Mar 1, 2024
First of all, this is a good ass manga. If you are interested in "OP Protagonist" thing, defo give it a read. The characters are great, the humor is actually really good, and the drama is mostly solid. But, idk if this is a nit pick on my part but I found this manga has some massive flaws within itself as well.
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I think the main plot of this manga actually sucked. The side stories were actually much more interesting and much more believable. The story got dragged on for so long, which made me respect the main storyline less and less. Oh, Knife
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got saved because of this; oh Orca became a god because of that... This dragged on for like 200 chapters. Which is just poor writing.I believe the main villain of this manga should have been Youngjeoung, as her motive and actual powers were much more interesting. But what did the mangaka used him for? To add the show another plot convenience so that the manga could go on for another 100 chapters. Naga not force healing her even though he is so scared of damaging anyone was just so stupid. And as I said, she had a fascinating motive as well. But I guess nearly every manwha is like this, they drag on for so long.
Also, the scaling in this manga is just so off. Orca looks like 10x the strength of anyone in the verse. I get it, Naga is scared of killing people but he can deal with people without killing them. And what drives me mad is they actually showed him using these skills when the plot allowed him to, but other times he just forgets that he can hold any people in anywhere he wants. I get the gem thing or whatever, but if you think about it he can still keep people in a certain place with that power.
You know what would have made sense instead of this? Making Unlucky part of Knife. With that you can actually explain how Knife got so lucky so many times, and it would have made unlucky a relevant character. With her position in anime, he just looked like Naga's pet that he felt pity for, which was stupid on its own cause Naga never really reacted this way on other abused characters. Again, another poor writing.
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So in conclusion, amazing concepts, not that good of an execution. If you get triggered easily by logic mistakes in a media, read this with caution :)
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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