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It's good. The art is good, the characters are unique and well written, the story is wonderful. But I do have to say the love triangle is annoying, but that is just me because I find love triangle unnecessary, cliche, ruins a medium and I don't like em. I have dropped many mangas and animes because of love triangles and that shows you how actually good this manga is. There are not a lot of shoujo manga that I have stayed through the love triangle but when I do, that just tells you how amazing of a shoujo manga it is. I am not ... going to review it's every point because I can't and I don't need to. This is the type of story that is simple that I would just tell you to read the first couple of chapter and see if you like it because the whole manga does not twist into a psychology horror. It will stay a romance slice of life while progressing the story until the end. The Art is pretty good and could be mistaken for a shounen manga if only shown a page of the manga to someone who doesn't know anything about this manga. That is not a bad thing because I personally not fond of the typical shoujo art style because they only abuse the screen tones for an illusion of detail and they normally forces you how you should feel through the screen tones like how a cheesy sitcom forces you how to feel with it's horrible background music. That is not something a good shoujo manga do. In the end, I enjoy this manga and this review is very relaxing to write after I angrily wrote a review for that horrible, horrible manga Koimoku. I give this manga an 9/10.

This piece of dog shit tried so hard to be a deconstruction of the "mangaka" genre that it ended up sending a bad message to aspiring mangakas. Seriously? Manga need boobs to sell? Fucking annoying characters with almost no development whatsoever and a rushed ending.

First off let me tell you the good part of the manga. The art.... That's all the good the part in this manga.

The story: Okay, in the beginning, I was hooked. An artist struggle to make his own art, that shit has never been explored much in this type of way. A very dark and sad way. I am a sucker ... for sad and depressing story and the first couple of chapter is just that. And then it became a stereotype harem and people unreasonably harshly punish the main character. That is not to say the main character is good, No.. He is fucking atrocious as a character. I will get to that later. Then the ending happened. Oh dear fucking god. That ending is fucking rushed and it is like a 12 year old wrote that ending. It is a happy ending however. But in the end, I'm not happy. Am I happy? Nah.... Fuck that shit.

The character: So, this is where they did horribly, HORRIBLY WRONG.. The main character, whatever the fuck his name is. He doesn't develop.. AT ALL. He has been through shit, a whole fucking lot of shit at that and he still cries like a little fucking bitch when a baby peed on his shirt. The development is THAT. FUCKING. BAD. And that red haired chick, her fucking moral is wrong and the way she acts is EVIL. She is the embodiment of fucking, corrupt corporation that only cares about MONEY!! And the fucking manga tried to portray her as a "good guy that has been through a lot" and it failed and the fucking moral it thought does not apply in real life. At least not in my fucking country, fucking Japan and their low birthrates because of those FUCKING 2D GIRL LOVING SHITHEADS!!... I'm sorry Japan. I'm just really REALLY angry because I saw this shit on my fucking list and wanting to vent out. On chapter what-ever-the-fuck, the main character is clearly BLEEDING OUT OF HIS GOD DAMN FUCKING NOSE. SHE DOES NOT ENCOURAGE HIM TO STOP FOR THE SAKE OF HIS OWN FUCKING HEALTH!! The fucking slut is pointless. The loli chick is fucking ANNOYIIINGG. From professional mangakas, they CLEARLY KNOWS WHAT ASSISTANT MEANS AND WHAT THEY ARE SUPPOSE TO DO.. The fucking black haired chick is suddenly a love interest?? What?? They are trying to go with the "unexpected love interest" but it failed. Go read Onani Master Kurosawa for a good example of fucking "unexpected love interest", you god damn pieces of filthy shit. The other characters are not that bad but not really good either. The antagonist, the arrogant fuckhead, the novelist, the guys from the manga factory, all of them are not bad but also not good. Except the chick who explained how the company is not wrong for making this huge studio for one manga. It is not good. It is highly impractical and overall expensive and I couldn't see the company gaining profit by selling a cheap book that took 100 dudes to make and is still not as good as what one fucking guy can make.

