I'm really into these short anime/manga love stories
It's indeed a original idea(I don't know if there was another similar before)
About that one-shot, I have to say it's pretty good but too short.it does not exaplain why/what is happening with the first song,
certainly needs more development
Also there's a lack of character development, like the white-haired girl and the protagonist are just like a background character, and somehow it feels like it's a common event in someone life
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