Oct 20, 2014
Well this is my first review, I hope you can find it useful.
The set up for the story is great. The Characters are well drawn out and have, well, character. Well, keeping those in mind, lets continue to the ratings.
Story: 1/10
As i said previously the set up is great and it even continues to be great for a while, then the worst thing that could ever happen to a story happens, the author forgot the main plot. The guy set up to be the main character is no longer relevant and is replaced constantly.
Art: 7/10
As far as art is concerned it's actually well drawn.
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Characters: 9/10
The characters personalities are independent and radiant while making you want to learn more about them. They just don't have much in the way of development. Also when they do develop it happens so fast that you cant tell what happened. With all that in mind the characters do start off really strong so thats why i gave this category a high rating.
Enjoyment: 1/10
There is none. unless you are a masochist that loves getting let on into a great story just to have your hopes and dreams crushed infront of your very eyes.
Overall: 1/10
If they had stuck to the plot the author could have made and easy 10/10 story but they didnt and i regret to inform you that they killed their own story for fun.
Recommendation: Just keep looking for your next good read and forget you saw this page.
Reviewer’s Rating: 1
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