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Only 5 chaps so far, but I' really looking forward for this.

The story still using some generic isekai and waifu witch as backbone, but the author did a very good job making this manga different.

In summary, this is what you'll have if you combine Elaina and Saya no Uta. It's not the best or the most original, but it's still a good manga to look forward.

The art did a good depiction of monstrosity of the characters. Not exceptional like Berserk but not so bad that you fell sick to read it.

The major plot hole is about how the MC got isekaied, some detail are too ... forced and not well explained.

First: I think this is work of good amateur. A good amateur who know how to make a lovable main character despite lacking skill to make an outstanding story.

The best thing about this novel is the main character.
She's an absolute cute awkward introvert who's lacking common sense about social skill which make her an adorable character. Her thought, action, and sometimes unexpected quotes is the one make me love this novel.
She got OP power but her personality isn't like those usual heroic isekai protag.
The second likeable character is the MC's only friend. His personality is more shown than the rest of the characters. But not ... good enough because we can see that his only purpose is to be the MC's friend.

On the other side, the story is the one I find lacking.
The good thing is: this story didn't copy all the "RPG bundle pack template" like Adventure Guild Class system etc. Only medieval, magic, level, and demon lord. Still templateish but at moderate level.
The plot is so rushed that it only capture the main events, skip few monts, main event, and so. The author skipped most the "micro development events" which where we the reader can get absorbed by the character.
The plot fail to 'catch' the reader to love the characters from simple daily encounters. While those small events are the one that make us see all the colors of the characters. Instead the plot is rushed which is not eventful as the plot is so linear already.
The plot is so brief that it look like a rough draft of a better novel.

This is a manga about magician. Not the RPG magic using mana etc, but the magic trick you see in TV shows using deception and illusion.

The main selling point of the manga is the magic tricks. It draw the reader's curiosity how the MC will pull out his acts. The method used in the tricks are well explained, so the author really did their research. How the author execute the visual is also did a good job.

The downside is the plot and the character. As I mentioned, the selling point is the magic. Not the story.
The story so far (chap 10) is the MC still ... succeeding in everything he does.
The character also too bland.
The MC still a gary stu whose plans and tricks always work. His only special trait is his chocolate addiction and his love to magic, that alone isn't enough to make 'human personality'.
Because many real life magician use lots of women assistant, so does the MC. The side girl character also hasn't show enough personality and purpose other than being the MC's side kicks.
And the church antagonist is the worst. Too template-ish. They are the church so the author expect us to just accept that they hate magic.
They are just pure evil (radical, murderous, lecherous, etc), so we'll just hate them. We just want them to be removed from the story as soon as possible because they are too repulsive. So far no back story, no justification etc which should make even the worst bad guy is loveable and readers will eager to see how they act.

You don't need the antagonist to be a degenerate. 2 faction fighting with conflicting interest with both has their reason. 1 is the protag and the other is the antag is better than just making the protag is gud while the antag is an evil degenerate.

This story is generic OP 'otome game' isekai. If you're tired of such isekai, I doubt you'll love this.
OP MC? Yes
MC doing grinding? Yes.
Discriminated MC due to her power? Yes.
People hating MC due to idiotic other reasons? Yes.
Idiotic "capture target" princes? Yes.
So far the story is taking the same route most isekai manga go (chap 5 at this point)

The good points of this story are:
- The MC. As a character, I find her quite interesting as she's the "don't give a fuck" super introvert type. She trying to finish conversation with as few words as possible is cute in a way. In the end, she ... might be what introvert people find relatable. And yes, she's cute indeed.

The art is good, but not extraordinary.

When I see the 'otome game' concept, I thought it's another milked theme. But turn out, it's not bad.

Story:
No need to explain. The MC reincarnated to the game he played. So his knowledge of the world is what make him OP.But the author did not just threw a random trouble at him so he'll just overpower it and somehow succeed in 1 or 2 chapters. We can see his struggle to survive the nonsense world, and we're happy to see him win despite we knew he'd win after all.
The world build is fit for me. Not too straightforward, nor too complex, We learn more and ... more about the world through the story flow, instead of everything is simply thrown to us by a whole chapter of narration.

