The start is your average power fantasy but then it becomes just boring, the mc is too op and quite obnoxious, also the condition for his skill are way too convenient, and most of the times are actions he would have done regardless, just serves as a slight justifications for how much of an assholes he is.
The plot it’s quite messy, it’s fine to not explain everything cause maybe they’ll be discovered in the future as a plot point but here there are so many things that you just have too assume makes sense, the word building it’s also not clear at all, and things
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