Dec 15, 2018
this is not gona b a 'professional' review
the story and characters had potential, and the art was good too, but seriously the way this portrayed girls that were literally like 12 as sexual objects was gross to the point where i was uncomfortable, and that whole thing with kaitos hangup about his sister and crush on the nurse just became really weird and gross like the dude literally says she's just like his sister I.e SMALL AND CHILDLIKe and then shes his love interest? hella gross bruh
The world setup, the island, the altered and the powers all of them had etc. the ideas
...
were all great, but why be a pervert its just so gross and unsettling and BOOOOORING like i get that its a common thing for art to be 'fanserivcey' but i rlly had no need to c this much bress and booty
I mean aside from the blatant sexualisation of girls like LITTLE GIRLS MAN CHILDREN, in terms of character development (im only on chap 68 writing this) this falls short too. 70 chaps is more than enough to have good depth but it just doesn't quite hit. don't get me wrong i love fighting and action and sicc superpowers but it kinda loses its magic for me when theres not enough focus on character depth; what is it about these characters that is supposed to make me care? (did i use that semi colon right i rlly dont know)
the male characters were alright for the most part, i was rlly into jins story and everythin at first but it was kinda ruined for me with the rest of this shit
what else was i gona say, oh yeah writing female characters solely to kill them so that some guy has a reason to b evil.................like come on dass jus lazy as shit
Oh yeah also that trope of these lil old men characters being straight up pervs unable to be to talk to a women without getting their rocks off, if u have more than two braincells its not funny or endearing its just nasty n annoyin
yeah so if u wana write a good story basically dont be a pedophile who takes any excuse to draw naked child like girls
thts all folks peace out
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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