Character:
The author make quite good antagonist creation. The role of each charac already decided either prot/antag by the MC's knowledge. But then we see the underlying background of them that make it clear why they're doing that. Despite already knowing who they are, the characters not just do as the MC thought as the MC interfere with their story.
Although indeed there also some antag with completely trash personality whose only purpose is to be defeated.

Enjoyment:
This manga is basically comedy, nothing too serious here. It's good and funny to see how the MC succeed each trouble.

This story is about Yoshida an office worker living together with Sayu a runaway teenager in his apartment.

This is quiet interesting and enjoyable story for me, as we delve into their life how two unrelated people coexist and how they reflect their relationship each other.

Story:
The story focus on how Yoshida and Sayu live and interact day by day through usual daily activity. Then it deepen as living together like they do became more difficult as time passed. There also times where the character simply pondering their relation with other characters.

Art:
There are illustrations once every few chapters so we can grasp how the characters look like ... how the scenes happen visually.

Characters:
This novel use first person POV mostly from Yoshida POV but sometimes shift to other characters. Therefore we can follow that the character actually changes overtime as they reflect and react to the changes as the story goes.

Enjoyment:
The appeal of this novel in my opinion is about how 2 entity: an adult male and a high school girl actually live together in a society that only think such relationship is always a lewd one. We can see how they have to face that reality thus consider how to resolve their problems.

First thing for those who watched the anime before: Novel story is completely different from the anime.
Rikka and Yuuta are a pair of chuuni and ex-chuuni. Some background stories about them are different but some are same.

Story:
The story took us to Yuuta's school life and how he got involved with Rikka through daily encounters. The story is in Yuuta's first person POV focused on how they met, interact every day in school, and finally became a lover. The story is quite straightforward without many sudden plot twists.

Art:
Sadly, there are very few illustrations so it quite hard to grasp the story visually. It's up to your ... imagination how they are doing things. But the splash images isn't disappointing at all.

Character:
We can see in Yuuta's POV how he doing every day and how he feel about every encounters. Character developments aren't drastic ones, as there are no very eventful conflics.
The main attraction of the characters I guess if from how the people interact with a chuunibyou girl who see the world from a different perspective and how cute she is.

Enjoyment:
I found it very enjoyable because it's very relatable. It just like we experience how we met and fell in love with someone, in this case a chuuni girl.
We'll see how a pair of chuuni found each other, involved with each other, fell to each other, how they spend time as a couple with their own way, and how they resolve their problems as a couple.

First of all this story intended to people who:
- Love isekai with magic and stuff
- Long for peaceful quiet life theme
- Love loli girls
If you prefer serious complex story, epic battles, deep character development, and balanced demographic characters. Like avatar TLoA, naruto, etc, then I guarantee this isn't you cup of tea.

Story:
This story focused at serving an utopia to people whose life is similar to the main character (corporate slave who yearn for a peaceful slow life).
Live in a quiet house by the grassy hills near a friendly village with her family simply do simple chores everyday happily. That's all as conflicts resolved very ... quickly in almost clique-ed way sadly.

Art
The drawing is pretty simple. Not very detail but still beautiful. We can still able to grasp the character's feeling and atmosphere.

Character:
There isn't much about the character sadly. The MC is an OP witch whose wish is only to live peacefully. Her friends are girls whom she met as the story go, in sadly not really interesting conflicts. All the MCs are demographically too focused to cute girls to the point it's very noticeable.

Enjoyment:
The story in my opinion only appealing to people I mention above. The attraction of this manga basically are: beautiful magical isekai world, cute girls, peaceful life in the beautiful isekai.

The art and the atmosphere is pretty good for me although not very detail but it really give forlorn feeling which is matching with the story.

The main downside for me is it is unknown why the cleaners agree to kill those people without even told yet that they are going to be killed if they don't.
It's like hey i can control people now and i'm told to kill certain people then let's do it.
They aren't even cruel or psychotic people to begin with, even azure know the consequence of disobeying by experience, not because someone told her.