In the end it still is a classic, you know? I couldn't bring myself to hate it forever... O WAIT, I FUCKING COULD.. FUCK THIS PIECE OF SHIT AND FUCK ANYONE WHO SAYS THIS FUCKING MANGA BROUGHT A GOOD FUCKING MESSAGE.. FUCK YOU.. GOOD BYE AND THANK YOU FOR READING THIS REVIEW..

Okay.. This manga is not the best. At all. But there is one thing that this manga does absolutely right. That is character relationship development in romance. It does it in the most basic way but that is not a bad thing. What I meant by that A WHOLE FUCKING LOT of romance in media generally don't even have the slightest development between characters. This however does it in the most textbook way possible and could be an example of how to do character developments right.

Let's talk about other stuff first.

STORY AND WHAT-NOT :

Okay, the premise is quiet unique. There aren't really any anime and ... manga that revolves around this type of thing. At least i don't think there is.... Is there? I don't fuckin' know BUT WHAT I DO KNOW, is that it is unique to me. I haven't really read anything that revolves around a classroom with all of the students already got a romantic partner. BUT THAT'S NOT THE PREMISE HERE, AL RIGHT?

The premise is that there is a dude who basically never had a girlfriend and is the only one left that is in the classroom that doesn't have a romantic partner and you all go "GEEZ WHAT A FUCKING FAG" and all that sort BUT WAIT!!.. There is a transfer student (of course there is. What school life manga nowadays doesn't have at least one transfer student?) So this girl don't have a boyfriend either and you all expect them to get together and shit, right? NOOo!!.. THEY DON'T JUST DO THAT OKAY?? What am I doing here describing the whole story, I'm not a story teller, I'm here to review that shit. So let's review that story and what-not.

So, the main story itself is good, but not anything special. It's not like it is the second fucking Koe no Katachi or anything. It is the same level as Kawaisou or something like that. The side stories like how this one girl is an otaku and when they discovered it they just accept it is kinda generic. There are other mangas that does the same thing but it doesn't really hurt the story or anything like that. The thing that hurt the manga is the way they respond to her. From what I remembered, the way they responded was REALLY fucking cheesy and that is one of the biggest flaw..... That's about it really to comment about it in terms of story........... Let's talk about the art.

The art is also good but not anything special. It is like the normal art you get on your normal generic doujinshi....... That's about it to talk about that too. Now let's talk about the characters.

The characters are where this manga really shine. All of the character are lovable and like I said before, develops properly and really well. The characters are also unique and stuff like that y'know? I have no idea how to explain the characters very well unless I read it through again but I really can't be bothered honestly. So, .... Let's talk about the character development.


Okay here is what the manga did right. They did the development really really well to the point where it could be a reference to other writers on how to do character development right. Since it is really short, it tries to make the development the best it could on such a short amount of pages and chapters. What I meant by that is that nowadays, people keep dragging the romance and the characters ended up not developing at all. Something like Nisekoi. The story keeps dragging on and on and on and ONANDONANDONDANDONDANDOAAMNDONDANDOANDANDODENAODNA UNTIL IT ALREADY BEATING A MUSH OF MEAT THAT IS USED TO BE A DEAD FUCKING HORSE.. The common knowledge that writers are suppose to have when making character develop is this: Hate each other -> starting to like each other -> like each other -> date. What Nisekoi and other drawn out series is doing is: hate each other -> nothing happened -> the girl becomes a huge tsundere -> (Insert 200+ chapters of filler here) -> END. THAT IS NOT HOW CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT SUPPOSE TO WORK!!


That's about all I have to say about this manga........... Bye I rate 10 10- ign go buy it NEXT YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAR



In all honesty, I rate this a 8/10 just because of how good the character development is. That's all. Bye.