who witnessed Louis Crawford's abuse of power and who warned him about his disaster.

Louis Crawford: Pretentious womanizer with anger issues, first "hero" introduced in history.

Flare: Unlike the other "heroes" featured, she has a positive attitude and seems like she tries to be emotionally supportive whenever she comments despite being aware of the group's situation.

Imerda Piñata: mocking and graceful, she disgusts Louis and makes fun of his situation in the face of what happened.

Anastasia Melokva, Rord Sendiger and Sijou Yukiki not much is known about these characters.

Don Will Dead: he is one of the 2 "heroes" who witnessed and said nothing in the face of Louis's aforementioned abuse of a villager.

Enjoyment: 9/10

Honestly, I loved the work, the points they present are something that I find interesting to play and something that is unusual in works, I simply loved it.

Overall: 8/10

In general, both the script/story and the drawing seem adequate for the direction of this present story, with respect to the problem that the work had (designs), it seems to me that I understand the problem although I expected the work to continue, I hope it can be fixed now which is something that had potential.