I overall enjoyed this manga, but I had a few gripes with it, that got in the way of me really being able to think it's amazing or anything.
Reading this, I felt that some bad choices were made with page layout especially in regards to bubble layout which destroyed the flow of some conversations on page, but they also had some really good moments on other pages without much dialogue as a result of better paneling decisions. I liked the slice of life-y part of it, but I think the overall pacing of the greater narrative was a bit awkward.
Some of the standout
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